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Minuiko — TP: Alanna comic 14
Published: 2011-11-16 17:02:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 9986; Favourites: 133; Downloads: 82
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Last page!!Haha not sure about the "feel" of the ending or whether it's appropriate but I like the angle of the last panel so I'm keeping it (plus there's NOT MUCH TIME LEFT...)
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It's like a real movie ending with a moral lesson/theme. It's fine.
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Why is this not in the book! I love this! You should have this added to the new book! it's absolutely amazing!
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Ahhhhhhh..... ;___; Oh lordy. This series was my absolute favorite as a youngling. I mean. It literally saved my life, or, well, Alanna did. And.. you just. Okay. I'm going to re-read the series this weekend. ::nostalgia overload tears::
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Nicely done ^^ I love the books and this scene is cool!
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I like the ending; it's nice and hopeful. Plus it's great to see them all together.
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I absolutely loved that part in the book! But wasn't that 'bad' knight insulting her, while she just sort-of stayed silent which creeped him out? OMGoodness!!!!!!!!!! What am I saying that was totally awesome!!
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Omg wow this is so cool! Seriously, it really makes me want to read the book series this is based off of xD Only I feel like it would be slightly more underwhelming because then I wouldn't have your awesome art to give me physical visuals! Haha.
Really though, awesome job!
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Thanks, Rae! I kind of gave up on lining this though, haha...
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Aw man, that's disappointing, I was kind of looking forward to seeing it all cleaned up. Oh well, I know how life gets in the way sometimes, it's all good. :] It's still beyond awesome, haha.
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I finished reading book 2 yesterday and...
WOW. Just WOW.
(I wish the books were available in my country! >: )
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I blame you for having my mouth hang open in absolute awe while reading this .___.
-respect-
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I regret not finding this sooner! Amazing job! It's rare enough to see fan art from these novels but to see this epic story come to life with your comic ;_;
*kneels* I... I am honored to have read this...
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Please do more of these comics of the Tortall books, especially Alanna!! I love Alanna...her books are my faves...I would love to see the fight with Duke Roger in book 1, or her meeting Liam Ironarm when he sends her a drink in book 4, or the scene where Jon, Alanna, and George are talking in book 4 and Thayet shows up in her nightgown and Jon is so stunned...xD hehehe.
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Gary, Jon, Alanna, Raoul, Alex? that's my guess on that 2nd panel.
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wait sorry I thought you were listing the order my bad
Yeah, those are the right charas lol
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Switch the order of Raoul and Gary and you have the right order
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I love the way you end this. It's awesome in the book but you really hit the message home that no, Tortall is not weak and they will protect what is theirs.
I can kind of see what you mean about the angle in the last panel. Perhaps it should be level with them and show their backs as they walk into a brightly lit place.
But I love what you did with the whole comic. On the whole I thought the fight scenes were good.
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This was awesome! I loved seeing my favorite part of this series come alive like this. You've done an amazing job.
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This is amazing. I love the ending.
Wow, I'm just heaping the flattery on you, aren't I?
I do like it, though
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'Kay, so I know that the TCP thing is over and all, but could you PLEASE do a finished version of this? PLEASE?
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they're all half-lined! It will probably happen sometime when I'm not swamped with schoolwork, haha.
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Not bad! I really like this "Chapter". I've read the series about four times now and you have done an excellent job of portraying this fight, simply amazing!
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AMAZING comic! So well done, all of it! 
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I must tell you, this is a great comic of what happened, I think it is amazing detail and line and is amazing!!!!! I love this!!!
Love it!!!!!!!!
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Amazing!!!!I love Alanna/Alan This comic is amazing.Sadly I have only read the first book.X(This is perfect!!!She is so BADASS!!!!!!
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Wow. I like how you put in thoughts and split-second moments throughout.
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I am in love with the last panel colors and shading and the sun and the angle and....I could go on and on!!!!!
I also love the way the dialogue turns into more of a prophecy sounding, and how your drawings portray that!!!!
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Ahhhh, I love it! I should try turning excerpts of TP novels into short comics. Great idea!
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I LOVE IT!
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This comic, the pace, the emotion, brilliant. Well done
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I think it's great!
I'm sure you'll do great finishing it all
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This was a good last page. Nicely done on the entire section
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Perfection. Seriously. I love it. The last panel, and that Alex in the middle panel being a hipster, and everything. Fricking fantabulous.
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ROFL hipster Alex |D
Did you notice he's not in the last panel though? Since he won't have a bright future ahead
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Oh man, he is!
I did notice... Poor guy. Or maybe not, huh? I never could tell what he was really thinking. It's hard to tell when he converted over to the dark side.
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Yeah, he had so much wasted antihero potential, haha.
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This comic was incredible! The art was amazing , but your conveyance of the story was really well paced as well.
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That last panel looks amazing, you pick such a perfect scene.
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Thanks, it was a last-minute-inspiration sort of thing but I'm glad it fits.
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I love that last line... the one that spans the last 2 panels. It's so awesome, it gave me tingles in the book and even more so when I saw it here
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