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Published: 2017-12-22 16:58:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1295; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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And so it begins, the very first real page of my story Taiduo, all in one long imagebecause I wanted the flow of this as I planned it.
I hope you will like reading this story!
You will recognize the single elements from other postings I believe.
This will live now in it's own folder where only the finished pages go.
goto page2-panel1 here fav.me/dbwm127
This comic now is published on webtoons www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/β¦
the first page is up, the next will follow on Tuesday
I would be happy to see you over there
Story and art are under German copyrigh by Linwelly 2017
created with DS4.10, rendered in Iray, postwork Gimp 2.8
all materials from the DAZ store, altered or made by me
do not repost outside dA without my written permission
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Faving so that I can come back this weekend and read from start to end. Instead of commenting on random images from the sequence.
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For too many people who lives in the colony, there is many place and a very clean environment.
I have expected, that the place is more dirty,oversettled and with a technic who is old and on the edge of her capacity.
Interesting that you go a different way. That open many speculations, why there are seemingly too many people life in the save zone. It seems, with that high technic and plenty of room, it should be possible to fit them all in.
On the other hand. The best way to control people is, to make them belive, that obedience and hard work is the only way to live a save life
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There are several layers to consider here (one being that I need to learn to render in layers for more crowded scenes 
For one the areas we've seen so far are actually rather empty, there is only so much to do where we are now. So we will come to more crowded places in some pages (the taiduo quarters). Making them look crowded is one of my big challenges..
Then the really limiting factor is not the space though, but the supplies of fresh air, water, nutrition. I guess it would be a good idea to include some scenes, where that topic will be adressed, I have to think about that.
And we will come to places that are less maintained as well. You might remember the Sub Taiduo Sub-concept
and the repairshop of Master Xiu Character concept ZhuXiu
Certainly that control aspect in not to be underrated either
Thanks a lot for your thoughts, this helps me finding things that are obvious to me but not to others
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Thanks a lot, it's supposed to hook people, I hope that works.
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I would say it does. Especially the trick with letting the girl open her eyes at the end. So menacing.Β
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Wonderful,girl! I canΒ΄t wait for the next page!
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Thank you so much! and thank you for the 
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Awesome!Β Its come together very well!Β I look forward to seeing what happens next!
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Thanks a lot, The rendermachine is getting hot, this will need a lot of time
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Ya you don't want to burn up the machine!Β My husband makes a comment every time mine starts heavily using the fan lol.
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I will try, I'm glad my GC is doing fine with the workload so far.
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yes we do, but the going will be slowly, I will be rather busy with work over the holidays and away for the new year, so I might pick up only in the next year again
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