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Published: 2014-12-23 20:26:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 86961; Favourites: 2436; Downloads: 0
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Walking, Waiting
Alone without a care
Hoping
And hating
Things that I can't bear

Did you think it's cool
To walk right up
To take my life
And fuck it up
Well did you?

I hate you!

I see hell in your eyes
Taken in by surprise
And touching you makes me feel alive
Touching you makes me die inside
(...)

- "Slept So Long" by Jay Gordon

Omg, I finally uploaded this *-*
I wanted to draw this for ages now, but couldn't find a good song, nor a good angle for this scene. And finally, FINALLY, after listening to some older music on my computer, I found a song that inspired me. I think it fits this scene quite well (which was taken from 'The fourth apprentice' by the way).
To the scene: As you can see I made a little something for the fight between Jayfeather and Breezepelt at the Moonpool in the fourth Warriors-arc.^^ This was my favourite Breezepelt-scene, because this is one of the key-moments that show off how furious and devastated he really is about what happened between his father and Leafpool. I never really liked him, because he was grumpy and kind of weird and touchy sometimes... but after looking closely at how Crowfeather treated him and his mother Nightcloud, I felt like he just needed a loooong hug. He would've deserved to feel loved and cared for by both his parents, but instead his father acted like Breezepelt was his biggest mistake in life. I can't imagine what he must've felt, when he found out, that his father had kits with Leafpool - no surprise he wanted them dead. Because he thought they were the reason why Crowfeather never loved him.
Envy is a very destructive emotion... it can make you do bad things. It can eat you alive, until there's nothing good left in your heart. And that's exactly what happened to Breezepelt. Nobody's born evil, but envy and resentment made him one of the vilians. And this scene shows how far he's really willing to go to make somebody pay for his situation. He's so far gone that he'd kill his half-brother - a cat of his own blood. What the hell? Why couldn't Crowfeather be nice for once? He could've prevented his own son from becoming an evil, vengeful murderer. The only thing he had to do was being nice and caring. One job, Crowfeather. You had one. Goddamn. Job! >.<

Phew... Please excuse my ranting. I never liked Crowfeather... but after I read what became of Breezepelt because of Crowfeather's inability to just love his own son... I simply started hating that tom.

I hope you like the pic.^^ The next upload will be a gift for a special someone. :3
I don't think I'll be able to upload it before Christmas, so Merry Christmas to all of you!

Characters and story (c) by Erin Hunter
Illustration (c) by
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ForestWinter [2022-04-17 21:15:28 +0000 UTC]

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WojowniczyOgien [2022-03-18 12:19:08 +0000 UTC]

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MightyPenguin7 In reply to WojowniczyOgien [2022-06-04 15:56:09 +0000 UTC]

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Pearshine23550 In reply to WojowniczyOgien [2022-03-22 10:40:46 +0000 UTC]

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Pearshine23550 [2022-03-02 10:53:06 +0000 UTC]

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BriteshineStormberry [2020-12-23 01:36:56 +0000 UTC]

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Pearshine23550 In reply to BriteshineStormberry [2022-03-02 10:50:38 +0000 UTC]

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Appl3paw In reply to BriteshineStormberry [2021-01-31 01:03:21 +0000 UTC]

I understand every bit and I loveeeee Jayfeather! I agree that he has been through so much...

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thelunarnewyear [2020-10-28 02:55:07 +0000 UTC]

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celesteddie [2020-05-06 23:55:18 +0000 UTC]

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AnimalLover670 [2019-04-24 00:12:40 +0000 UTC]

I like how you found a way to show both their faces!

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SpaceEcho [2018-08-05 19:40:49 +0000 UTC]

wOw BrEeZePeLt SuRe Is ReLaTaBlE

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LoopsyDeeDoo [2018-03-19 16:32:26 +0000 UTC]

BreezePelt you madman your whispers are based off and weaker than JayFeathers gossip.

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KekoaSakaraMoonArts [2018-01-23 19:53:20 +0000 UTC]

BREEZEPELT FUCK OFFF

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herecomesjay [2018-01-23 18:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Breezepelt you dick-

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FoxishJamaa [2018-01-15 04:00:58 +0000 UTC]

I feel bad for Jay and lion having to know how much Their Half brother hates them, especially Jay

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DragonBeast11 [2018-01-14 15:47:59 +0000 UTC]

All my life I thought this was Hollyleaf and Ashfur :0Β 
Just now I decided to read the description and I'm surprised.Β 
This is 4 years old but I still really like it ??
The angle although it can be confusing when looking at first, it's really well-thought!

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1980sGirl [2018-01-02 14:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Still think Breezepelt shouldn't have lived. He should have gotten an icicle through HIS skull.

What? I'm sensitive to those who would try to murder a PREGNANT female. Anyone who feels sorry for Breezepelt is as dead to me as someone who wants sympathy for the Columbine Killers. Or Charles Manson.

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Pearshine23550 In reply to 1980sGirl [2022-03-22 10:43:06 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Emo-Kitten [2017-12-30 23:39:36 +0000 UTC]

this is amazingΒ 

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Mellowix [2017-11-10 18:18:22 +0000 UTC]

I always thought the Moonpool should have been the death place of Sol, for ironyΒ sake.Β 

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Dark-Emo-Kitten In reply to Mellowix [2017-12-30 23:39:09 +0000 UTC]

agreed

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Mellowix In reply to Dark-Emo-Kitten [2017-12-31 16:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Thinking about it more, imagine if that happened when Sol interrupted a Half-moon gathering and the MedicineΒ cats get fend up with him and just decideΒ to kill him. That would be hilarious.Β Β 

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Dark-Emo-Kitten In reply to Mellowix [2018-01-02 00:24:09 +0000 UTC]

yeah it would
i never likes Sol from the begining

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Pearshine23550 In reply to Dark-Emo-Kitten [2022-03-22 10:44:58 +0000 UTC]

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Pearshine23550 In reply to Pearshine23550 [2022-03-22 10:45:13 +0000 UTC]

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KittenSparkles9 In reply to Mellowix [2017-11-11 09:46:01 +0000 UTC]

Agreed

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ChewyKoalaOwO [2017-11-06 23:35:12 +0000 UTC]

''You don't know what it's like to be stared at and whispered about!''
Breezepelt says to the one who is stared at and whispered about because of his CODE-BREAKING PARENTS THAT BROKE THE CODE IN TWO WAYS
and because he's blind---
I mean you're totally not lying!

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Sanluris [2017-09-17 21:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. A lot of cats in these books only had one job, didn't they?

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Moekaaa [2017-04-30 20:59:41 +0000 UTC]

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herecomesjay In reply to Moekaaa [2018-01-23 18:35:50 +0000 UTC]

these things drive me over the fucking edge-

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Moekaaa In reply to herecomesjay [2018-02-04 16:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Ew I forgot about this comment.

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Moekaaa In reply to Moekaaa [2018-02-04 16:43:40 +0000 UTC]

Delete.

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LupusHowl In reply to Moekaaa [2017-05-05 21:34:30 +0000 UTC]

If you know they are fake, why do you still do them-?

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Moekaaa In reply to LupusHowl [2017-05-06 00:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Because, I am going to set a camera up in my room Monday night to show it`s not real.Β 

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CattchiDeviantart In reply to Moekaaa [2017-07-23 10:07:30 +0000 UTC]

do you even need to check if you already know it's fake? confused at what you're testing exactly here.

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Moekaaa In reply to CattchiDeviantart [2017-07-24 04:59:29 +0000 UTC]

Testing to see how many people believe in this shit.

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InuYashaSama43 [2017-04-26 14:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Breezepelt's new nickname: Butpelt
This nickname is brought to you by:

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InuYashaSama43 [2017-04-22 04:56:36 +0000 UTC]

BREEZE HOW DARE YOU THAT IS MY JAY-JAY YOU *swear word*!!!!!!!!!!!' Β  Β 

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Ashfiretheawesome In reply to InuYashaSama43 [2017-04-24 21:42:22 +0000 UTC]

This is where Breezepelt got his nickname.

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InuYashaSama43 In reply to Ashfiretheawesome [2017-04-25 12:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Annoying little brat?(alb)Β 

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Ashfiretheawesome In reply to InuYashaSama43 [2017-04-25 14:11:19 +0000 UTC]

No, Butpelt.

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InuYashaSama43 In reply to Ashfiretheawesome [2017-04-25 14:32:07 +0000 UTC]

I agreeΒ 

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Ashfiretheawesome In reply to InuYashaSama43 [2017-04-25 14:33:23 +0000 UTC]

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InuYashaSama43 In reply to Ashfiretheawesome [2017-04-25 15:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Butpelt. That is the perfect name for him.

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Ashfiretheawesome In reply to InuYashaSama43 [2017-04-25 16:25:00 +0000 UTC]

I know right.Β 

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InuYashaSama43 In reply to Ashfiretheawesome [2017-04-25 17:26:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes.

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Ashfiretheawesome In reply to InuYashaSama43 [2017-04-25 21:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Also I call Tigerstar Butstar.

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InuYashaSama43 In reply to Ashfiretheawesome [2017-04-26 12:37:23 +0000 UTC]

says that they like your ideas

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