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Published: 2014-03-17 11:07:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 12913; Favourites: 202; Downloads: 56
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Description     This is Alice.
    Alice was once a simple farm girl that lived life without worry. But fate played Alice a cruel hand when one dark day a vicious wizard with a penchant for dark magics stole her away to his lair. There she was twisted and mutated. Her body was changed into that of a grotesque human-arachnid hybrid for the wizard's own sinister amusement. The torture of the transformation warped her mind and drove her into a wicked madness. She wailed and screamed with pain and hatred within her holding cell, the life she once knew slipping from her memory.
    One day, whilst the wizard was away for matters of an unsavory nature, Alice used her new found strength to break free of her prison and escape into the village at the foot of the wizard's mountain. There she kept herself in the darkness of an abandoned house that had long been deemed haunted. She fed on the blood of vermin that dwelt there for a time, brooding in her insanity. Her hatred of the living grew stronger with every passing day. Alice soon began wandering out in the night to snatch up larger victims such as chickens, dogs, and eventually, people. Much like Renfield of Dracula, she collected lives, and grew stronger with each unfortunate soul that perished in her cocoon riddled lair. As she drained them of their crimson life force, she would whisper words of hate and disdain in the ears of her victims. Her webs began to fill the now uninhabited homes of those she had slain and consumed.
       On moonless nights, Alice would sit on the rooftop of her abode, staring at the mountain and chittering angrily in the darkness. Her insanity allowed her only one clear thought; revenge. She would continue to feed on the lives of the village until, when she had attained strength most unholy, Alice could crawl back into the tower of the wizard and hang his bloodless corpse from the rafters of her lair.

    "  Where be Alice now, the poor and wretched thing.
        In her wicked home, where joy no sight will bring
       
        Fear the dreadful spider, for she'll take you in the night
        Drag you back to her lair and bind you up so tight

        Lock your door, hold fast your blood, let not a drop fall
        For here comes Alice from the dark to feed and take it all "

       
       
   
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Comments: 39

BonBons-Qoops [2018-01-25 17:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Why does this remind me of the fly?

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Baripon12 [2016-02-13 03:49:53 +0000 UTC]

wow... just...wow... seeing her misery and reading the story made me cry Y-Y i don't want her to feel as if everything hates her... i don't want her to feel pain anymore or to feel like the world has forgotten about her, i was there Alice... i was there once and i dont know how you feel... or if you can understand me... and i know that you are going to kill me... but if you will give me one chance to show you that you can trust me i would hug you and cry... i would cry my feelings and i would do anything to help you get through this Y-Y i promise... now that that is out of the way. I love the story and the art. Despite her new body i know that she used to be human. and i hope that one day she will be cured from her madness and this insanity ^-^

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DatThingyBoi In reply to Baripon12 [2018-12-12 17:07:02 +0000 UTC]

And that day will probably kicks the bucket unless someone invents that sort of science

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DKSpillomanen97 [2015-05-10 14:12:27 +0000 UTC]

seriously grotesque! I LOVE IT!  

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Mezzeril In reply to DKSpillomanen97 [2015-05-10 19:13:39 +0000 UTC]

Exactly what I was going for. ..Thank you!

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JTHMFrAeK [2015-02-23 05:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Looks great!

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Mezzeril In reply to JTHMFrAeK [2015-02-23 13:25:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you like her!

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JTHMFrAeK In reply to Mezzeril [2015-02-23 19:19:46 +0000 UTC]

I am too!

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fishingamna [2014-11-23 00:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I like how you've accompanied the drawing with a little background story; pretty neat.

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Mezzeril In reply to fishingamna [2014-11-25 17:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I love doing backstories!

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Sylvio1996 [2014-11-19 00:52:58 +0000 UTC]

 nyaaa *poke the spider* 

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DatThingyBoi In reply to Sylvio1996 [2018-12-12 17:09:23 +0000 UTC]

*spider bites* ouch that hur... why do I feel a pain in my legs * turns into spider hybrid in picture*

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ilTassista [2014-03-26 07:14:15 +0000 UTC]

wow!

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Mezzeril In reply to ilTassista [2014-03-27 09:28:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! !

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DainyLenix227 [2014-03-17 23:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Oi, she looks amazing and scary. Nice work, I think you totally achieved what you were telling me you wanted to go for. Seriously though she's legit your scariest monster girl so far.

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280077s [2014-03-17 17:34:07 +0000 UTC]

I like the story, and the art is beautiful. I feel sorry for her, IF I was with her I would try to love her as she is, and let her know that not all life is cruel and is out to get her. *hugs*

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Mezzeril In reply to 280077s [2014-03-17 17:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! That is very brave of you. It is true that not all life is out to get her...but Alice is out to get all life.

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280077s In reply to Mezzeril [2014-03-17 18:07:53 +0000 UTC]

I would try and stop her, she doesn't need to get all life, she just needs to be loved by the right person IMO.

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Mezzeril In reply to 280077s [2014-03-17 18:17:56 +0000 UTC]

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280077s In reply to Mezzeril [2014-03-17 18:22:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm a lover, not a fighter, what can I say?

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DatThingyBoi In reply to 280077s [2018-12-12 17:13:02 +0000 UTC]

You can get a medical degree and put an end to her hybrid form so people won’t see her as a Freak but personally I think she is pretty awesome * waits for 280077s to stop hugging her* *gives her handshake*

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280077s In reply to DatThingyBoi [2018-12-12 22:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Fair point, though it'd take too long to get that degree, and I wouldn't want to prolong her pain if I could, so I'd find someone who already qualifies to revert her back to her original form.

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DatThingyBoi In reply to 280077s [2019-01-15 18:41:14 +0000 UTC]

What if she had a degree, or looked on the internet?

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280077s In reply to DatThingyBoi [2019-01-15 19:01:13 +0000 UTC]

Anything to ease her pain.

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DatThingyBoi In reply to 280077s [2019-01-16 07:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Morphine???

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280077s In reply to DatThingyBoi [2019-01-16 14:14:15 +0000 UTC]

That would be included as something, yes.

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DatThingyBoi In reply to 280077s [2019-01-20 05:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Opiorphin?

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280077s In reply to DatThingyBoi [2019-01-20 16:08:55 +0000 UTC]

Never heard of that.

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DatThingyBoi In reply to 280077s [2019-01-20 19:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Apparently it’s a natural painkiller that is 6-9 times more powerful than morphine found in human saliva. It’s the reason that when you injure your finger you suck on it,!i read it in a book.

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280077s In reply to DatThingyBoi [2019-01-20 19:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, didn't know that. What's the name of the book?

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DatThingyBoi In reply to 280077s [2019-01-22 14:14:25 +0000 UTC]

1,227 facts to blow your socks off

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280077s In reply to DatThingyBoi [2019-01-22 14:51:43 +0000 UTC]

I'll check it out ^^

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DatThingyBoi In reply to 280077s [2019-01-27 00:14:18 +0000 UTC]

Let me know if you find the book

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280077s In reply to DatThingyBoi [2019-01-27 14:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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TerryFormittag [2014-03-17 14:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice work

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Mezzeril In reply to TerryFormittag [2014-03-17 18:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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LunaBones [2014-03-17 13:03:06 +0000 UTC]

She's beautiful I love her story and her poem reminds me of the ones used for Living Dead Dolls ^w^ I love her design, she's very original and effective  

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Mezzeril In reply to LunaBones [2014-03-17 18:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you like her. She was a joy to create.

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LunaBones In reply to Mezzeril [2014-03-18 16:35:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!! She looks like she would have been fun to draw ^w^

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