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KelpyART [2020-03-02 17:17:39 +0000 UTC]
God your writing style is just so good I can't
I can just close my eyes and imagine the scene like it's really before me- that's fantastic and you need to hear it!
OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK
THEY WERE BANISHED
AH
FORTE BACKSTORY FORTE BACKSTORY AAA
I DON'T KNOW ANYTHING GOING ON WITH THE SIRENS
BUT IT SURE IS INTERESTING
also now I know where the name Forte comes from so big oof
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MiaMaha In reply to KelpyART [2020-04-17 22:24:22 +0000 UTC]
OASIHOAHSFSAIf ;// o //; Oh man oh man, thank you friend ; w ; I appreciate that compliment, aaaa
heHEHEHEHE
Surprise~~ u w u I'm honestly thrilled you didn't know about the sirens, so this is more of a big reveal for you~ It's SO fun to see your reactions. 👍: 1 ⏩: 0
MiaMaha In reply to Sanura-Neris [2019-12-18 05:59:00 +0000 UTC]
EYY no probs, I've been on a little hiatus myself
Thank you!! I was confused about the hippocampi question at first, but then I saw your other comment. xD Yeah, I had no intention to change the fact that they're hippocampi!
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RobbieCave [2019-11-01 00:36:53 +0000 UTC]
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MiaMaha In reply to RobbieCave [2019-11-02 01:38:58 +0000 UTC]
YEAH HUH, I just realized I haven't seen other Adagio or siren next gens >:0 I'm sure I'm not the first, but I'm glad this feels new~
Thanks!
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Songal [2019-10-20 19:01:58 +0000 UTC]
What a shock but a good one and I can't wait to read more on your take on The Dazzlings and Forte ^^
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MiaMaha In reply to Songal [2019-11-02 01:42:14 +0000 UTC]
HehehEHEHE glad this could be a surprise~ uwu Thank you!
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Songal In reply to MiaMaha [2019-11-02 03:36:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!! Definitely need more of these good surprises ^^
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PokemonTrainerMax [2019-10-17 20:01:56 +0000 UTC]
This is great! I like this insight into how the Sirens view the events that happened to them. I'm also pleasantly surprised that Forte is Adagio's daughter, and I love the family dynamic between the sisters and Forte. Looking forward to learning more about your headcanons for the Sirens!
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MiaMaha In reply to PokemonTrainerMax [2019-11-02 01:45:20 +0000 UTC]
*rubs hands together* I'm happy this turned out to be a surprise after all...I was a little worried about whether it was obvious or not.
Thank you!! Getting to explore the "other side of the story" so to speak is so much fun. ;w;
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PokemonTrainerMax In reply to MiaMaha [2019-11-02 07:31:00 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Yeah, I totally missed the connection cause I forgot that "forte" is a musical term, much like "adagio", "aria", and "sonata".
Totally agree with you there. Many of the villains could use more fleshing out of their backgrounds. Villains with compelling backstories and solid reasons for their actions make for much more interesting stories.
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MiaMaha In reply to PokemonTrainerMax [2019-11-06 21:50:44 +0000 UTC]
EYYY it's all good! I had a list of musical terms to choose from and chose "Forte" because it sounded the coolest xDD But now I realize its a term that could be mistaken for the actual word or an actual name, so it actually worked out in keeping things on the down low~
Much agreed!! >:c Villains who are evil "just because" they want to intentionally do "bad things" is okay (depending on execution cough), but yo, I want those villains with backstories that explain how they even got to where they are, that make them feel more rounded and possibly sympathetic even if their actions can't be excused. So *gently slams fist down* Imma write it myself if I must...
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PokemonTrainerMax In reply to MiaMaha [2019-11-07 05:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, Forte's a pretty cool name, and it doesn't sound similar to the Sirens' names by itself, so the connection was hidden pretty well.
Definitely, if the show won't fill in the details, then we will do it ourselves!
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zoeannaart62 [2019-10-17 16:49:56 +0000 UTC]
Was not expecting this. I love it!
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MiaMaha In reply to zoeannaart62 [2019-11-02 01:42:26 +0000 UTC]
Awesome~ ewe Thank you!
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Fuego-fantasmal [2019-10-16 23:45:52 +0000 UTC]
This looks adorable.
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LadyAkaSwan [2019-10-16 15:03:27 +0000 UTC]
I die for this, did not expect this.
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MiaMaha In reply to LadyAkaSwan [2019-11-02 01:45:39 +0000 UTC]
HEHE wonderful~~ uwu
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ReaganWhittle [2019-10-16 12:19:02 +0000 UTC]
Adorable ❤️
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tehwatcher [2019-10-16 09:59:42 +0000 UTC]
this os very beatufiul
this is a wonderful chapter
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Minty25 [2019-10-16 08:15:01 +0000 UTC]
OWO
I'm very pleased with this, yes, a very fun chapter to read! I really like the lore and how Adagio is so kind and caring with her daughter, but still very different with her sisters. She loves them, obviously, but isn't the type to show them any affection like she does her daughter and I live for this.
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MiaMaha In reply to Minty25 [2019-11-02 01:46:34 +0000 UTC]
YEESSS exactly~~ I've enjoyed writing Adagio's characterization so I'm happy you enjoy it too~ Thank you!
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