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PotatoShojo [2013-06-09 22:27:12 +0000 UTC]

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First of all you choose a great character, scene (that's kinda personal...) and principally a great time to upload it (since Gray's death is still 'fresh' in everyone's mind)
I only miss a couple things, like i think you should've done a more intense shading OR highlight.
Since she's crying and in my opinion the atmosphere isn't intense enough (i'm not sure if you get what i meant but, a intense shading means a darker place or expression).
Or since she looks like surprised and her head is up, i think a highlight at any side of her face would fit the drawing.
Overall that's a great artwork ^w^

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Xbeing [2014-02-23 23:08:04 +0000 UTC]

WHOAWHOAWHOAWHOA..... WHEN DID GREY DIE?!?   D: did I miss something?

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BrigadierBenchpress [2013-07-14 06:49:50 +0000 UTC]

poor juvia! the pic looks so cool, though!

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gokugirl2006 [2013-06-09 22:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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