Comments: 69
Saellek-Star [2010-02-12 02:40:40 +0000 UTC]
constructive crit coming right up lol:
1. the back legs: the knee area is too thick and the part right above the hock is too thin...the weight needs to be more evenly distributed among those two areas. Also, the knee joint needs to be farther down.
2. the front legs: they need to be less angular...less bending back at the "wrist" joint, and nothing that resembles a fetlock needs to be present.
3. the neck: needs to not be so flat...there should be a visible shoulder so it doesn't look so otter-like. also, the neck should be thinner at the base of the head and then widen as it nears the body.
4. the body shape: it should have more of a shape than a lumpy rectangle, if I may say so. Also, the tail should be a bit thinner. The legs all need to be longer, so the wolf is taller. The torso should be a but longer than the neck.
5. the head: just move the ears forward and make them a bit bigger and fluffier.
that is all, I hope this was all constructive, criticism as it may be.
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goldenpuon [2010-02-08 22:30:59 +0000 UTC]
Great drawing! You have an remarkable talent for drawing animals!
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Nixly [2010-02-08 19:56:29 +0000 UTC]
he looks really good! thou the neck looks a bit strange
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1980sbully [2010-02-08 06:44:39 +0000 UTC]
his front end seems alittle off his neck is a bit to fluffy and the legs seem alittle to far back and the tail is alitte fat to maybe longer would help it but you did an amazing job on the fur!!! looks awesome sorry if you dont care for my comment what do i know about drawing like my user suggests i cant draw>.<
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AlameaLio [2010-02-08 06:04:07 +0000 UTC]
LIKES!
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EssereEssere [2010-02-08 05:06:24 +0000 UTC]
To me, the neck looks a little too thick, but in all, the wolf is well-ly drawn.
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forestfairyunicorn [2010-02-08 02:18:37 +0000 UTC]
DOGGGIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I WUVS doggies!
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WolftenDragon [2010-02-08 02:09:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh my a dog! lol it must have been hard not to give him a horse face XDD
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blazeismypuppy [2010-02-08 01:41:23 +0000 UTC]
he is very good, but his eyes seem feline to me. perhaps limit the slant on them, and make them rounder? but i LOVE him, fyi! (L)
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blazeismypuppy In reply to MichelleWalker [2010-02-09 20:21:46 +0000 UTC]
no worries; anything i can do to help an artist of your caliber! <3
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Feralhound07 [2010-02-08 01:26:52 +0000 UTC]
'Daw, I love those fuzzy ears! That leather cuffling is a nice touch as well ^^
And I'm gunna help ya out a little bit, since I started drawing canine way before equine (and study canine anatomy in school)
the legs in general should be longer, and the front legs should slim out towards the "fetlock" (and be moved forward, yes). On the back legs, the knee actually should be further down from the body, and hip bone should be rotated more frontward- unlike a horse, pelvis bone is also a lot smaller, thus making the upper hindlegs thinner in proportion,especially compared to a horse lol. Here's a good anatomy reference: [link] (and if you like, I could always do a rough redline for you of your image)
Hope I helped/was clear enough Feel free to ask me any questions.
New anatomy is a be=otch to learn, but I think you're doing an exelent job for being out of your element, so to speak! Plus, I love how you coloured your fur :]
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arcadia-the-lich [2010-02-07 22:50:49 +0000 UTC]
I looks awesome to me,however I feel that the front legs should be a little further foward? I love the fluff c:
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Animalluvr47 [2010-02-07 22:44:00 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous, just like all of your works of art!
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SilverZeo [2010-02-07 22:39:18 +0000 UTC]
Nice.
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