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angelgirl4553 [2013-04-11 21:48:44 +0000 UTC]
this is a good story..... i love et
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Lance-the-young In reply to angelgirl4553 [2013-04-13 08:33:07 +0000 UTC]
There is no Part 3. There was a sequel done some time later, but that's not quite the same thing.
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chucknorris86 [2012-05-14 03:37:33 +0000 UTC]
You know what shes right her little (older) sisster is a little spoiled brat,and her older (yonger) sister is nice and well....very under standing with others,man do I wish I would have an older sister.Yeha now that would be nice,and her age would be 16-17 years old,so she would be 2-3 years older than me, because I turned 14 on 4/1/12
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SkirtedandDiapered [2012-05-01 20:19:34 +0000 UTC]
Love it! She behaves like I would.
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Lucian-Santana [2012-04-11 20:03:22 +0000 UTC]
While there were a few points where the grammar could've been a little better, though still not as bad as some other ones I've read, I found this story to be very enjoyable. You did a pretty good job with this one. I'll be happy if you ever decide to take this one up again someday.
Thank you for sharing this well written tale with us.
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Lance-the-young In reply to Lucian-Santana [2012-04-12 09:54:12 +0000 UTC]
Gladja liked it so much, especially enough to favorite it. ^^ Yeah, writing style wasn't that good, though. Wrote this one waaaay back.
Funny you should mention that, I actually did a sequel to this some time ago. The Grammer is better, I'm happy to say. Part 1 is here- [link]
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Elmo-Fox-Trot [2010-12-15 15:43:44 +0000 UTC]
wow thats a good story u should do more in the nex one like have tim change her and wat not
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ToddlerNaruto In reply to Elmo-Fox-Trot [2010-12-24 16:24:24 +0000 UTC]
Even better, have Tim wear a diaper around her so she's more comfortable about having to wear them for her incontinence issue.
By the way, just me or has reality changed to the point where Erika thinks her incontinence is normal?
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ToddlerNaruto [2010-12-14 12:51:21 +0000 UTC]
So no plans at all to continue the actual story?
I know about the spin-off stories and comics, but.....
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Lance-the-young In reply to ToddlerNaruto [2010-12-17 03:20:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, I did do that Marie sequel to tie up all the loose ends. ^^ But I could do aonther story with Erika in the future. Who knows?
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ToddlerNaruto In reply to Lance-the-young [2010-12-18 14:10:52 +0000 UTC]
That would be awesome, and I forgot about that side story, I need to read it.
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TurtwigChampion [2009-12-17 02:43:25 +0000 UTC]
That perfume makes me think of Triforce water. Hey, is this story continued?
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Triforce water is water that has had a Triforce soak in it. That adds strange effects to it giving it it's name.
EX: Triforce of Time + Water = Triforce water that has an AP, AR, Age Swap, ect. effect.
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Lance-the-young In reply to TurtwigChampion [2009-12-17 21:57:32 +0000 UTC]
I've done quite a few comics about little Erika, which can be found on that link in the Author's Comments. Plus a friend has been doing a comic adaptation of the work.
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ShaD-23 [2009-11-03 08:12:15 +0000 UTC]
This is just getting weirder and weirder(but in a good way). I hope you do pick it up again someday.
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DKN117 [2009-07-14 00:10:35 +0000 UTC]
Part 3! Please make a Part 3!!
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Lizuka In reply to DKN117 [2009-10-18 14:17:02 +0000 UTC]
Since it's been mentioned in his journal and all, shouldn't hurt to say - there's a sequel in progress.
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Fatdude210 [2009-06-11 04:43:24 +0000 UTC]
wonder what the allien wanted as a favor
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Fatdude210 [2009-06-11 04:41:00 +0000 UTC]
the meanest people became 3 the shy girl became incontinate and the nicest person got older. so does it depend on their personality?
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Lance-the-young In reply to Fatdude210 [2009-06-23 06:37:53 +0000 UTC]
Nope! Depends on where you spray it. Although you can say personality instead if you prefer. ^^
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23catlover In reply to Lance-the-young [2009-10-23 04:01:02 +0000 UTC]
ok then lance what about the smell of the perfume?
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booyah344 [2007-07-31 05:56:30 +0000 UTC]
thats it no more but i got to know what happens next
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Lance-the-young In reply to booyah344 [2007-07-31 06:43:59 +0000 UTC]
Heheheh. Weird you should bring this up. A friend of mine is doing a sequel. He's not sure when he'll be done, but he hopes it'll be soon. You can watch him and wait for it to come. His page is here:
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booyah344 In reply to Lance-the-young [2008-11-12 23:43:23 +0000 UTC]
reply thanks for the notice sorry bout being late never knew i could check replys
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Lance-the-young In reply to kamali-chan [2007-06-15 03:19:23 +0000 UTC]
Heh. A sequel has been bouncing around my head for a while, at least a little one....
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warcraftguyy [2007-02-12 01:00:53 +0000 UTC]
You should continue!! Hehe...
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Lance-the-young In reply to warcraftguyy [2007-02-12 05:46:00 +0000 UTC]
Heh. I briefly considered showing their date, but dun think I will.
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Zelda-Fan-Maniac [2006-06-16 19:52:41 +0000 UTC]
You know though in the story you could put a guy using it one another guy to make him 'smell fresh'. Just a thought.
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Lance-the-young In reply to Zelda-Fan-Maniac [2006-06-15 14:52:16 +0000 UTC]
Hmm.... That'd be interesting.
THe thing is, I'd like to write about the perfume being used more, but Erika's so sweet I can't see her doing it. Although I imagine Marie's gonna work extra hard to find it.
I would like to write about the date between Erika and Tim, though.
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Zelda-Fan-Maniac In reply to Lance-the-young [2006-06-16 01:29:01 +0000 UTC]
Well some one else could find it and then it starts going around and people geting sprayed. Plus, is the efect caused by where you spray it on your body, or does it depend on the person?
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Lance-the-young In reply to Zelda-Fan-Maniac [2006-06-16 01:38:22 +0000 UTC]
The scent depends on the person. The effect depends on where you spray it.
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Zelda-Fan-Maniac In reply to Lance-the-young [2006-06-16 02:43:20 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see, so what would happen if you got srpayed twice, hm, food for thought.
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Zelda-Fan-Maniac [2006-05-25 16:34:09 +0000 UTC]
haha funny. I like it.
If I had that perfume I'd yuse it to domanate the univers. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
or maby just to go to the movies for free.
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