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gingka102 [2017-05-08 22:00:39 +0000 UTC]
wiat what somthings off here
THIS ISNT THE REAL SASHA! SAHSA DOESNT GIVE A CHOICE!
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manymasksmanyfaces In reply to gingka102 [2017-05-10 23:39:39 +0000 UTC]
That's a good point XD
Although, who's to say she really is? I suppose I could revise and make it clear she is offering the illusion of choice.
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Cyber-Angel-Rowan [2015-11-16 20:57:11 +0000 UTC]
RA-DA-DADADADA-DA-DA CIRCUS
/SHOT
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AndyofIndiana [2015-10-08 00:32:41 +0000 UTC]
I was planning to write a story concerning Sasha. However, I am always concerned that I might be misrepresenting what TF Circus intended to portray with her character. Did you ask TF Circus if you got Sasha's character down?
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manymasksmanyfaces In reply to AndyofIndiana [2015-10-10 03:03:02 +0000 UTC]
I asked them and they said "pretty much." I can help you if you'd like.
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larqven [2015-09-10 06:46:30 +0000 UTC]
It probably doesn't really matter, but I wonder about the details of the blackmail against Claire.
I liked some of the descriptions of the abandoned place. Rather creepy, and giving a haunted vibe--certainly the real haunting didn't hurt in that!
Although tents, by their very nature, are temporary constructions. Big tents are made of very thick and heavy construction, but if they were there for months and years, they'd sag, tear, and eventually fall flat or blow away no matter how secure they originally were.
If this were the permanent base of the circus, the building might be permanent?
It would appear that the circus is recruiting again? Sasha is the spirit of the circus? A ghost? Something else? It would seem that the permanent transformation and recruitment requires acceptance, not that that acceptance can't have some weighted help in coming about.
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Her skin changes [changed] to white and everything else from her hair to her clothes exploded with color.
The air filled with musicthat [music that] sounded like an organ that sounded suspiciously like Cindi Lauper’s Girls Just Want to Have Fun.
Sasha shifted her weight form [from] one foot to the other
Claire gawkedas [gawked as] she stepped forward and admired he [the] place.
She shot the new clown a sly glaze [gaze] ?
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manymasksmanyfaces In reply to larqven [2015-09-17 02:26:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks as always for pointing out errors, I need to get around to fixing those... eventually... XD
The bullying can be anything now with social media and cyberbullying. I plan to elaborate on this in the future.
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