Comments: 25
beachcutie [2011-07-03 04:50:32 +0000 UTC]
2nd**
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Mez10000 [2010-10-21 19:54:14 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely amazing piece!
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Saria-Rogue-etc [2010-10-10 01:31:34 +0000 UTC]
This is an interesting peace. I really enjoyed reading it! I love the different ways you described everything. Great job!
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ChibiStarr [2010-10-07 21:21:47 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, that was a unique story, and a rather original death. I love the way the narrator talks, sort of ironic and such.
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Halatia [2010-10-07 15:17:55 +0000 UTC]
I love the tone, the concept and execution (on both the style and character death front). Well done!
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kallia-goldenwings [2010-10-07 06:52:03 +0000 UTC]
hmmm makes me wonder what would happen at my own how would I be remember this is some thing I will never get to know but I will always wonder about in the back of my head
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RandomLamb [2010-10-07 05:51:28 +0000 UTC]
I like the storyline concept.
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GentlemanAnachronism [2010-10-07 04:32:20 +0000 UTC]
This is a bloody good piece. I love the whole concept of it, and the way the idea of the woman's beauty is expanded on and expanded on until it reaches the description of the funeral. Just...wonderful.
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