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AzariRelioux [2014-03-10 17:48:10 +0000 UTC]
The outfit designs are really top notch and I honestly can choose between the three due to the practicality of each one - the first serving as battle wear, the second as causal, and the third as formal and special occasions - but with her fighting style in particular, you could have her keep all three and use magic to switch them out, like re-quip magic from the Fairy Tail series,
Hair style wise you can go with either color - making it blond to have her stand out more or blue for a more subtle impact, but it'd be nice to dye some random strands in her hair opposite color (i.e. blonde hair with blue strands or blue hair with blonde strands) this way if you do choose to braid it, it can have those strands decorating the braid; as for the styles themselves you could have the same way you have the outfits and set them for what would suit the situation best; or just whatever she's in the mood for that day.
For the "Arcane Gloves" you could consider having the ball of mana inside change color (Blue, Yellow, Orange, Red and Grey) each color serving as how much fuel she has left for spells.
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Ninjawolf9 [2014-02-25 02:10:05 +0000 UTC]
To me, the dark blue hair does remind me of Lucina from Fire Emblem: Awakening with one of the costumes. I'll go with a blue-yellow mix of hair with straight long.
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Ninjawolf9 In reply to Ninjawolf9 [2014-02-25 02:12:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh and I do like the jacket one. For the name... Reshira or... Liliana; Levi for short.
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AKA-Wilfred [2014-02-07 03:06:35 +0000 UTC]
Ahh I really like the second outfit and I thought of the name Lucinda or Evangeline when I first saw her.
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Kiera-sama [2014-02-06 17:00:57 +0000 UTC]
I like the second outfit, those boots are cute by the way, and the blonde hair and braid. as for a name, when I saw the character, my first thought was Freya. I hope I could be of some help. On another note, is the story on here or FF.net?
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Mad-Revolution In reply to Kiera-sama [2014-02-06 22:50:47 +0000 UTC]
Well the story technically doesn't exist yet, but when I finish plotting and writing it down, its gonna be a web comic on here and maybe anywhere else I can spread it to.
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Kiera-sama In reply to Mad-Revolution [2014-02-07 04:26:23 +0000 UTC]
Could you let me know when it is started? I'd love to read it. I've read some of your other stuff and I really liked it.
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Ryua [2014-02-05 00:26:12 +0000 UTC]
From my experience, wavy long hair is more fun to draw. You can always braid it or unbraid it as youΒ need, of course. (Having long hair, I braid mine regularly to keep it out of the way, especially at night) I think black/blue would be nicest.
I'd personally prefer outfit#2 if I were in combat, but #3 is really pretty.
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Dagger-Drop [2014-02-04 14:44:03 +0000 UTC]
I prefer the blond wavy hair but if she's going to be very active i'd go with the braid as it's more practical. Outfit wise i like 2 and 3, but girls change their clothes a lot so whatever you prefer is fine. Some possible names: Clara, Clair, Layla, Mira. I like those names and the sound elegant to me.
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KagamiNoHikari [2014-02-04 14:43:25 +0000 UTC]
the consept looks very amezing up to now!
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Gaioumon [2014-02-04 14:11:47 +0000 UTC]
For the costumes, I like the ninja one, but you can just cycle through them. Girls do change their clothes a lot.Β Β For the hair, if she's going to be in a lot of action then I would go with braided. When you say elegant, I think of blonde, but really I don't know on which hair color.
Some progress is better than none. Keep up the good work.Β Β
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cloneex [2014-02-04 04:49:50 +0000 UTC]
I have to agree with FuryouMiko about the braided hair being the most practical. The third design for her clothes looks a bit overdressed to me, but maybe it would be okay in some scenes? I personally really like the first design with the braided blonde hair.
The detail on the fingers of the gloves looks cool. Maybe the lines could continue on to touch the mana ball on the back of her hand, or somehow connect in her palm? This probably depends on how the gloves actually work, so it could be fine like it is.
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powermenz [2014-02-04 02:33:33 +0000 UTC]
i like the last black Β hair thing and the first clothing. it seems like a good combo.
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SnivyGurl [2014-02-04 02:31:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I really like that first outfit (all of them are pretty good, though)! I also really like her with blonde hair; I personally think that if you go with blue, it will be a little too monochromatic. Plus, as you said, it does add a nice balance between blue and gold.
As for names... She kinda looks like a Melanie to me. Sorry, that's all I got for now. XP
Anyway, I really love what your doing with these designs. All the clothes look cool, and I especially love this chick's Arcane gloves; those golden patterns on them are a brilliant touch. Can't wait to see where you go with this stuff, Mad!
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FuryouMiko [2014-02-04 01:38:36 +0000 UTC]
Looks good.
If she's an action girl, one of the braided hairstyles makes a lot more sense. Long hair is an absolute bitch to cope with doing normal household chores, let alone while fighting.
I like the rightmost outfit best, but as you say, impractical. How about she wears that with her hair down if she's somewhere she can relax, then switches to the leftmost outfit with a braid when she's travelling or adventuring?
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FuryouMiko In reply to FuryouMiko [2014-02-04 01:39:52 +0000 UTC]
>> As for the name, Sigrun is the Walkure who brings victory. I've always been rather partial to it.
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AriaHope [2014-02-04 00:16:27 +0000 UTC]
She looks awesome!
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