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Published: 2012-02-23 21:59:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1129; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 22
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Chap 22: ---
Chap 23: March 2012
Chap 24: April 2012
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Volume 2 : TO KNOW WHAT LOVE IS [link]
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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto
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Yes
I have to correct this Chakra !!!
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XD Chakra!
p.s. I KNEW it!!! Those guys were eviiiill
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Of course they are !!
The ninja world wouln't be funny if everybody'd be kind
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XD I suppose not
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By the way(Btw): Gaara's mad face is SOOOOOOOOOO!!! SEXY! I love it!! AWESOME JOB!
UUHGH! I just wanna eat HEMMM!!!!!!!!!
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Ha ha ha ha !!
It's what I just wrote answering to your comment on the previous page
We think the same !!!
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HAHAHAA~! Really!? That's so awesome! ^U^
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ooooooooooohhhh......I see you using the onions! YAAAAAYY!!
That's my face too! AAAAAAHHHHH!!!! SUNAKI!!!
And instead of saying "cut the arm of the girl." I mean it's not wrong! Not at ALL! But it's just easier the say "cut the girl's arm." 
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I love this icon. I'm often like that (inside 
So "cut" or "cut off" ? I wonder which one is the best...
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either way 'cut' is to separate something.
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OMG... Poor Susu anyway
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yYEAH! IM SO GONNA CRY!
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Cant wait!
(sitting at computer holding Gaara plushy) <3
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Next page almost done. Maybe tomorrow
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Yuuuuuuuuuuussssssssssssss! <3 Lolz Soory, im really hyper right now....
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lol...LOVE the story so far ^^! Just spent 4 1/2hours reading THE WHOLE THING...(from the start XP) got to say, i don't like Naruto (srry...too complicated for my taste XD) But I am LOVING this ...umm...doujinshi? fan-fic comic? OC story? idk what to call it....BUT LOVE IT!!! X3 Keep up the great work Sunaki! And if u ever want some OC ideas, me and my sorta gf make them up all the time.....=^w^=
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I'm happy you love it. It's a lot of work and knowing people appreciate it is a good pay 
4 1/2hours <- is an interesting information
Now I wonder who's your "sorta gf" 
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umm...i think so...not sure if she put stuff up lately thgh....i'll ask i guess^^
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"Off with her head....erm arm!!" kick Thier ass gaara!!
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If u bastardz even graze my sempai ill kill u all!!
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DAMN IT!!!!
Good english. Chakra was mispelled though. But that's it.
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"Cut her arm off!" is another option.
Gaara!! What is taking you so long!!!
GO!! SAVE HER!!! SAVE HER NOW!!!!
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"Cut her arm off!" is maybe the right way to say it 
Gaara is thinking the harder he can but he can't find a way to rescue her
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Yea, ikr... Hmm...it's going to take like, 3 more pages to rescue her, isn't it?
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Or an other chapter
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Noez!!! Noo!!! This is like the real Naruto or DBZ!!! Twenty freaking episodes just to make a freaking kamehameha!!!!!
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Don't say that 
Gaara won't make a kamehameha
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If that guy maces even a scratch on Sunaki I`m going to draw a 3 paged commic in wich I kill him slowly and painfully ... It will take me maybe 8 hours but I swear I`m going to do it !!! 
But βmister Kazekageβ was so funny XD XD XD
huh... I bet in the next 1 Gaara will say something like βWait...! I`ll get that (I dont remember that duy`s name ... but Gaara does so he will say it ... XD ) but please ... dont hurt her...β
orr... he will control the sand in the ball 
I`m happy the pages are comming faster than usual !!!
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For the scratch it's too late, she's already bleeding a little
You can draw comic, I'll read it with pleasure
These guys don't have names so you can't remember them
Gaara can definitly NOT control the sand in the ball. He'll have to find an other way to save her
pages are comming faster cause I'm in holidays
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Another way to save her, eh? Summon the sand worm!!
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Are you sure you will read it... it wount be a good look... I was writing abot that Fuugi... guy I dont remember his name... it was something with βFβ ... I`m wishing you HAPPY HOLIDAYS !!!
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Yes I can read comics
I like to read the comics of people I know
Today is my last day of holiday
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I know you can read comics but ... do you like bloody ones ... 
last day ... ouch... it feels awful ...
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NUUUUU LEAVE SUNAKI ALONE DX
And to kill the mood, here are some corrections:
"Chakra can't go through this shield"
"It seems mister Kazekage doesn't take us seriously"
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Thank you for correction
And sorry for my friend's comment
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So what... you`r not mistakeless too... every body makes mistakes... + when you write it on a computer it`s realy easy to make a mistake
and with you`r coment you didnt jusy kill my time ... you made me think you`r an aurochs (I`m not sure if that is the right word for the guy who learns something like a song but forget`s it in a week...)
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Heh, I wasnt intending to be rude XD
She even asks for help with her english at moments!
If you dont mind though, it's You're
Damn I'm such a grammar nazi XD
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XD ok ... I take everything back then ... sorry for everything I wrote ... ... back then I was in a bad mood ... so again ... I`M VERY VERY VERY ..... VERY VERY VERY SORRY !!! I hope you accept my apologise ...
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Dun worry, I'm not the type to get hyped up about these things XD
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