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Published: 2017-12-17 13:16:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 164; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Description At long last, here's my entry for charcoalfeather 's contest

I drew the sketch initially whilst on holiday but have only just gotten to colouring it

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The theme this time was CONFLICT and MAYAKOV'S. I chose to draw Kuzma with some of the sources of conflict throughout his life, rather than depicting actual conflict.

First is Kuzma's struggles with his writing. He often has periods where he hates what he writes and tends to shove it away or contemplates burning it all. 

Then is his struggles with understanding his two brothers, Yuriy (blonde) and Mitya (red). His older brothers both managed through life seemingly with ease, Mitya being mostly like their father, Ardalion (and ultimately being his favourite son of the three) and Yuriy, who was closest to Mitya, spending more time with him and becoming closer than Kuzma could ever dream of. They both went into the army together, though Mitya's eventual death at the hands of the Basmachi started the downward spiral of the Mayakov's. 

Even though Yuriy is now happily married to Lina, there's still an air of distance/struggle to properly understand his brother. 

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Check out the contest here: fav.me/db8s5mi
Kuzma Mayakov, Ardalion Mayakov, Mitya Mayakov, Yuriy Mayakov, Lina Mayakov and Blue Star belongs to (C) charcoalfeather  
Art belongs to (C) MelancholyCyborg1  
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Comments: 12

pandalamaa [2017-12-29 14:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Oooh this is so beautiful! You've drawn so many characters, this must've taken long! But goodness it must've been worth it, since it looks so stunning! Love how you've included his writing and drawn X's over them to show the struggle! 

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MelancholyCyborg1 In reply to pandalamaa [2017-12-29 15:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 
Yes, it took a while xD I drew this whilst on holiday and then spent a couple of hours over a few days colouring  

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pandalamaa In reply to MelancholyCyborg1 [2017-12-29 15:34:40 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome!
Understandable! Respect to you for finishing it! I tend to grow tired of really big works myself X'D You certainly have determination~ C':

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MelancholyCyborg1 In reply to pandalamaa [2017-12-29 15:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha x'D The determimation only comes once in a while

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pandalamaa In reply to MelancholyCyborg1 [2017-12-29 15:44:58 +0000 UTC]

haha true so! Wish it could come a bit more often though X'D

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MelancholyCyborg1 In reply to pandalamaa [2017-12-29 18:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah xD

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dragondoodle [2017-12-17 17:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic job on this! It's so neat to see them all together in one picture

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MelancholyCyborg1 In reply to dragondoodle [2017-12-17 17:31:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you  

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charcoalfeather [2017-12-17 16:54:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much for this amazing entry <333 It's so great to finally see it and the ideas behind it. It's very well thought out--thank you so much for doing this thoughtful entry about my characters, you nailed all of their interactions perfectly well!

I like how you did the crossed-out papers around Kuzma to show his frustration at his writing, and then further surrounded him by the people with whom he does have some conflict with, such as his father, his brothers, etc. You can really feel his sense of isolation and confusion here, and how he feels like he can't connect with his family. Nor can he understand (and is probably jealous of, but can't say out of fear of losing face) his father's close relationship with Mitya, Mitya's status as the favorite son, and Yuriy's marriage to Lina...

With the Commissars coming down on his father and himself, Kuzma is going to be in for a tough ride!

With regards to the art, I love the composition, as I've said already, and your colouring is getting stronger and stronger with each picture! The hair of each character is shaded beautifully and also, I love how you've done the heights so accurately, probably even more accurately than myself since I sometimes forget! Yes, Mitya is indeed pretty tall, taller than his father, and Lina is probably at that height compared to Yuriy (I still need to draw both of them together soon, thanks for reminding me)!

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MelancholyCyborg1 In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-12-18 22:16:43 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome I apologise that it took so long to finish  

When I first saw the contest theme, I was a bit wary but after I got some sudden inspiration, I settled on this one. 
I'm pleased that it all came together well, it certainly was a tough theme to tackle. 

He sure is!

Thank you and you're very welcome Thanks for hosting this contest!

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charcoalfeather In reply to MelancholyCyborg1 [2017-12-19 01:06:22 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And thanks so much for trying out this contest despite initially having been wary.

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MelancholyCyborg1 In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-12-19 15:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! Hope to enter more contests!

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