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makorralok — Hero Part 3 ~A Makorra Fanfic~
Published: 2012-05-13 18:14:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 3834; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 16
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Description ~*~Previously~*~

He was surrounded by 9 benders, 3 water, 3 earth, and 3 fire.

It was just Mako against nine benders.

He was all ALONE.

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The benders looked tough. Unbelievably strong. And nine of them? Could Mako possibly take them all on?  He was just one firebender against nine brawny benders.

'Okay. You got this, Mako. Stay calm." Mako got into his fighting stance. He crouched down a bit and raised his arms up to his face while scrunching his hands into fists. 'They are just some low life thugs. You've dealt with these kinds before.'

"Well looky here. Today must be our lucky day, boys! Bahahaha. First, we score a big payday from those stupid kids, and now we have the avatar right here! Served on a silver platter and delivered to our home, Triple Threat Triad territory," sneered the earthbender.

The mention of "stupid kids" made Mako even angrier; it reminded him of his brutal childhood. What if they were talking about Scoochy?

The benders began to walk forward towards Korra, acting as if Mako wasn't even there. Without a warning, Mako leaped into the air and threw a flaming kick into one of the waterbenders' face. She was thrown back several feet, smashing into the stone wall of the alley.

"Well well well. Seems I underestimated you. I even gave you a chance to run and hide like a good little dog. Must I put you on a leash?" The earthbender reached out and snatched Mako's scarf. Within a heartbeat, Mako twisted the man's hand until he was on the ground howling with pain.

"Don't. Touch. The scarf," Mako said menacingly. Before anyone else was able to stop him, Mako jammed his knee into the earthbender's neck. He was out cold.

"Oh boy, you are going to regret that!" yelled the firebender as he charged at Mako.

Mako sidestepped with such speed and thrust the firebender to the ground. The firebender rose back up and lashed back at Mako by elbowing him in the face. In retaliation, Mako grasped the firebender's collar and rammed his foot into the guy's stomach, hurling him backwards.

'Great. Three down, six to go. These guys were easier than I thought.' Mako was starting to get cocky.

"C'mon, guys. You scared?"

As soon as Mako said that, things began to go south. The benders learned from their missteps, and they all attacked Mako at once overpowering him.

Two waterbenders came at Mako instantly. They sent two blasts of water rushing towards him. Mako crouched down swiftly to dodge the first blow, but he was hit by the second blow that pushed him backwards a few feet.
It was now Mako's turn to counter attack. He started to hurtle as many fireballs as he could at the multiple targets, but it was only able to knock down one earthbender to the ground.  A firebender sent a blistering punch on each side of him, and his face became scorched.  

"Yaro, go get the avatar," a waterbender demanded of one of the firebenders.

A firebender approached the knocked-out avatar, but Mako sprinted towards him and kicked him in the head giving him a concussion.  The waterbender who gave the order shot an orb of water to Mako's chest knocking him backwards into the jab of a firebender.  

He was already struggling just to stay standing up. He was fatigued and already had some bruises, scratches, and burns.  His legs were wobbling, and his arms felt weak.

One of the earthbenders pounded the ground with a powerful stomp sending Mako into the air. Mako used the fact that he was airborne to his advantage. He dropped a fiery kick into the waterbender's face, but she countered with a jet of icy water.  Mako dodged swiftly and with cat-like reflexes, but he was stricken by the earthbender's unexpected burly blow to his spine.

Mako was shot to the ground. The pain was too much. Unbearable.
Excruciating.
Agonizing.
Tormenting.     

He was bloodied and bruised, and he felt as if he could be knocked out at any moment. Could he possibly run away?

'No. This can't be like before. Not like how it was with mom and dad. My parents didn't die for me to grow up so weak. That was supposed to make me stronger!' Mako was trying to find his strength.  Slowly, he started to get up onto his scraped knees. Now it was time to get up to his feet. Almost there.

Without a notice, the firebender came and punched Mako in the face, knocking him down once more. Everyone just snickered at him.

Why couldn't Mako be stronger? All of his hard work. It couldn't go to waste. It just couldn't.

He looked inside himself, trying to find whatever source of power he had left. What could keep him going? He searched within. Deep within himself.

There it was. This is what he needed.

He needed this power. The power to keep on going. The power to fight back. Not like before, when he was just a kid. Now, there was no excuse to back down. He could beat them. He could.

He just needed that little push of motivation. What was on the line? 'Korra… Korra…' That's all he could think of. This wasn't going to be like before. It COULDN'T be like before.

'Why can't I just help the person that I-I… I lo-… I can't. I can't just leave Korra.
No.
No.
No.
NO!
No more backing down! Come on, Mako! Get up!'
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Comments: 79

Evelent [2013-02-26 03:53:49 +0000 UTC]

Does this continue???? *o*

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makorralok In reply to Evelent [2013-03-06 10:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah, sorry for the late reply, I haven't been on dA in a very long time. Sadly, I decided to not continue this fanfiction... >____< Sorry!!

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Evelent In reply to makorralok [2013-03-08 22:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Ahh shucks,well it's ok,atleast I got to read some of this beauty right? It's all good!^^,but if you ever decide on continuing this(though i'm pretty sure you wouldn't want too,I probably wouldn't either if I were gone for awhile),i'll be sure to catch up ahah.

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katnisskorramako [2012-07-24 22:16:48 +0000 UTC]

It's been almost 3 months now... Is part 4 ready yet ???!!!!

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makorralok In reply to katnisskorramako [2012-07-25 20:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'm so sorry, but I decided to drop this fanfic......

Uhmmm, I think that I wrote a journal entry for it already..... Here--> [link]

I'm so so sorry :<

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katnisskorramako In reply to makorralok [2012-07-26 07:44:08 +0000 UTC]

It's ok

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florida-girl [2012-07-22 02:10:31 +0000 UTC]

love these

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makorralok In reply to florida-girl [2012-07-25 20:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ^_^

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Madhatter23411 [2012-07-07 03:13:12 +0000 UTC]

You are a really good writer!

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makorralok In reply to Madhatter23411 [2012-07-07 05:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Thank you so so much!! Haven't really been on dA in a long time, hahaha... So haven't really gotten many compliments recently (As you can see)

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Makorralover [2012-05-29 03:52:47 +0000 UTC]

PART 4 NOW PLEASE?! Haha...soooo addicting!

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makorralok In reply to Makorralover [2012-05-29 04:08:28 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, I'm working on it! ...And I'm almost done... It's just that I have to work on so many darned reports and my finals for school are coming up. Sooooo yeaaaaaa..... Delays delays delays.

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Makorralover In reply to makorralok [2012-05-29 04:15:06 +0000 UTC]

No rush! Can't wait for part 4... (:

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makorralok In reply to Makorralover [2012-05-29 04:20:21 +0000 UTC]

:] Omg. Btw, I loveee your name!! Hehehehe :3

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Makorralover In reply to makorralok [2012-05-29 12:52:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks(:

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makorralok In reply to Makorralover [2012-05-30 07:36:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome :3

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wolf-girl00 [2012-05-18 20:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I have officaly read this 10 times and it's STILL SO GOOD!!!! CURSE THESE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!

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makorralok In reply to wolf-girl00 [2012-05-18 23:28:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!


....
And sorry >.< .....

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wolf-girl00 In reply to makorralok [2012-05-19 00:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Haha it ok! I still <3 these stories!!!

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songbird1994 [2012-05-15 20:50:32 +0000 UTC]

GET UP MAKO!!!!!! please please please finish!!!!!

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makorralok In reply to songbird1994 [2012-05-16 06:26:52 +0000 UTC]

xD Currently working on it!

I have a feeling that you guys will love part 4 :3

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shivani660 [2012-05-14 09:15:30 +0000 UTC]

continue please!

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makorralok In reply to shivani660 [2012-05-14 22:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Will do!

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shivani660 In reply to makorralok [2012-05-17 07:14:11 +0000 UTC]

yay!

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JulietRiversong [2012-05-14 01:23:52 +0000 UTC]

I love this!! It is so sweet!! <3

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makorralok In reply to JulietRiversong [2012-05-14 22:19:11 +0000 UTC]

:3 d'awwww

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JulietRiversong In reply to makorralok [2012-05-14 22:26:05 +0000 UTC]

:3

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ishKay [2012-05-14 01:04:22 +0000 UTC]

OMG! Just when it was getting so good..

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makorralok In reply to ishKay [2012-05-14 22:18:26 +0000 UTC]

xP dat cliffhanger :3

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CHatterBOx010 [2012-05-13 23:47:47 +0000 UTC]

<3 this so sweet and IKILU4LEVINCLIFHANGERS!!!!!!! *angry face* anyways ur writing is really good!!! (i know im bipolar lol xP)

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makorralok In reply to CHatterBOx010 [2012-05-14 22:17:24 +0000 UTC]

xD sorry for the cliffhangers >;o hehehehehehehehhehehehehhe

Gah, well I guess we all have our own little bipolar moments... Maybe ;D

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CHatterBOx010 In reply to makorralok [2012-05-14 22:33:33 +0000 UTC]

lol

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makorralok In reply to CHatterBOx010 [2012-05-14 22:37:15 +0000 UTC]

Zomg just saw your ICON!!!!

So cute :3

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CHatterBOx010 In reply to makorralok [2012-05-14 22:38:32 +0000 UTC]

awww thanks xD lol

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makorralok In reply to CHatterBOx010 [2012-05-14 22:40:55 +0000 UTC]

xP Yupp, that's me... random... Just. Plain. Random. @_@

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CHatterBOx010 In reply to makorralok [2012-05-14 22:56:16 +0000 UTC]

lol me too! xD i could talk for lik two hours about one subject look out the window see ... i dunno... a bird and start talking about smthing else entierly lol. lik all of my friends are lik that too! xP

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makorralok In reply to CHatterBOx010 [2012-05-14 23:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Me too xD

I just talk about random stuff at random times....@_@

It's CRAZYYYYYY

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CHatterBOx010 In reply to makorralok [2012-05-14 23:54:52 +0000 UTC]

lol

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niallfan [2012-05-13 23:01:12 +0000 UTC]

i loved it but i hate cliff hangers WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO ME

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makorralok In reply to niallfan [2012-05-13 23:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Gahhhh I'm so so sorrrrrryyyyy T^T

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niallfan In reply to makorralok [2012-05-13 23:27:29 +0000 UTC]

its ok i ll just be that more happy when the next one comes out

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makorralok In reply to niallfan [2012-05-14 22:47:26 +0000 UTC]

.... *feels pressure* xP

I'm working on it!

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niallfan In reply to makorralok [2012-05-15 01:41:21 +0000 UTC]

awesomenesss

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makorralok In reply to niallfan [2012-05-16 06:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Pure. Awesomeness.


Anything Makorra is awesome :3

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niallfan In reply to makorralok [2012-05-17 01:14:48 +0000 UTC]

yes every thing to do with him is SWESOMNESSSSS

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makorralok In reply to niallfan [2012-05-17 01:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Nothing but! :3

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niallfan In reply to makorralok [2012-05-17 20:43:05 +0000 UTC]

ok

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wolf-girl00 [2012-05-13 22:58:37 +0000 UTC]

YES!!!! I have been waiting so long!!!! Omg I luv u!!!

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makorralok In reply to wolf-girl00 [2012-05-13 23:14:41 +0000 UTC]

yayyy lurve you too ;o hahaha

Sorry for making you wait>.<

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wolf-girl00 In reply to makorralok [2012-05-13 23:45:00 +0000 UTC]

It ok! I'm just happy I got to read it!

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