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Marija343 — I Love Him...
Published: 2011-06-23 21:09:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 20709; Favourites: 409; Downloads: 1332
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This is my second poem which I wrote for a competition inWISH ME LUCK!!!
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No, it's fine, thank you for the comment ^^ I agree completely....I guess that letting go hurts less than holding onto something not worth holding on...
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yep..
letting go is for the best.. even though it doesn't feel like it at first.
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Uhh, it's so difficult though :/
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Glad to know there are other people who don't give up. I was beginning to think I was a freak...
Nice work.
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Giving up is never a good option...don't ever think there's something wrong with you! Just fight for what you believe is right and everything will work out in the end
Thank you ^^
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hey,
but does he deserve, i mean "he" is hurting "you" in a way and "your words keeps loving" him ..
for me he don't deserve
ur words are awesome .. it's gives a small view of the meaning of love.
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Yeah,it IS kinda strange I just got inspiration that way
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hmmm being honest with u .. your inspiration .. is the truth for the most people i met.
wondering !!
regardless, ur words are nice .. keep it up
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thanks for the llama
hope you keep on making poems all ive seen so far was epic
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I'll be sure to keep it up
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i hope for you all the luck my dear ^^
and really this awesome poem ^^
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This poem pretty much sums up my love life. XD
Good luck in that contest, you'd get my vote for sure!
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Thanks a lot ^^ I appreciate it
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It's a nice poem, it has a good beat and a strong meaning.
I find it interesting, and somewhat puzzling, though. I'm 15 and I've never been in love, or even had a crush on someone, so I've definitely never been in this situation and I have no way I can relate, so I'm not entirely sure which of the two people I should feel sorry for in the poem. The girl who just wants to be loved, or the boy who's rejecting the girl.
I wonder what drives people like this, even when I write similar situations for my own characters, I don't quite understand it myself when others do.
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Yeah,I hear you ^^ I don't quite understand it either 
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I can honestly relate to this.. so much so it's a little crazy.. hahah. good job.
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i think this proves that im nuts....Dx
ive been having a bad day with my would be boyfriend...and this helped me a lot
i loved it. i cried as i read it.
lol ill be shutting up now xD
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I'm glad you like it so much
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lol thats some stupid shit O.o (let me guess !!! you dont care ^^ )
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