Comments: 29
pineberry789 [2016-06-12 02:10:01 +0000 UTC]
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Very, very creative! I love the colors and shading. I like how you represented Dovewing as a wing, Lionblaze as a Fire, and Jayfeather for his feathers. You added some traditional art into it, and 'Manga Cat'. Your design for the cats are wonderful and its unbelievable wonderful. The shading is amazing, truly. I love the tools you used for the cats. The background is OK, I think it might be very bright, not that I don't like the light but you could of added some background shading. An orange light for the flame would of been appealing and showing. I like how you showed Dovewing smaller, I had always though of her a soft, small, and warming character. I really like this art, and think its a realistic and soft. Your control of the pen is perfect, another tiny thing I think could change is how the feathers are blurred. It looks like the feathers don't relate to Jayfeather. I was thinking they couls seem as they attached to him like Dovewings wing. I hope you enjoyed drawing this, but I loved writing this Critique. This is the best artwork, and keep on drawing!
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LeFABtasticDomino In reply to pineberry789 [2016-06-12 02:14:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you soo much for your input!! It really does mean a lot to me ^^
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LeFABtasticDomino In reply to gravyb0at [2016-06-11 05:31:23 +0000 UTC]
aw my heart. this means so much to me. THANK YOU
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gravyb0at In reply to LeFABtasticDomino [2016-06-11 06:02:03 +0000 UTC]
Np <3
FOR REALZYS THO (( what is realzys ))
Your like an idol to meh
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JoItiks [2016-06-14 17:43:13 +0000 UTC]
this is so beautiful omg
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CuorediLupo [2016-06-14 13:57:32 +0000 UTC]
you are improve a lot!!! ^♡^
I adore the effect!
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SkysongGaming [2016-06-14 04:45:26 +0000 UTC]
BEAUTIFUL <3
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SkysongGaming In reply to LeFABtasticDomino [2016-06-14 05:20:26 +0000 UTC]
I used to be able to draw cats
But because I'm so used to drawing humans now I cant...
WHY ME!??!?! UGHHHHHH ;-;
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SkysongGaming In reply to LeFABtasticDomino [2016-06-14 16:18:02 +0000 UTC]
XD I guess were sorta in the same boat
You said you can draw humans on your commissions sheet, and I can't draw cats XD
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MultiLefaiye [2016-06-11 21:02:45 +0000 UTC]
Ah, this is amazing, omg!! You've DEFINITELY improved a whole lot; I love the details and the references to their names and such. Seriously, great job!
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Aowna [2016-06-11 12:04:15 +0000 UTC]
It looks amazing! <3
You've improved so much, good job OwO
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Cold-Rising [2016-06-11 05:13:05 +0000 UTC]
awWW YUSS oncE AGAIN thIS sO beautiFUl ahHH <33
so much improvement man, I can't believe it! ;0
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AngelGanev [2016-06-11 05:02:13 +0000 UTC]
beautiful
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