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MattSpire — Evening for a 5 Year Sunlight
Published: 2008-02-16 06:39:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 801; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 17
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A not particularly striking or uncommon piece for the greatest liar in chief.Related content
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I like the buildings rising from the pattern made from the windows of buildings.
I sleep now...
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Great composition, I love the way you've handled this and made it your own, great style
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It's visually stunning and conceptually daring. I love the style and arrangement of the composition. The contrast between the brighter colors and desaturated colors is excellent. Powerful, stark, and provocative imagery.
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although i'm really not big on politics i do like this! neat composition!
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Wow, the image you portray here, although convoluted in imagery, is nothing short of an amazing allusion. It has so much going on it is easy to get lost. The poetry is what seals the deal to me. You get your political agenda across with the picture well, but the poem just reaffirms the thoughts even more!
The only advice I can give is on the poem. I would seriously look through your poem and ask yourself on every single line, do I need this? Brevity is key to effective communication; cut out what is filler and substitute imagery. Your poem seems rather redundant on certain points. The picture and image you are trying to paint is so clear in the beginning that by the end I just want the poem to end. Know what I mean? Paint me a picture with your words that is as vivid as your collage.
This is so good!
Keep it up!
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Thank you very much for your very thoughtful comment. I must say, however, the poem is actually a famous decades-old song by The Rolling Stones, "Sympathy for the Devil," which I found strangely appropriate.
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adore the colors you used. very striking, indeed. I can easily see it on a wall, in a frame.
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Heh, the Lord of Flies reigns supreme in the land of the free - so much for truth, justice and the American dream! It's been replaced by lies, torture and the Patriot Act.
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I love the concept. Especially the city. It's really well put together.
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wow, very symbolic, i like how everything is put together, as a collage of the sort.
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This is really wicked. I think (im probably wrong!) the message in this is more clear than in the other images and I really like it. Awesomeeeeeee. :]
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Very very good.. well spoken and very political. I love it!
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oh this is fantastic....the colors are great and all of the elements work very well together... i like the repetition of the shapes and hands also the buildings
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