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Notes in a Teacup for Tzara I.
theatre melodies added
eccentric proceedings
interjections between
numerous Mysteries
theatrical modes
stemmed participation
somewhere, something
faith challenging layers
projects
from
dramatic, experimental
strange bird
in the great matters of style
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Comments: 4
it's soft but sharp at the same time!
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ya can say these streets are rivers
ya can call these rivers streets
ya can tell ya self ya dreaming buddy
but no sleep runs this deep
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i do believe this may be one of your best poems! very interesting approach.
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The way you have sewn the words together, not tightly but loosely and your choice of words provokes my thoughts... I am thinking about performance, fluidity of thoughts flowing in different directions, yet with a direction of their own and it's all happening in a teacup in my mind, which is a metaphor for a universe of its own and a holding within so that the contents can move around without spilling...
Love it and the 'strange bird' ...
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