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SephyNox [2010-08-21 23:29:07 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I love the depth and wide-angle effect in this shot. The highly saturated sky--perhaps too saturated--and flag contrast the dark, and desaturated brickwork. The angle of the sun reflecting off of the wire supports on the right-hand side are a very nice, though, subtle touch.
I like the flag being in the shot, however, I do not feel the direction and angle of the flag compliment the symmetry of the photograph. That said, there are some things the photographer doesn't have complete control over. A High Dynamic Range Image would have really brought out the brickwork, and added some much needed exposure in the sky behind the bridge.
It also never hurts to do some slight touch-ups in Photoshop, for example, sharpening, color balance, and saturation. It would also be interesting to see this photograph in a high contrast version. Very good work overall.
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macgerahty In reply to SephyNox [2010-08-22 03:46:54 +0000 UTC]
I'll take that all into consideration. I've never approached HDR, & I'm ashamed to say I'm not sure how to go about it. But I'll consider it. I'll try to re-approach the photo for a slightly different vision, & thus, maybe a different impact.
Thank you.
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SephyNox In reply to macgerahty [2010-08-22 04:59:49 +0000 UTC]
I had no clue what to do when I first tried HDR... now, most of my work is HDR. I'm glad you liked the critique... I was trying to be as constructive as possible without being... harsh or sound condescending. I've seen a lot of angry critics, and not many useful ones.
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macgerahty In reply to zenco-kun [2010-02-15 06:46:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure what to use the points for, but I'm glad you like it. Hopefully I can keep contributing and help this group establish itself...
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