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Published: 2012-02-17 07:42:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 3973; Favourites: 115; Downloads: 105
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Some HW for Environment Design at CDD. NEED CRIT I need 5 of these by monday, but I want them to be awesome! THANKS*Also, I know the perspective is way off. HALP ME.
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I like it. It has a nice, murky atmosphere. The people on the walkway could do with a tad more detail, just to help with recognition. The mech is awesome. No real criticism there. I love the glowing pylons disappearing off into the fog. I think the text is a problem. It stands out too much. Everything else is surrounded by a mist, with soft glows and blurred details. The text looks a little slapped on. You might be able to add a little gaussian blur too it, maybe drop the opacity. I think it might look better if it appeared similar to the lights above it, graphically. I know this was done quick, and I think your technique fits the style. Good work.
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tilt the camera slightly less, enlarge the mech, put something in the immediate forground and maybe one more detail pass for good measure D.
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Gate M is not for pussies. They have a robot guarding it
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Love the mech, all i could think of to add would be some sort of VTOL flying through the open space on the right and like 8ft spider said some guards on the underpass on the left.
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Can't critique because I am not a good artist but, sharpen the images and add some life?(color, perhaps sunset so you still get the gloomy effect I am getting or add street lights if you want to do shading.
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Just a few things:
maybe, armed guards on walkway
make sure to light the scene with the lights shown in the scene (green or yellow lights giving green or yellow highlights)
make the "GATE M" hologram larger, maybe give it a rectangle holo-frame
Best of luck!
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I'm not good at giving critiques, but so far this looks really good.
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I'm no artist and can't give you much crit, but I would like to say that I really like that mech and would like to see a more fleshed-out version sometime.
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Sorry no time for serious crits. Just a quick drop to say it is a nice start
The text : you should have drawn it in speed mode too. Takes too much attention me think.
Verts tank look good
Keep up !
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Thanks! Yeah I actually drew this very quickly, just spent more time on the mecha
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