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Description "So there I was, surrounded by rebels, deep in the catacombs of Ba Sing Se." A pop as the campfire finally consumed a young branch. "No way out in sight. It seemed hopeless, but your Gramp-Gramp wasn't about to go down without a fight."

Quiet reigned in the campfire-illuminated clearing. Some distance within the Earth Kingdom woods, the grey-bearded storyteller wove his tale for his rapt audience.

"So I pulled my trusty boomerang from its sheath, hurled it at their leader- "

"And somehow," a familiar voice intruded, "he not only managed to miss, but got hit with his own weapon when it finally returned." Snickers and giggles broke out. The usurped storyteller glared at the blurred vision of his wife as she approached. The firelight danced and snapped, throwing light and shadow in ever-changing patterns.

"No interrupting the storyteller!"

She snorted.  "It's a good thing I did, or these kids would go home thinking you were some kind of hero or something." Outright laughter met that declaration. She turned from him to address the children of four different nations that sat around the fire. "Come on kids, time to head home. Camping trip's been called off." She silenced the moans and groans with a few simple words. "Grandpa Aang is back with Tenzin."





In the relative quiet after the children had scampered off toward home, storyteller and wife worked together to clean up.

"Remind me to thank Aang later," Sokka confessed as he finally gave in to the pain and massaged his back. "I think I may be getting too old for nights in the woods with all of the younger gaangkids."

"He admits it!' she declared gleefully. "And here I thought what good sense you had left with your memory."

"My memory's just fine."

"Sure it is. That's why you were about to feature as the hero in a tale where I had to come and save you." The shadows that met Sokka's eyes when he turned and looked up to protest stilled his tongue. He blinked, rubbed his eyes. They were still there.

She was facing him, he knew. He closed his eyes for a moment, recalling the slight twist that always came to her grin when she mocked him. A sigh.

"Have I told you today how beautiful you are?"

Toph paused at the soft voice. A gentle breeze blew through the woods: she vaguely wondered if it had come from the sea, or some feat Aang had performed to entertain the kids.

"No, but you just did."

"And I'm going to keep telling you. Every day. Even when... "

Dropping her own bundle of gear, she walked across the clearing and sat next to him. He twisted into a more comfortable position, resting one arm across her shoulders and drawing her close until she could lean her head against his shoulder.

"Katara came back with Aang. I explained what's been going on, and she'll take a look at you tonight when we get home." He was shaking his head before she finished.

"And if there's nothing she can do?"

"Well then." Raising her head, she grasped his chin and turned him towards her.  Using both hands to orient herself, she turned her sightless eyes into his dimming ones. "You've been my eyes for almost fifty years. Now, I'll just have to be yours."
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Comments: 30

Maran-Zelde [2012-10-26 01:45:15 +0000 UTC]

Short, sweet, and a little sad. I love it!

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hithereflamingo [2012-10-18 02:13:42 +0000 UTC]

BAHHHHHHHH ALL THE FEELS

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paintedbluerose [2010-12-23 01:56:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm just visting your page for random nonesense, and I see this little fic. The first line caught my eye and I knew it was Sokka. Just KNEW it was him. I laughed to myself and had to read it. It's cute. I like the end of it. Kinda sad about Sokka's vision thing, but I think it would be sweet. With Toph there and all...

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myah5000 In reply to paintedbluerose [2010-12-23 11:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Bittersweet, isn't it. But not completely unexpected really, with all the abuse Sokka takes All those blows to the head would cause some damage eventually

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paintedbluerose In reply to myah5000 [2010-12-24 04:11:08 +0000 UTC]

True. I'm surprised he isn't completely mentally handicapped yet. Or is he...?

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Kira73 [2010-10-18 22:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet. I really like the Aangkids term in there.

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myah5000 In reply to Kira73 [2010-10-20 17:24:53 +0000 UTC]

So do I. You know Sokka's the type to call them that

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JoeMerl [2010-10-18 15:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Aw, that's sort of sweet.

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myah5000 In reply to JoeMerl [2010-10-20 17:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Aren't they just? I feel like hugging them right there

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7StepsToHell [2010-10-17 16:59:12 +0000 UTC]

Very cool. Great job

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myah5000 In reply to 7StepsToHell [2010-10-20 17:25:45 +0000 UTC]

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Rudolfs0807 [2010-10-17 07:24:24 +0000 UTC]

this is just too cute! excellent job!

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myah5000 In reply to Rudolfs0807 [2010-10-20 17:25:54 +0000 UTC]

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kogarocks12 [2010-10-16 20:46:39 +0000 UTC]

aaw, sad! poor sokka!

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myah5000 In reply to kogarocks12 [2010-10-17 01:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Really? I lol'd

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Sepulchral-Roses [2010-10-16 16:23:03 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. Tokka in their old age - it's beautiful.

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myah5000 In reply to Sepulchral-Roses [2010-10-16 17:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Quilly's request: she really knew what she wanted

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Sepulchral-Roses In reply to myah5000 [2010-10-16 19:52:14 +0000 UTC]

She made a good choice then, but you wrote it perfectly.

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daughterofthestars [2010-10-16 01:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Eeeee such a good ending for them. So often there are coming-of age stories, but what of the leaving-of age? What of dealing with being old and losing that which once physically defined you? It's gotta be tough, and this is just a taste of that!

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myah5000 In reply to daughterofthestars [2010-10-16 17:22:58 +0000 UTC]

It opens up all kinds of doors, doesn't it? Aang dealing with arthritis, Sokka going blind, Katara turning grey and wrinkled

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keroseneflame [2010-10-16 00:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww!!! I like golden years Tokka! This was amazing!

Well done. Bravo! Insta-

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myah5000 In reply to keroseneflame [2010-10-16 17:21:43 +0000 UTC]

I love that emote.

But this one's better

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keroseneflame In reply to myah5000 [2010-10-18 01:39:41 +0000 UTC]

I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR THAT!!!!! EPIC!!!

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QuillArtist [2010-10-16 00:32:16 +0000 UTC]



You, madame, are a word artiste. It's gorgeously wonderful.

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myah5000 In reply to QuillArtist [2010-10-16 17:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Glad you liked it

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Capt-BA [2010-10-16 00:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Well done, pardner. The changes add a nice touch.

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myah5000 In reply to Capt-BA [2010-10-16 17:20:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your help with this! You're right: they really did

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Capt-BA In reply to myah5000 [2010-10-17 01:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Toph doesn't stop the kids from complaining with 4 simple words anymore, though.

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myah5000 In reply to Capt-BA [2010-10-17 11:26:53 +0000 UTC]

No idea what you're talking about.

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Capt-BA In reply to myah5000 [2010-10-17 20:30:14 +0000 UTC]

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