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Published: 2009-10-25 16:18:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1550; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 7
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How can you keepF U C K I N G
me when I am
B E G G I N G
you to please
S T O P.
How can you
L O V E
me when I am a canvas of
B R U I S E SΒ Β
inflicted by your
H A N D S.
I thought you were my
P R I N C E
but it turns out you're
N O T.
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you're very welcome! :]
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wow, this is...jesus. it's short and sweet and blunt and raw and i really like it
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aw, i'm really glad you like it.
thank you. xoxo.
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you're welcome. <3
oh random sorry but i'm in this ongoing argument with a friend of mine, i think x's are hugs and o's are kisses but he thinks the opposite. which is it?
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i don't know what he thinks but you're right.
that's what "xoxo" means! so ya better tell
him he is so very wrong. haha.
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lol THANK YOU. finally, i'm proven right. x)
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haha glad to be at your service.
XD
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i like to think so, haha.
thanks.
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How can you Continue to express your Love, when Iβm a canvas of Bruises created by your Lust?
How can you Continue to think youβre Pleasing me, when Iβm Begging you to please Stop?
I thought you were my Prince to sweep me off my feet-
Turns out, youβre just monster that devours me in my dreams.
just my version that came to mind atm..
no need for change tho
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I love this, haha.
But both your version and hers are both well written.
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thanks 
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oh my god-your version is amazing.
thanks so much for sharing that!
yeah i decided not to change anything
after i saw how many people seemed to like it
the way it is. i don't even want to-haha
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yeah it is, and thanks! :]
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this poam really hit home. you did a wonderful job. It amazes me how a "simple" poam like this speaks so loudly.
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Wow, saying it like that is really effective!
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love the format.
this isnt about a personal expirence, i hope?
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thank you! :]
nope, not an personal experience.
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As a rape survivor this speaks so loudly. Well done
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you're so strong. 
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thank you, lovely. your the second person to have said that, haha. so do i.
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Completely amazing.
It's so true, which makes it so sad.
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oh wow, thank you!
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You're welcome!
And yes, thankfully it's not true for all.
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I adore this piece. The way you used the capitalization and spacing is great.
Great work
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thank you, that means a lot to me. :]
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I like this poem. You show emphasis with the caps locked words. Makes the reader see them better and see the true intent of the poem.
I have seen poems like this where the bold words are also another poem in disguise.
Good work.
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