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Published: 2018-01-07 23:48:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 380; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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fanart of Lup from the adventure zone!Related content
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Hey, I'm from ProjectComment and I wanted to give you a few pointers.
First thing that comes to mind is the art style. It's clean and all the proportions look like they belong except for maybe the eyes. They seem a bit high up on the head. The shading and lighting are good and you did a good job at differentiating the textures. I can tell the texture of the clothes from the skin, hair, and glasses. The use of color is nice also. The lighting on the knuckles seems unnecessary and doesn't match the type of lighting used in other places like the nose. Her lips look a little rushed, like how the lower lip kinda pokes into the upper one. Her necklace and her bracelets also seem a bit rushed. Her pose seems natural but doesn't convey much personality, which is a nitpick, but I think that more expression on her face and form would be helpful. I'm working on this myself. Some details are missing or confusing, like how one hand has the nails painted and the other doesn't. Her pose overall is good and looks natural and as a whole, I think this drawing is good, just a couple things here and there. Hope this helps.
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thank you so much!! I'll make sure to work on polishing my details a bit more. <3
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I love the humor and power you achieved here simultaneously. Not an easy task. Also the color choices are unusual and delicious. Well done.
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thanks so much!
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Hello I'm from Project comment! Check it here:projectcomment.deviantart.com/
Β Okay so having googled Lup and I'm assuming that you tried to be accurate. her skin color appears to be slightly off. It's should be more brown but here it is more reddish than it should be. Her Hair color is way off It's blond when it's actually supposed to be black. The clothes are pretty neat for casual wear. The purple and pink compliments each other and her off skin tone well. The pose is good if a bit bland and her neck looks a bit long but otherwise the anatomy is excellent. The shading is also pretty gorgeous.
Β The background is a bit plain with only two stars. I think it would have looked better either just plain with out stars or with more of them. Because I think it would have been better it just seems like you tried only half-way. But the color does contrast well with Lup, being blue to her red.
Β Overall It's very well done with just a few flaws that are minor but are noticeable.
You can only go up from here.
I subjectivly rate it 8.5 out of 10
Just gonna put my reference to critique here if your interested:theadventurezone.wikia.com/wikβ¦
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hi! Lup is actually a character from a podcast called the adventure zone- since it's purely audio I can't see what she looks like and I didn't use any reference, I just drew her based on the image I had formed of her in my head.
Thank you so much for your critique, I'll continue to work hard! <3
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I'm sorry if I was too harsh
I was just going by the pictures I could find
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oh no you weren't at all, don't worry!
If I was trying to draw based on the image from the wiki I would definitely had some issues with it as well, pfthaha.
I was just clarifying (also sneakily plugging taz some more because it's a great podcast)
again, thank you for the comment it was very thoughtful and well put!
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Hey man I like to help I'm gonna to do it to someone else because I really need to get some feedback on my art.
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Lineless, And fully shaded! this is quite a piece of art,Β love the back ground contrast <3
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oh gosh, thank you!!
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This is perfect and adorable. I love how you drew her!!
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