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Published: 2013-12-25 22:58:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 69963; Favourites: 1277; Downloads: 1260
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Merry x-mas everybody! ...my latest drawing doesn't have that much to to with the holiday spirit haha, but who cares ^^Related content
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When I see this, I immediately think of the very rare girl you catch just a glimpse of somewhere. She's captivating, stunning. You immediately want a better look, and like that, she disappears back into the crowd. It's like I'm looking over a balcony on a cruise ship down at her. Only perfection graces my consciousness in the short time I have to enjoy her beauty. She's gone before any imperfection is perceived. A situation like that is a blissful missed opportunity, something we've all had before. That feeling is something you've instilled in this. The short and finite glimpse of something perfect. Your line work and coloring is improving dramatically over this and some of your other recent pieces. This has hit me quite hard, I must say.
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That's very poetic and beautiful, thank you!
And I really know that feeling as well, your putting it into words perfectly.
I'm glad you see improvements, never gonna stop aiming for the top! Β
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Another realistic drawing, and another very well done drawing! Looking like some excellent work has been done here, but here's my critique for this!
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Overall, very well done. A picture that's good technically and in terms of quality and artistic ability.
And a last note: Unless she's still in the store in this picture, she really needs to stop shoplifting her bikinis without even taking the tags off.
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Ok, I kind of figured that, that's cool. 
Hah I knew you weren't totally serious about the bg
Yeah that's true, she could fit a whole store in there haha Β
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Well, you certainly don't fall into that trap, IMO. You've got a fairly wide variety of styles, from the moderately anime to the hyper-real, so you've got a lot of stuff going for you, I think.
Phew...just making sure. Sometimes people think I am...
Pfft, I think those boobs might have to go a little past your comfort zone for that...not that I'd complain, mind you.
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Good to hear! ^^
Haha, I know the feeling and sarcasm can be a buttpain in the form of text
Maybe hah, do I smell a small hint of an idea for a future commission of massive proportions (so to speak)
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It's all true, too.
Yeah, but what can you do, right? Gotta wait until they invent holographic projections so people can just listen to every comment you post.
Wink wink, nudge nudge?
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Haha yeah that would be something!
Maybe a little bit of *wink, wink* ^^
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Though I'm sure you'd like to use the projections for something else entirely...
Also, welcome back from your little vacation.
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Hah what are you implying there?
Thanks, if you can call eleven hour shifts at work for "vacation" u___u Β Β ^^
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Oh, I think you have an idea of what I'm talking about...something tells me that drawing up there would be a little more three dimensional...
Aww, that's pretty lametastic. From your last message, I totally thought you were still enjoying time off from New Years.
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You may be right about that
Totally... No, my 2 days off were nice but over in a jiffy ;(
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I knew it...you boob fiend.
Laaaaaaame. That's what I call cruddy.
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First off; do you like my realistic drawings like this one the most? Or do you fancy the more cartoon-looking drawings like "So Exciting!"?
Happy for the pros, happy for the cons.
Haha I like that you are applauding my fashion sense, never got that one before. 
I agree about the eye, it could be a bit higher.. I don't really see the "nitpick" but I may have stared too long at this image by now haha.. No background was an intentional choice and I don't really think it's always necessary, and besides there's a background, it's a... wall heh.. yeah... Hastily lighting, I don't know I don't always want to smooth out every brush-stroke. I've more and more realized that there's a charm to visible strokes and such, personally I think it can make a drawing/painting look more "alive". I like the outcome here, but it's a very subjective matter of course.
And no, don't worry, this lady ain't no shoplifter; I imagine her standing in front of a mirror in a store's fitting room.
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I'll admit, I do. I kind of like the thought of being able to imagine someone like this actually walking around out there somewhere, know what I mean? But I try to rate both as fairly as possible, regardless of the art style.
Well, that sort of colour and bikini pattern definitely fits her hair colour and skin tone. I approve of it! And yeah, you did a really good job, considering the angle. It looks like it would've been a challenge to get right, but you did a good job.
The nitpick would be easier to see if I could draw it out for you...but it really is a nitpick, so it's not that important.
No background is cool. I was more poking fun, hence the lack of REAL criticism to that point.
And yeah, that's totally understandable. I find that it really depends on the image, but I was more referring to if you were going for a fully realistic image as opposed to realistic but still artsy. Since you weren't, it's no big deal.
To be fair, with boobs as big as that, she could probably do some pretty successful shoplifting...a great place to hide things, and most people would be too busy staring to notice her grabbing things
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you stupid bitch lesbian, you look so alluring, her large breasts, you completely mesmerized, in its ultimate expression obsession, lost the lesbian slut trial?
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Say what?
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Ops, reply up top!
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I think the image was pertinent as I see jingle bells here
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This is probably the best drawing you have.Β There are a lot of good ones, but this is one of your very best.
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Not sure if that's really a 'bikini', but she looks great in it.
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No? Maybe it's her who make it look like something else, as she would with any piece of clothing I believe
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Actually, my thought is that she's too well endowed for a real bikini. That's a good thing. Her face and eyes add to the attraction.
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Yeah that's probably true
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Very sexy! I'd like to see at least one of the smaller bikinis that didn't make the cut
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Haha, any bikini looks small on her though ^^
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Well, it could have been about holiday spirit if she was under my tree XD
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"Santa, I've been REALLY good this year..." 
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