Comments: 57
TwilightButterflies [2009-01-14 03:11:17 +0000 UTC]
I think my favourite part of this is the hands, that would have most definitely taken me forever to do, like years. The way it stands out against the green background is phenomenal. I really Like it.
the only thing I notice with that is that the fingers on his left hand seem disconnected where they bend, you might want to take away just the very edge line where they connect. Also the only other thing that I notice is that the chin and his right side of his face are somewhat to....edgy... pointed I suppose..
sorry, but I red lined it. [link]
I tend to do that when things say advanced critique. if you want I will take it down, I just wanted to make it easier to show where I meant.
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TwilightButterflies In reply to MahouKiyoraka [2009-01-15 06:33:06 +0000 UTC]
yeah, the link didn't copy right... -_-
here:
[link]
and its not that red lined per say, just so you know what I am talking about.
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susu-chan [2009-01-05 11:28:48 +0000 UTC]
very nice <3 I like the way you colored it x3
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mrforder [2009-01-05 01:29:16 +0000 UTC]
I like this a lot, but I think the background isn't that great. It really doesn't set a mood. Also, his headband should be a different color, such as blue.
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MahouKiyoraka In reply to mrforder [2009-01-05 20:54:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
And I appreciate your critique. The background was quite an after thought, so I wasn't really thinking about it x.x As for the headband... Lavi is a character from a manga, and green is the color of the headband.
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deimon-devil [2008-12-11 00:08:13 +0000 UTC]
look its RABI...(i know people call him Lavi too)
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Linitaa [2008-11-17 22:39:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, I haven't seen this before ? oO Or maybe I didn't know Lavi yet...
Anyway, I love *o*
You did a great coloring too !
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hanabi-kun [2008-11-11 09:31:42 +0000 UTC]
Kyaa I lvoe Lavi n_n! He is really looks like the original!
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Omnicenos [2008-11-10 00:36:24 +0000 UTC]
Dunno who he is, but I like the pencil work. Very smooth laydown of color. Highlights in the hair and sleeve are particularly nice.
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MahouKiyoraka In reply to Omnicenos [2008-11-10 00:44:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much; he's from D. Gray-Man.
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Omnicenos In reply to MahouKiyoraka [2008-11-10 00:48:16 +0000 UTC]
I read that, silly, I just haven't seen it! ^_^ Might though, hear it's good. Anyway, you're welcome!
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Bloodysnow-chan [2008-11-09 18:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow, it looks really great! Love it!^^
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Xedex [2008-10-19 14:43:25 +0000 UTC]
This pic has such a happy feeling on it!
I like the background and colloring a lott!
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Xedex In reply to MahouKiyoraka [2008-10-20 16:32:40 +0000 UTC]
Your most weclome^^
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SchokoPanda [2008-09-23 09:11:12 +0000 UTC]
Waaah!!! Lavi!!! ^-^ Sugoiiii!!!
I love it! >.<
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reho [2008-09-22 20:47:43 +0000 UTC]
great colours,very expresive
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MahouKiyoraka In reply to Tamao [2008-09-22 00:22:12 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks so much!
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