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pandalamaa In reply to MelancholyCyborg1 [2017-12-29 15:44:58 +0000 UTC]
haha true so! Wish it could come a bit more often though X'D
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charcoalfeather [2017-12-17 16:54:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you so much for this amazing entry <333 It's so great to finally see it and the ideas behind it. It's very well thought out--thank you so much for doing this thoughtful entry about my characters, you nailed all of their interactions perfectly well!
I like how you did the crossed-out papers around Kuzma to show his frustration at his writing, and then further surrounded him by the people with whom he does have some conflict with, such as his father, his brothers, etc. You can really feel his sense of isolation and confusion here, and how he feels like he can't connect with his family. Nor can he understand (and is probably jealous of, but can't say out of fear of losing face) his father's close relationship with Mitya, Mitya's status as the favorite son, and Yuriy's marriage to Lina...
With the Commissars coming down on his father and himself, Kuzma is going to be in for a tough ride!
With regards to the art, I love the composition, as I've said already, and your colouring is getting stronger and stronger with each picture! The hair of each character is shaded beautifully and also, I love how you've done the heights so accurately, probably even more accurately than myself since I sometimes forget! Yes, Mitya is indeed pretty tall, taller than his father, and Lina is probably at that height compared to Yuriy (I still need to draw both of them together soon, thanks for reminding me)!
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