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LackeDragon — Lost in swampland :Page7:TF:
Published: 2009-06-26 19:48:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 3563; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 42
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Je marchai vers l'étang le plus proche. Comme attiré par lui. J'enfonçai ma patte antérieure droit à l'intérieur, puis me laissa tomber dedans, et me détendis. On est tellement bien...chez soi. J'avais pourtant une arrière pensée comme quoi je n'était pas né ici. Mais ma mémoire ne pouvait pas me tromper, je suis né et ai toujours vécu ici.Il maintenant temps de se reposer, avant de repartir, contre-attaquer la prochaine manigance des humains.
*Quelques pas plus loin, deux Lézards souriaient, contents que leur nouveau sort est marché. Ce nouveau venu, fera un parfait Lézard.*
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I walk towards the nearest pond. As astracted by it. I plunged my right paw, then, let me fall into, and relaxed myself. We are so good... at home. But I had this background thought as what I didn't born here. But my memory can't be wrong, I was born and I always live here.
Now, it's time to take a rest, before leaving, to counter-attack the next trap of the humans.
*Some meters away, two Lizards smiled, glad of the success of their new spell. This newcomer will be a perfect Lizard.*
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And it's the end of my first TFsequence^^
I hope you liked it.
CRITIQUES AND COMMENTS REALLY NEEDED TO HELP ME TO PROGRESS^^
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Comments: 40
l love it when a human comes along in a place like this, calls it disgusting, and suddenly becomes one of the natives and lives like the monsters, happy. Especially this one, although I can see lot's of grammar errors, that's understandable since you're main language is French.
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Thanks.
Yeah grammar... xD
But my english si better now, I should read it again and see what can be corrected.
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Seriously, though. Make more.
...I wonder what happened to this guy in the end?
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"Seriously, though. Make more. "
I will if I can xD
And hum, what do you mean by what happenned to him "in the end"?
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Mmm, I just get all curious when it comes to TF's. So about 3 questions here.
1. Did his memory get wiped and replaced or just the feeling that he was ever human?
2. How'd he do fighting the humans?
3. How'd he do with the other lizards?
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1. Memory get wiped and replaced
2 and 3. That's up to your imagination
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Mindwipe. So he pretty much just became a different entity? Less fun, but still. Personality seems like it didn't completely leave, and it was the water that the 2 lizards cast a spell on?
Sorry, I just get really interested in TF comics. xP
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Wll yeah the water was cursed, but not only this pound.
And when I said the memory was replaced etc... the subconcious, it's not
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Ah, so anyone who steps in it becomes a lizard. Cool, cool. Anyways, I loved the part where he just gave away his humanity to his fake memories just like that. His personality hasn't changed, but the way he sees life, his alliance, they have. And on the first page he thought the place he was in was a hideous place for monsters, and now he's bathing in the waters like a lizard. I'm just kinda the kind of person who likes that sorta thing. Sorry for wasting any time you had. xP
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No problem xD
I'm kinda bored right now xD
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Boredom, eh? Let's write up what happened to this guy for fun, then xP.
Don't know why, but I've been abusing "xP".
...Oh my god, the emote is dead!
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Anyways, this guy got up and... found a female lizard, who he loved.
The female lizard did not love him back.
(I wonder how these guys reproduce if they lose their... you know, when they transform)
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They logically not lose their tool lol
TFed with the body
But for sure I wouldn't show that even if I could
So no problem here xD
Anyway, he fell in love really fast ^^
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And then everyone died. The end.
Oh wai- that's no fun.
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Meh. Anyways, good job, keep it up. Longest way to say it, probably.
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Nice sequence, is your first language french? your grammer at times is off, but I can't complain
Apres trois ans en francais, je ne pas le tres bonne grammaire
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lol, I'm english, 3 years in french though, love the sequence
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He looks really happy there! You have a skill to capture expressions! Pose looks natural and realistic.
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Ah? You really think I have this skill? '^^
And for the pose, at the strat I didn't think it will be natural and realistic looking like that X3
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Yes you do, your character shows different feeling in every pic! 
I can imagine someone lying on a pool and leaning his arms like that towards edge. ^^
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Not bad at all for your first attempt. Would ya mind if i pitched ideas for a second?
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Well you know my answer
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Comment for the entire sequence:
Excellent. Magnifique! Draw more. I want to see more sequences like this. I know it's tough to do, but the results just cannot compare to single frame images. A transformation is a progression of images, not a single image.
You will get better with time, but for my tastes, you're doing just fine and don't really need to change.
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Well, thanks for all your help
And I'm glad that you liked it
I will do more sequence, I just need to find a great idea x)
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