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MrParaduo — Winter's Lord in Chains

Published: 2009-12-19 17:45:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1069; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 46
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Description A tedious but satisfying commission order by one .
Also, Polaris (the character) belongs to the good commissioner.

I've actually prepared to give ye my own little gospel on the deity of Ice and snow, thus do I ask you to read the following with the voice of Ian Mckellen.

"Upon the year of the Rising Moons of Eldamari Damaltakesh, west of the Evergreen Mountains, did so come to shift the seasons of light towards the coming dawn of the Equinoxia del Halvrune. Through the arrogance of a God bitter for loss of heart and compassion for the deities seated within the celestial court did Polaris, Lord of Winter, Ice and Snow, come to forge a mysterious legend from his palace beneath the earth, guarded by the Frost Wyrm, Gilgadramon.
From Blackest Ice and Whitest Snow did he breath a hollow form of life that shaped and bended itself into sentience, and though imperfect to the creations of his rivals, so did Polaris learn the secret of life, and release his greatest weapon upon the world of the immortals.
The winter beasts stepped upon earth and melted water upon it before air howled through them like the wail of something barely borne upon the lands of creation, when the birth of The Great Sun Dodysiusasamus gave the flame of warm light to final transform the abominable creatures into the children of Spring, forever left to be known as Humans, and never more to be bound to serve the Lord of Winter.
For his violation of the Grand Covenant, Polaris was sealed within his own element and damned to live within purgatorial exile, never to use the secret powers he had discovered through his experimentations, it is said that Deimos, the demi god of battle did shatter the bones of sorcerous god's hands and arms to prevent the deity from wielding his halberd of frost, before finally chaining the lord of ice with crystals borne of Limbo's very heart."

Book of The Edea- 12:3:42

Wonder if oxiemora will try my idea out.
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Comments: 56

Kinai-Ryuu [2009-12-19 17:54:10 +0000 UTC]

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When i first looked at this i had to stare at it for a bit, this is truly beautiful work. The colrs blend wonderfully ad you've done a great job in shading e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
Now heres what i suggest for you my dear, all i have to suggest to you is

ONLY THIS: the hands, try making them a little bigger next time e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />, everything in this picturre flows amazingly, this has to be one of my favorites now, just keep up that shading and color technique like i know you know how to do very well! BTW have i told you i love this picture??

LOL e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap" /> KUDOS

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MrParaduo In reply to Kinai-Ryuu [2009-12-19 17:55:42 +0000 UTC]

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pmarzzz [2010-07-01 01:19:39 +0000 UTC]

TTHHIISS IISS AAWWEESSOOMMEE!!!!!!!! Will you be my watcher?

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MrParaduo In reply to pmarzzz [2010-07-02 21:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Uhrm...okay.

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02dellerj [2009-12-21 19:21:35 +0000 UTC]

a lovely piece of art

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MrParaduo In reply to 02dellerj [2009-12-21 20:08:43 +0000 UTC]

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Incarnadine91 [2009-12-20 15:57:24 +0000 UTC]

Need to work on your shading my dear (as well as the hand thing, but enough people have told you about that already) I know you wanted to go for the glow effect but it looks like you've gone over the lines a lot - also just "splotching" with a darker colour doesn't always work when shading. Lines are lovely and smooth - better than mine! - but try bringing your colouring into focus, maybe using a harder brush? it's hard to explain, sorr if I haven't been clear enough

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MrParaduo In reply to Incarnadine91 [2009-12-20 16:03:49 +0000 UTC]

It's supposed to be snow!!

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Incarnadine91 In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 17:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Snow isn't fuzzy Harder brush, I recommend "paintbrush opacity flow" if you have a tablet to use it with.

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MrParaduo In reply to Incarnadine91 [2009-12-20 17:41:14 +0000 UTC]

to you too.

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Incarnadine91 In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 22:12:11 +0000 UTC]

But you see what I'm saying, yes?

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MrParaduo In reply to Incarnadine91 [2009-12-20 22:22:26 +0000 UTC]

'esh.

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Incarnadine91 In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 22:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Good boy *pats*

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MrParaduo In reply to Incarnadine91 [2009-12-20 22:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh shut up and answer mah latest post on the mission.

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Incarnadine91 In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 22:41:05 +0000 UTC]

I haaaaave - waiting for yoooooou...

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MrParaduo In reply to Incarnadine91 [2009-12-20 22:46:25 +0000 UTC]

And I've answered, need you to do it again pwease.

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Incarnadine91 In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 22:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Done. Tehee, I think you're going to be going on a little.. trip

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MrParaduo In reply to Incarnadine91 [2009-12-20 23:05:03 +0000 UTC]

See for yourself.

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SilverDragonRayne1 [2009-12-20 06:05:12 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful! I like it :3

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MrParaduo In reply to SilverDragonRayne1 [2009-12-20 11:02:23 +0000 UTC]

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Dragon-Minded [2009-12-20 05:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Awesome coloring job

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MrParaduo In reply to Dragon-Minded [2009-12-20 11:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Dragon-Minded In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 12:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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MrParaduo In reply to Dragon-Minded [2009-12-20 13:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Btw, what's specifically do you like about it? The design, the texture, the atmosphere?

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Dragon-Minded In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 15:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Hum, would you like me to write a critique ?

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MrParaduo In reply to Dragon-Minded [2009-12-20 15:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Nah, you don't have to do anything for me. I was just curious.

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Dragon-Minded In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 15:38:36 +0000 UTC]

I could if you really wanted to ^^ I got time to kill now x3

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MrParaduo In reply to Dragon-Minded [2009-12-20 16:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...eh, sure, why not?

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Dragon-Minded In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 16:53:32 +0000 UTC]

There done

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MrParaduo In reply to Dragon-Minded [2009-12-20 17:00:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Dragon-Minded In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 17:10:01 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^_^

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OxieMora [2009-12-20 02:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Whoa. O.o
That's really awesome..I can't..even describe it.. I love it so much. <3333

And the description! xD That's pretty awesome. It's almost how my story sounds (except you write a LOT better)..and all...informative..and..awesome..
and.. yeah..

Oh, what's the book of edea? XD I'm a little slow here on your comments.

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MrParaduo In reply to OxieMora [2009-12-20 02:41:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh the book? I made it up! Thought it sound more profound if the whole bit of text came from a holy book or something. But remembah! It was from your words that all this was able to be made! So consider yourself a muse. I hope something here will help you with working on your story one day too.

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OxieMora In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-21 00:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh. xD Lol.

Hehehehh, I feel special.

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MrParaduo In reply to OxieMora [2009-12-21 01:10:57 +0000 UTC]

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matthewsloan [2009-12-19 23:43:08 +0000 UTC]

This is really wonderful!!

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MrParaduo In reply to matthewsloan [2009-12-19 23:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm relieved that so many people actually liked it since I was doing my best to study 's techniques and mix it with my own...wonder if that's a bad thing or not.

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matthewsloan In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-20 00:01:17 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure. I don't think it is a bad thing to experiment. How can we grow artistically if we don't try new things

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MrParaduo In reply to matthewsloan [2009-12-20 00:04:10 +0000 UTC]

True enough.

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Lexeaus1234 [2009-12-19 19:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah, now I truly see the full power of the "Full View" button.
Its great. Ah, it reminds me of the ocean, though, that may not be what you had in mind.
And I do be siding with kinai-ryuu, your hands do be too small! You could always use one of my Anime Resource sheets *hint hint*...
Head = 1 head height
Body = 3 head heights
Hands = 1 head height
Legs = 3 head heights

Simplez

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MrParaduo In reply to Lexeaus1234 [2009-12-19 20:01:23 +0000 UTC]

to you too.

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michaelmas [2009-12-19 18:15:43 +0000 UTC]

Simple and elegant blending of minimal colors with solid geometric structure and lighting - very sad and noble, like a funereal statue

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MrParaduo In reply to michaelmas [2009-12-19 18:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. A dark and bitter heart who's only solace is that of the light upon the snow as well.

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RaineSlave [2009-12-19 17:58:29 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, looks very nice! I like the colors and the misty feel of it. The little background you slapped on in the author comment fits in nicely too...goes well with the picture.

There's only 2 little things though. Her ear is off. It's attached to her neck, not her face (where it should be). Her hand also looks dead (the visible one) I get it's suppose to be just sitting there, but it looks too tense.

That's it though, everything else looks nice.

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MrParaduo In reply to RaineSlave [2009-12-19 18:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Polaris is a "he" according to the commissioner.

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RaineSlave In reply to MrParaduo [2009-12-19 18:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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MrParaduo In reply to RaineSlave [2009-12-19 18:04:03 +0000 UTC]

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