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mechanicalmasochist — Rial page 3 WIP
Published: 2013-04-03 01:52:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 3607; Favourites: 234; Downloads: 18
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page 3 is taking a little longer because fight scenes are impossibleso here is the line art and flat colours
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ohh he hit a good one on shale this time .ow that must have hurt XD
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you're doing good, keep trying and working into it. <3
i'd say out of personal opinion the third slide / whatever you call it, the white rat might need a little bit of work on his anatomy.
other than that, it's really good and the angels are great! keep it up.
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Wow there is some really nice angles on here and I love how different you have drawn the head shapes of Blank and Shale. Only thing I can see that is bothering me is the placement of Blanks eye in the 3rd pannel it just looks to far down his face, but other than that good page.
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im horrible at fight scenes but this is amazing!!!
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thanks!
I've never really drawn rats fighting before, angles are so difficult to do, hopefully the final page will be an improvement ^^
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i have tried drawing rats fighting on paper and i keep messing up. your right the angles are hard to draw!
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its so amazing O:
maybe u should of called it talk wip XD /shotdead
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oh wow Flighty I really really love it a lot 
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Wonderful job so far. I'm looking forward to this and many more pages^^
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Blank used TAIL WHIP.
It wasn't very effective...
(sorry team shale ftw)
idontevenknow.
well good job on perspective, it seems like you've improved on that part since last time I saw your art. and i really love this certain shading for some reason.. c:
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Dont die Gray Rat!!!!!!!!
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I like it so far and can't wait till its done. Very good job.
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