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lydia-san In reply to Tobyfredson [2016-10-09 05:06:11 +0000 UTC]
Awhh Idk, when I first understood the message I felt like "I should've known this earlier. I know something was wrong with my life but never found out before this."
Perhaps there are many ppl feeling the same thing too. I hope.
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Tobyfredson In reply to lydia-san [2016-10-09 06:05:05 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, there are a few people that feel this way, unfortunately, most of them get the picture really late in their lives.
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Tobyfredson In reply to lydia-san [2016-10-27 20:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Don't blame me but I think we aliens are developing telepathy
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lydia-san In reply to Tobyfredson [2016-11-03 01:03:33 +0000 UTC]
Then; where's my oxygen helmet...
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Tobyfredson In reply to lydia-san [2016-11-03 09:13:23 +0000 UTC]
It's in my office, you forgot it here before you left to explore space, but don't worry, the storage is full on helmets, however I know yours is the only pink helmet around and I noticed a crack so I had to patch it up. I don't think we aliens need those to live in space anyway, but it suuuure makes us look cool~! Go shine that pink to the universe!
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lydia-san In reply to Tobyfredson [2016-11-06 05:39:55 +0000 UTC]
lol pink helmet with green ears... wait... that sounds like doggie's helmet *woof*
trololol that's for patching it up! I owe you my life and oxygen! lol.
To beyond the stars!
Don't forget to drag Evis341 and Astral-Chan
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Tobyfredson In reply to lydia-san [2016-12-13 05:53:14 +0000 UTC]
You know, I wasn't sure at first, so I was just looking from a distance. *Goes down there with you and stays till you get better.
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Tobyfredson In reply to lydia-san [2016-12-28 22:22:13 +0000 UTC]
*Opens up a book full of stories C:
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Tobyfredson In reply to lydia-san [2016-11-07 23:31:04 +0000 UTC]
I already made my mind on a team of angels but I wonder what would that make Evis? XD
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Astral-Chan In reply to lydia-san [2016-11-06 13:34:56 +0000 UTC]
yeh you guys better not forget about us! We complete tha squad! XD <3
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Tobyfredson In reply to Astral-Chan [2016-11-07 23:29:51 +0000 UTC]
Lol yeah, Toby's angels but what would that make
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Tobyfredson In reply to Esu341 [2016-11-07 23:30:09 +0000 UTC]
Lol ask Geki to do that!
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Esu341 In reply to Gekigengar [2016-11-08 00:51:40 +0000 UTC]
no as in don't like it xD?
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Ra2a [2016-08-07 15:23:45 +0000 UTC]
That is so cute and it bears so good meaning
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Ciro16 [2016-03-21 15:55:46 +0000 UTC]
I could've sworn I commented on this piece, but I guess not. Soooooo...
I Understand this completely, It actually reminds of something Stephen Fry said,sweatpantsandcoffee.com/wp-con… and really All we need is someone who is willing to put up with our depression and help us out our darkness by actually delving into it to pull us out.
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lydia-san In reply to Ciro16 [2016-03-27 13:42:39 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaaaaaaaaaand that is absolutely right!! Perfectly said!
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Ciro16 In reply to lydia-san [2016-03-28 14:06:28 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand that's why I love Stephen Fry! Well... that and he's fucking hilarious.
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lydia-san In reply to Ciro16 [2016-04-06 11:11:46 +0000 UTC]
Hahhaahhaa why hilarious?
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Purestrongpoem [2015-12-06 18:18:20 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful, great comic!
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NichigoTheCat [2015-03-12 07:46:16 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful :')
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QBeagle [2014-12-23 18:06:45 +0000 UTC]
I love the use of cute characters in conveying this message. For me this is a reminder that bad things happen, and that's ok we all get through them and it will get better. It doesn't at all take away from the painful undertone if message about pain aren't done in gritty realism.
I don't know if it was intentional or not, but the colors you used on the characters and world I found very interesting. The folks up on the cliff are done in brighter colors; blues, reds, and yellows that stand out from the brown earth. The two girls at the base of the cliff seem to have dingy or earth colors in their outfits. I liked how this emphasized the difference between working through pain and being happy.
Overall the artwork supported the story. As another commenter mentioned there were a few foibles in anatomy, but given the art style I think most viewers will forgive them. The grammar problems are a little tougher, I'm not sure why but I am more willing to overlook art problems than grammar ones in a comic. The mistakes didn't eject me from the story, they caused a slight hitch in the flow as I read it.
I do want to mention that some of the backgrounds had inconsistent colors. For example in the first panel the sky has a gray color to it, this holds true in the first panel we see the girl in the red jacket (where she says "Poor you... that must be hurt"), then in the next panel (where the "I don't think I can. It hurts too much" speech balloon is) the sky is now very blue. Also down at the base of the cliff the background behind the girl in the pink shirt seems to bounce between brown and yellow.
A few times I had to pause and double check the outfits to be sure I knew who and where I was looking at. Making these backgrounds consistent and with distinct colors might help keep things clearer.
It's still a fantastic way to present the message, excellent work!
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Nanditap [2014-12-06 04:36:30 +0000 UTC]
That Is a very sweet way of giving the message
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Nanditap In reply to lydia-san [2014-12-06 13:56:13 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome
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LightArcIndumati [2014-12-04 20:45:16 +0000 UTC]
How wonderful...I understand exactly...how this girl and you feel...for I have my fair share of struggles.
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LightArcIndumati In reply to lydia-san [2014-12-05 13:34:33 +0000 UTC]
Indeed...
Struggles are hard, but having someone to support you and help you rather then being a judge and a hypocrite is always, ALWAYS helpful. Such...a true servants of light...
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