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Published: 2018-05-12 19:59:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 880; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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All her scars (except for snake bites) come from her trainning as a warrior under her motther Zira. And "helping" to train Kovu.All her "floof" is actually her mane and not excess fur.
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Your character looks more like Scar than anyone else.
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Look Lyon this is becoming a needless fight it really is. All you have to do is fix it. Your kinda just making yourself look bad here and there is an easy way to avoid that.
She's trying to tell you that the design while it holds quite a few similarities your making the story almost exact.Β
So here I made a little substitute for you.Β Not hard to draw, not hard to edit. Simple and not over the top. It's looks like what you have with a few differences just please alter the story a bit and use a more simpler design.Β
You're causing more harm then good here.
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Does Zira have a Pride Lander nose? At best this could work for one of Shar's biological children. But it simply won't work for Shari herself.
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Scar's family have pridelander noses. I'm trying to help you here your only going to cause more issues for yourself If it's more scars you want then add more but you don't have to keep the story the same or the design the same. I can't help you if you won't even try.Β
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Shari did not inherit the Pride Lander nose.
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Neither did Rhoadie's again your missing the point entirely.Β
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I said Zira. Zira doesn't have a Pride Lander-nose (although members of her group do; but SHE doesn't)
Zira is not Shari. And Shari is not Zira.
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Wish I could accept this, however she lacks her scars so must decline.
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Ryan your kinda making this difficult like really difficult to be on your side if your not going to try and make some kind of acception or willing to make changes your going to have a lot of issues with this character it is a clear rip off of Rhoadie, just because you add a mane to it doesn't make it any less hers. You have the same history and such your only going to make this worse. Add more scars if you want but don't make this hard on yourself.
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Not saying I can't accept a compromise, but still that lion doesn't quite work for Shari. I'm sorry, but nice try.
She is not a rip-off. How many people have daughters of Scar anyways?
How's it my fault my favorite animals just happen to be floofy?
Give me some time to type up her "canon" backstory.
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The proof is right there. I'm not exactly friends with Rhoadie so you can't really take that into account I'm just looking at what I see. It hasn't anything to do with her being fluffy you just happen to be usaing a lot of similar tastes Rhoadie happens to use.
I'm not saying the lion looks like Shari but that's the point she doesn't look like Rhoadie like yours does either. All I'm saying is think this through your going to become a rather bad figure on DA if you continue to act out this way.
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There are similarities yes, but that's it.
Both happen to have same parents - which if they existed together in same universe would make them sisters.
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You're missing the point entirely. There's more then just similar parents.Β
There's similarities and then there's just copying. There are too many similarities for it to be a coincidence do you not understand that?
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Don't forget you guys aren't the only ones out there with a Real Life.
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That has nothing to do with anything here Ryan. All their asking you to do is fix your Oc and fix "Her" design. Why is that so difficult for you?
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Because Shari is meant to look like her father?
Before she could get a relationship of sorts with her mother, Zira was already too far gone in Madness. Even her siblings, Shari's relationship with them isn't that great. She just always had a better "bond" with her dad.
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Took two screenshots of Scar and picked the colors from them to blend, then picked from the blend for her mane - oops, main colors.
I think the issue here is akin to the Simba-Kimba here, though there are obvious differences even between those two. They're both lions, they both lose their father, they both get visited by there father's ghost...
Other than both being lions and cubs, I don't really see much similarity in the characters designs themselves. Kimba has ear tip markings, Simba has ear rim markings. Yes both are an ear marking, but they do not match.
Like with us it just so happens that both of our chars happen to be "maned" lionesses and daughters of Scar and Zira.
Kimba-Simba thing.
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You are focusing on the wrong issue. They are a lot more similar than Kimba and Simba.Β
I am disappointed you took all of Rho's QUALITIES and gave then to Shari.
Daughter of Scar and Zira
Abused by Zira to train her
Heavily scarred and excessively fluffy
Takes in/kidnaps Cubs
Has/had gigantismΒ
Adores Scar
Look I'm not here to argue with you. I'm telling you that there are other ways of having a daughter of Scar that's not a copy of him or my sona
For example has a daughter of Scar. Her and Rho are polar opposites. She can tell you in better detail why I still take issue with what you didΒ with Shari.
Again, not so much your design (even if it can pass off as a Rho-scar son/Rho/Scar) as it is her backstory and such. People are upset you used Rho's for your sona.
Idk what else to say
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So a million people have Daughter of Scar OCs.
Shar does not kidnap cubs. Her children are those lost, abandoned or orphaned.
The gigantism - I simply made Scar accidentally too small.
A bit scruffy but not "excessively fluffy"
Doesn't obsess about/on her father to the extent that Zira does.
Trained by Zira - that's kinda a given. Zira isn't just going to exactly let one of her children do whatever.
Scar and Zira are her Biological parents, I cannot change that part.
Using Rho's story: I didn't though. That's the thing. Let me type up Shari's timeline of specific events from when she was a cub...
here, this page of yours
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if Shari were in that situation, she would NOT have done that.
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