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MLP-Silver-Quill β€” A Princess' Tears - Part 8

Published: 2013-06-28 20:59:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 118714; Favourites: 927; Downloads: 269
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Shot through the heart,
And you're to blame!
Twiley, you don't know
Clutter's name.

Got this one done faster thanks to the fact that background elements already existed. It always amazes me how complex MLP background are despite their simple appearance.

I'm sure this is going to come up sooner or later, so allow me to tackle this topic ahead of time: Flash Sentry. I've noticed over at Derpibooru that the Twilight x Flash shipping is gaining momentum. It seems the introduction of the movie love interest has opened the flood gates.

If you're a fan of this couple, more power to you. I am not on board. Not yet, anyway. Having already witnessed the princess marry the knight with Cadance and Shining Armor, I don't see the appeal in repeating the same theme. And while Flash's limited characterization in the movie gives fan fic writers and artists a lot of room for creativity, I can't get excited as Flash doesn't seem to have a lot of depth.

I enjoy this story I'm telling. I enjoy working on it, and I enjoy seeing other people's reactions. So I'm sticking to what I enjoy while not harassing people who might disagree. We'll see what the future holds.

Thanks for reading and happy 4th of July!
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gigilove1916 In reply to ??? [2020-09-22 15:28:51 +0000 UTC]

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Riverfox237 [2017-04-19 18:55:54 +0000 UTC]

You have a lot of weaknesses, Clutter. XD

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wildhawk441 [2017-03-22 05:52:50 +0000 UTC]

Last panel reminds me of a Yugioh:GX Abridged joke - "Ahh!! [You punched me] Straight in my life points!"

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flamefox699 [2017-02-26 20:32:26 +0000 UTC]

That's a lot of weaknesses(and a big ego)

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77madman [2017-02-16 00:39:21 +0000 UTC]

As a man who has exactly 142 weaknesses, this guy is a wimp.....and insane for jumping out a window for Β a doll, just go and get it off the ground.

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GameAddictedDragon [2017-02-12 07:34:05 +0000 UTC]

This guy's got a lot of weaknesses...

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PerryPickny [2016-07-21 21:19:57 +0000 UTC]

SHOT THROUGH THE HEART!!!! XD

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Brianna330 [2016-06-12 06:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Oopsees!

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erictheblue [2016-01-16 20:27:06 +0000 UTC]

this reminded me of a gag in an online comic "dmfa":
this character named "Able" is impersonating "Metlitz" for complicated reasons...
Abel thinks to himself, "things seem to be going well, but there are, like, 100 things that could go wrong-"
someone Able has never met says, "oh, hi, Merlitz!"
Able thinks, "wrong thing #48..."

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Cutepegasister121 [2016-01-12 16:34:48 +0000 UTC]

is that your ego or your heart??? WinkWinkNudgeNudgesaynomore

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HeardDdragon [2015-10-28 22:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Aaa a purty poemΒ 
iooks like hicue
and i were much agree whith you
the simpal look
of backgrounds is harder than thay seem

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Masha26th [2015-09-26 21:08:40 +0000 UTC]

lol im surprised pinkie didnt pop out of nowhere and say:be careful mr talk box arrow u almost hurt his friend ego
(THAT IS SO SOMETHING SHE WOULD SAY XD0

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Bluestar629 [2015-08-31 22:12:45 +0000 UTC]

... aw shoot! My cuteness factor exploded again! Argh my 912th weakness!

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Ballsack100 [2015-08-25 17:59:59 +0000 UTC]

I play my part!
And you play your game!

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Riverfox237 [2015-08-03 16:05:20 +0000 UTC]

I love that he has so many weaknesses that he has to categorize them. XD Of course, everyone does; it just says a lot about him that he feels the NEED to categorize them.

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TinkyBlue [2015-06-20 09:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm starting to wonder what is the complete list of his weaknesses...

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Bleyk36 In reply to TinkyBlue [2015-07-27 13:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Hahahha true that.

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SweetCaptain77 [2015-06-08 21:47:42 +0000 UTC]

Ooohhh...nasty hurting right there.

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flutter-butter55678 [2015-05-12 20:31:30 +0000 UTC]

OW....

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PixelBlujay [2015-04-07 10:00:42 +0000 UTC]

words shots in the heart

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Recon1996 [2015-03-24 22:54:31 +0000 UTC]

"Twilight tried saying Clutterstep's name but she never learned It... And he's gone.

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I-MrBronyMan-I [2015-03-14 18:25:14 +0000 UTC]

holy weaknesses

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LunarEclipseUnicorn [2015-02-24 13:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Rescue her doll... Is that Phantom of the Opera reference? (Since Raoul de Chagny rescued Christine Daae's scarf from sea when they were young?)

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Meanlucario [2015-01-28 01:21:30 +0000 UTC]

How many weaknesses does he have?

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turkey18eye [2015-01-10 08:23:07 +0000 UTC]

what with this colt is he clumsy or full of badluck

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snapdragon12 In reply to turkey18eye [2015-01-30 22:38:03 +0000 UTC]

Considering thisΒ  comic and from what we see in "A dodgy business" I think he is unlucky so that other people can be lucky. A kinda inverse jinx.

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Lighting45 In reply to snapdragon12 [2017-10-20 09:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of Nagito from danganronpa he's unlucky but other people gets luky from him

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VengeanceOfFlames [2014-12-31 19:46:37 +0000 UTC]

So great xD

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MissTicci [2014-12-28 09:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Best. Line. EVER

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JNinelives [2014-12-22 18:05:28 +0000 UTC]

This guy is hilarious and endearing XD.
Nice job with the speech bubble Β !

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Warriors77495 [2014-11-28 04:05:35 +0000 UTC]

18th weakness!

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SomeRandomMinion [2014-11-07 08:16:34 +0000 UTC]

I love how there's actually an imprint on Clutterstep's chest from Twilight's speech bubble, like it's really floating there. XD

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tyruvelp [2014-09-14 17:28:41 +0000 UTC]

i read the first part of ur description and heard the mucis playing in the back of my headΒ 

do us all a favor write the rest of the parody plz lolΒ 
plz??Β 

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RainbowDashieMLPFan [2014-09-10 06:15:46 +0000 UTC]

damn shame

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Artision [2014-09-06 06:43:49 +0000 UTC]

"You're... I never learned your name..."

* Snort *... !?! Best Line Ever!

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Coletrain12 In reply to Artision [2014-11-26 20:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Houdini punch pain

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Alanna-QueenofHearts [2014-09-06 01:11:16 +0000 UTC]

I've read first on youtube and reading again on here (and faving them ^^) your A Princess Tears comic. I hadn't really read or paid much mind to any MLP comic, not much faith in people to make things that are holesum (is that the right word?) anymore these days but I never knew this side of Deviantart existed. Glad I finally visited your page ^^ -bows politely- you are very talented. Maybe one day if I can ever get over my nerves with my writing I could get an opinion if you ever have free time? You seem to know something about good writing -rubs back of head- I know you're very busy though like everyone else in the world has places to go and be and work to do and families and so forth.

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ButterscotchRipple77 [2014-08-01 18:04:43 +0000 UTC]

lol
the first part of the description got me

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fotland42 [2014-07-20 01:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Are tiny knives your first weakness?

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Cadence097 [2014-07-13 01:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Last panel killed me XD

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ChaudStarpower [2014-07-10 04:53:13 +0000 UTC]

that last panel XD

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LunarSnowflake4 [2014-07-04 21:54:23 +0000 UTC]

lol at the last panel!

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ULTRADJ4EVER [2014-06-30 06:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, in all fairness, she didn't learn his name back then

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pkemonlover122333 [2014-06-25 02:09:38 +0000 UTC]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE THAT SONG(about to exploed from that song)

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tank2259 [2014-06-20 13:52:21 +0000 UTC]

Dayum thats hard

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Sorrowscoldfrost [2014-06-05 22:45:03 +0000 UTC]

I never learned your name... XD ouch! Poor guy!

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TeamInTheDarkness [2014-05-31 07:53:03 +0000 UTC]

18 weakness.... 27 weakness... ok seriously, how many weakness does he have? XD, im loving this dude so far ^^.

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Vashthepsicho [2014-05-22 11:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Bon jovi? nice!

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Sonic-Rainboom-4ever [2014-05-02 04:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Lol, love the description! xD

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91vadpire [2014-04-27 02:16:01 +0000 UTC]

can i make a human chibi version of your story?
i WILL credit

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