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Notorius-Benjamin [2013-09-09 18:44:49 +0000 UTC]
so when are you going to start writing again?
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ZombieMozart0725 In reply to MJTism [2013-08-13 17:19:58 +0000 UTC]
I do not like your world, then. But at the same time, I love it.
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-13 15:50:37 +0000 UTC]
Yes, yes you are a hypocrite. But I will try!
Any thoughts on this one in particular?
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-13 16:27:47 +0000 UTC]
No thoughts on the offer he made? And why Marcy turned it down?
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partial-quatrefoil In reply to MJTism [2013-08-13 16:39:29 +0000 UTC]
I guess, all things considered, it was a pretty shallow offer. It didn't seem to hold any weight and he didn't make a hugely compelling argument. I wasn't particularly surprised that Marcy turned it down. It just sort of read like any conversation a hero has with a villain ("Join us! Because reasons!" "No! I'll never join you!") It was nice to see that this particular villain has a head on his shoulders and refuses to lay out his plans for the hero. And he lampshaded the whole thing, which was amusing.
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-13 16:53:32 +0000 UTC]
Yea. I guess so. And I was going for that, the whole directly avoid the cliche and make sure people know I did.
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partial-quatrefoil In reply to MJTism [2013-08-13 17:06:06 +0000 UTC]
What were you hoping to achieve with their conversation?
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-13 17:36:52 +0000 UTC]
Not important. Clearly didn't work and it was cheesy anyway.
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partial-quatrefoil In reply to MJTism [2013-08-13 17:48:36 +0000 UTC]
Clearly I've hurt your feelings, but I didn't mean to. Tell me what you were shooting for here.
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-13 21:34:21 +0000 UTC]
You didn't hurt my feelings. But if you really want to know then fine. I was kinda shooting for a bit of prejudice that Marcy had to face because of her parentage. Then have her realize that, even though Albion is telling the truth, he's wrong because all it takes is a few people accepting you to get a foothold in life. IDK I really didn't lead up to or elaborate on that enough.
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partial-quatrefoil In reply to MJTism [2013-08-14 15:37:41 +0000 UTC]
I think you hit the nail on the head -- you just didn't elaborate enough on this subject. I like the message you're trying to convey and I think the fact that you've thought about it reveals what we already know about you: you're a thoughtful type of guy. That tells me that you're perfectly capable of conveying this message if you put your mind to it. Personally, I'd have Marcy agonize a bit more about the decision. Like, have Albion offer and be all solicitous and say "Don't answer me now. Think about it" and then put her up in a nicely-furnished tent with all sorts of amenities (except freedom) and have Marcy sort of feel guilty and relieved all at once. And since she's stuck, she has time to ruminate about the offer and then she realizes that she really is loyal to Camp Jupiter and that, as you so aptly put it: "all it takes is a few people accepting you to get a foothold in life." So she goes back to Albion and essentially spits in his face (or maybe she really does spit in his face, because Albion's a jerk).
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-15 00:12:33 +0000 UTC]
Huh. I wish I'd done that. But I refuse to retcon my story so I'll just go on from here.
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-15 00:55:03 +0000 UTC]
Glad you think so.
You wouldn't happen to be getting lots of comments from a certain scifi nerd, would you?
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-15 01:46:48 +0000 UTC]
Dan's a great guy. I highly recommend getting to know him a bit. He's trying to get his feet wet as a writer as well.
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partial-quatrefoil In reply to MJTism [2013-08-15 01:53:25 +0000 UTC]
I'm definitely getting to know him, and he seems like a great guy.
Though, I've gotta ask -- how does he feel about homosexuality? I mean, it won't change the way I interact with him, obviously, but he's reading through my Percy Jackson fic and he's gonna run across it eventually. Also with just about all my other characters in the history of ever.
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-15 02:13:37 +0000 UTC]
He was one of the people that helped me out of my homophobic phase. He's just fine.
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MJTism In reply to partial-quatrefoil [2013-08-15 02:30:26 +0000 UTC]
Can you go to my tumblr real quick? There is a picture of me and a video you have got to see.
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partial-quatrefoil In reply to MJTism [2013-08-15 13:29:54 +0000 UTC]
You mean the photo of you after practice and the Teen Titans video? Loving the hair, and I'm so, so glad they changed the show.
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MJTism In reply to Perseus1258 [2013-08-13 13:58:34 +0000 UTC]
It has been far too long, hasn't it?
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Perseus1258 In reply to MJTism [2013-08-14 04:20:53 +0000 UTC]
yes, still pretty good though, keep em coming
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MJTism In reply to Perseus1258 [2013-08-14 04:22:23 +0000 UTC]
I will. And I did try to keep the rust off while this was on hiatus.
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