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WTH Page 5 but haven't submitted the page 4 yet!!
No, I haven't.
Yes, I make them in the most convient order to me...
If you feel like waiting a couple more days to get the page 4, i'm fine with it, but I'd rather get some feedback on this one
Reference:
Ash to ash Project:
Book 1 - Metamorphosis,
Episode III: Evolve,
Page 5.
The Action:
Ash cuts his horns
Poor thing, huh...
And make sure you remember about this mysterious "her"
Not sure I'm going to tell taht part of the story rather soon...
But I definetly will
Various Comments:
I'm tired... can't think about anything to say. Just watch out for the page 4...
Next page:
Coming soon.
Previous page:
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Comments: 22
Your work is absolutely beautiful! I look forward to your upcoming pages. ^_^
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Oh really great work so far on these comic ^^ I really love Ash very awesome character and ouchies for his horns TT
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These pages have all been beautiful! And I'm really intrigued about the story, so definitely giving you a watch. XD <3
Also, WOW at doing all the pages in color!! Where do you find the time? >>;
But I will say though, the page looks great but did anyone else notice how he pulls the blade out with his human hand but then cuts with the beast hand? XD;;
Doesn't really matter though, he could always have passed it to his other hand. xD
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o_O O_O
T_T
BUT HORNS ARE PRETTTTTYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but i totally know where he's coming from with the cutting them off... <_< somehow... =_=
more comic, please?
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Woah, fantastic page~ O: <3333 It's defnitely one of my new favourites.
(Only suggestion is to change 'then' to 'than' in the 'and that was more then enough' sentence. ^__^ <3 otherwise it's brilliant. )
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Your really doing a fantastic job on these pages
As for feed back the only thing I see that needs a bit of tweeking is giving panel 5 a bit more of a distinction between character and setting. The color should help guide the reader to what you want them to focus on, but right now at first glance the character and setting blend together a little. Maybe try toning down the saturation a bit.... And that is really stretching to find something to criticize. It is coming out great!
~Chris
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Interesting. I'm not sure whether to feel happy or sad for him... I suppose I'll figure it out as the story unfolds.
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I love the way you coloured the knife. *detests colouring metals and such*
Awesome page~
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Poor thing! ;___________;
Cutting his horns off. ):
Very magical glowing forest.xD<3
<3
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awww....so he's not gonna hunt naked
He has a very pretty face.
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Umm well I think I will deal with teh hunting naked part - but later on. For now I just need to tell a whole piece of the story
Glad you like him^^
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So there will be naked hunting?
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nice detail on the horns, feel really sorry for the guy 
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No...Ash cut off his horns...noo ash you fool *slaps*
Please continue..oh pretty please!
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Poor Ash, I loved his horns. Awsome job as always. But I think this is my favorite page so far. I really love the colors you've chosen for this.
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