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Ladyisarma [2013-07-24 04:00:50 +0000 UTC]
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The variations of thin and think lines emphasizes the ephemeral world the alchemist works in. My two biggest "complaints" (and I say that in quotes because I don't really complain as much as give constructive comments) is that for a work called "The Alchemist" I didn't see a lot of traditional alchemical symbols, like labels on bottles, scrolls, her clothes, the air, etc.
My second is her gaze: First, she's not *quite* looking at you, but she doesn't seem to be looking "at" anyone or anything else either - more over your head and behind you. Pair that with the fact that she's pouring something. I don't know about you, but if I'm pouring, and something distracts me, I'm looking very intently at it, not gazing off into space or daydreaming!
Overall however, I think it's a very nice piece, and I'm sure the winner loved it. Your faces are drawn very well, given the style, which I liked. There are a couple of "boo-boo's" if you look at it long enough (which artists tend to do) but they don't detract from the piece. Nice work, you definitely have talent and potential.
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manic-goose In reply to AJ333 [2012-10-22 00:58:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much
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manic-goose In reply to Darya87 [2012-10-14 18:06:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, it means a lot to see you say so. ^__^ Glad you like it. When (if) you color it, would you let me see?
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manic-goose In reply to Darya87 [2012-10-14 18:45:57 +0000 UTC]
:HUG: JUST GOT MY mASTER'S i KNOW HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT COLLEGE STUFF. oops, sorry about capslock.
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manic-goose In reply to Darya87 [2012-10-19 00:23:10 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. Have you worn it yet? I would have put it on the instant I got it. ^^
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Darya87 In reply to manic-goose [2012-10-21 21:31:57 +0000 UTC]
hrhr, a surprise for the neighbours xD
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tymora11 [2012-10-13 21:37:57 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, neat!
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Riveriia [2012-10-13 20:31:25 +0000 UTC]
Yayyy!! I love your linearts to death
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