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Incarnadine91 [2009-10-09 10:07:37 +0000 UTC]
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Yay, it's finally finished! I've said before that I really like your symbolic representations of people, which must be even harder to make when you only have what people tell you. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> I'm flattered that you made mine so glamerous, lol!
Your style is a very interesting one and I like the smooth lines of the main character. Her expression is really good too, as is the eye beneath the robe. I especially like the colours you've chosen and how every aspect of the picture has some sort of second meaning to it - especially the spider, that sums me up very well e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" />
If there is anything that could be improved it's the shading of this piece. The highlight on the eye and the shadows on the spider's legs are very good, but the main body of the spider and the skull seem rather flat. I advise deepening shadows and not just putting them on the edge of the object - for a curved surface like the back end there would be a smooth gardient all over. My other comment would be that the background colours are a bit strident and, while you chose them for a reason, the maze is not immediately visible beacuse they are so similar. Try darkening one or both of them to make tose lovely patterns stand out!
Overall, though, I really do love it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="38" height="15" alt="" title="Hug" /> Thank you very much!
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bubbles46853 [2013-06-02 13:25:03 +0000 UTC]
Awww, she's cute!!! I wanna hug her!
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bubbles46853 In reply to MrParaduo [2013-06-04 20:17:16 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Would she mind a hug?
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bubbles46853 In reply to MrParaduo [2013-06-04 21:45:28 +0000 UTC]
Awww, thanks! *walks up to her* Um...hi there, miss...you're really cute...may I hug you? *hugs her softly if she says yes*
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bubbles46853 In reply to MrParaduo [2013-06-20 16:21:37 +0000 UTC]
Awww, thank you! *hugs her softly*
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xTheDemonFoxx [2012-03-13 20:38:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm very sure that's a Jorougumo, not a Tsuchigumo...
As the Tsuchigumo is supposed to be the MALE form of the same monster.
...Unless it's her actual name...
No offense, though... Just like correcting people.
It's a nice image, too!
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viatervhec [2010-06-12 21:50:56 +0000 UTC]
this is my favorite, of your gallery. Keep it up!
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SilverDragonRayne1 In reply to MrParaduo [2009-10-14 19:12:37 +0000 UTC]
Yah Well if i give you a lyric's to a song can you draw me a picture that suits me to it?
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skyph [2009-10-09 21:25:37 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very nice linework there, and that's one interesting character design, kind of mysterious and dangerous looking.
The only thing that kinda bothers me with this is the shading, I feel it could've been detailed slightly better. The texture work, however, looks great~ Overall, nice work~
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cerebus360 [2009-10-09 10:37:10 +0000 UTC]
Paint Tool SAI...sighs
The lines are very crisp and neat and the shades of purple go very well together. I also like your description of her and how it is also symbolistic. Great job. :3
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