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Description Updated! Changed the way the pants button and the way the belt loops work. Changed the belt color. Added a trim to the coat and buttons to the sleeves. Still iffy about a lot of things, but I like it a lot more.

Need feedback!

That is to say, I've been working on designing this character for a while now. She would play a villain's role in Welgaea 2. I'm not super happy with the design, though. The coat seems very plain and common. It used to be black, but that was even more common. I wanted her to appear slightly more formal, hence the dress pants. I like the look of them, but they feel odd in Welgaea's setting. Too recent, whereas Welgaea's world is 500-1500 years behind ours. I wanted to go full formal originally, but she's a little too insane for that.

What I am really happy with are her face/hair, shirt/top, and shoes. Really, it's the pants and coat I've got no idea what to do with. Ogre and I thought of a few things, including giving her a butt-cape, making the coat more of a jacket, and nothing looked good. Any feedback at all would be appreciated! We're kind of stumped.
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Sketching-Panda-Ren [2012-12-31 02:59:07 +0000 UTC]

The gold trim makes a big difference.
But the pants still look like jeans to me... making the skinner might help...
I keep staring at this trying to figure out what would help. And I'm thinking she needs hanging earrings the make up for how much neck is showing.
Also he's suggesting out of left field, maybe forget the pants and give her a skirt... as much as I like the pants, a skirt might work better to make it look less modern.
Also changing the belt from being less of a buckle to more of a tie.

XD Designing characters can be so hard when for a story.

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Sketching-Panda-Ren In reply to Sketching-Panda-Ren [2012-12-31 06:19:50 +0000 UTC]

>> I couldn't help it... I wanted to know it it looked good.
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Night-Apparations In reply to Sketching-Panda-Ren [2013-01-04 14:52:16 +0000 UTC]

I actually really like this idea. it does kind of fit Welgea.

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Rogue-Cyberman [2012-12-30 20:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Maybe make the dress pants a little more slimmer? And I like the idea of a tattered coat, but maybe one that isn't TOO damaged, y'know?

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TempestSpades [2012-12-30 19:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Maybe if you made her coat like all brown and tattered. Just a suggestion.

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Buraidragon [2012-12-28 18:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Might I suggest adding a pattern on the pants?

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aceina [2012-12-27 12:16:13 +0000 UTC]

i agree the coat needs something i dont know what maybe more than 1 collor or some kinda symbole on it or i dont know

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Sketching-Panda-Ren [2012-12-27 04:14:16 +0000 UTC]

For the jacket: Maybe make the collar stand up and add a belt but keep it open, oh and maybe make the bottom frayed or ripped.
As for the pants: Maybe tan colored and holes in it?
Jewelry might also help for a less plain look.
Also villains usually stand out xD.

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ultrapokemaniac [2012-12-27 03:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Suggestions? Perhaps to her shirt add a couple of vertical pleats or seams to give it a fancier feel. Either that or something more formal for her top overall. Also, it may be cliche, but a bowtie, fedora or tie might add to the formal look. Those items tend to imply wealth though, so that's of consideration.

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TheGolux [2012-12-27 02:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Gold brackets/tips on the bottom corners of the coat and maybe the lapels? And the most modern-looking part of the pants is the fly and beltloops/belt, you could change or eliminate those, and the fact that they're long, straight pants, older styles would be more likely to be shorter pants and hose on the lower legs (assuming we're still going with menswear on the legs).

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Nin-Wolf [2012-12-26 23:06:10 +0000 UTC]

What about metal clothing, a more knight-esque look? Knights are pretty formal and also fit in an older setting.

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learn2chillax [2012-12-26 15:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Sweet~
I'd love to see the end results or more progress on it, Naka!

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Pokeeeveegirl [2012-12-26 10:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps maybe not pants, but a partially open hoop skirt? Kinda like this I guess [link] maybe not as open as that, but that idea in general. Not sure what to do about the jacket...

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IzuiII [2012-12-26 07:55:08 +0000 UTC]

welgea 2? is 1 done?

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Nakate In reply to IzuiII [2012-12-26 10:35:15 +0000 UTC]

It's not, no, but we've been doing a lot of conceptual work on 2 just because we had an interesting idea for it. Got a little carried away in actually designing this character. Certainly not doing any actual work on 2 until 1 is done, I just thought this character was kind of neat and wanted to design her.

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IzuiII In reply to Nakate [2012-12-26 10:47:36 +0000 UTC]

oh, okay i really want welgea :]

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MingnonFiliae [2012-12-26 04:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Maybe adding stripes (like the ones on her face) to the jacket/pants? Or giving both some (tasteful) tears?

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Milk-Bell [2012-12-26 04:27:20 +0000 UTC]

I personally, really like the way she's designed in current.
I feel like: Every character in Welgaea has their own feel. Something that even the time-placement hasn't really "touched" if you will.
-She may look too recent, but the design as a whole stands as simply amazing to me, and I feel it really doesn't need changing even considering the world's temporal placement. If that makes sense.

In itself, it pulls a lot of different vibes together for me.
-As a whole, she pulls together an Albert Wesker + Crimson Viper feel.
Merging two completely amazing antagonist/anti-hero characters together without over-doing the theme is pretty badass.

I don't exactly know how to help you "change" the design to "fit" because I feel it's just beyond amazing right now...
-But maybe I've helped sway you into feeling it's great the way it is?

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launder [2012-12-26 03:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Naka, without trying to sound rude, maybe any Welgaea 2 stuff, other than basic story notes (so that you don't have to retcon stuff), should be held off until after Welgaea is released? It just seems like you've gone a step beyond counting your chickens before they've hatched; you're counting your chickens before the eggs have even been laid.

Well, I guess character design and backstory is part of the overarching story, so nvm.

Also, as I said, I had no intention ofbeing rude, so sorry of I was.

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Nakate In reply to launder [2012-12-26 10:32:27 +0000 UTC]

1 is completely planned out and I'm working on the actual work part of it. We're not doing much with 2, but got a few ideas.The only real thing we were focusing on with 2 was to get the world setting done since that affects 1 as well. Since 1 is all actual work now, we were doing some conceptual stuff for 2 that wouldn't affect 1's work. Admittedly, I got a little carried away with this one, started thinking about what she'd look like and wanted to put it on paper.

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launder In reply to Nakate [2012-12-27 05:53:22 +0000 UTC]

I know you're working on it; I actually followed it quite closely when I was part of your forum, and I still keep my ears pearked for any info on twitter nowadays. I just kind of really wnt to play it (I likle Metroidvania style games), and, from what you've shared, I also like your artsyle/story ideas so far, so anytime something pushes the development of the game further back, I'm all like "Aw, man." And then I get over it, because it'll be here when it's here.

Really, I only offered the warning because some of my friends fell to that trap, and then ended up not finishing either of the games they wanted to make.

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Pokeeeveegirl In reply to launder [2012-12-26 09:27:51 +0000 UTC]

If you have to add disclaimer i.e. "without trying to sound rude" yeah, you're being rude. It's his choice on what he wants released, seeing how it's his game. If you want to create a game, go ahead, and manage it the way you want to.

Naka has actually started the programming for it. I don't know how far he is with it, seeing how that hasn't been released. But to say "counting your chickens before the eggs have even been laid" isn't really fair in that regard.

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launder In reply to Pokeeeveegirl [2012-12-27 05:49:57 +0000 UTC]

One, actually, no, that's not true. It's usually true, I'll give you that much, but in this case, since this is the internet, and it's basically impossible to tell if someone is being rude because therr is no tone to hear, it's easier to add a disclaimer then to wait for someone to misinterpret what I worte as being rude when it wasn't, and then having to explan to them that it wasn't intended as such. In fact, my standard disclaimer says as much "It is/was not my intent to be rude, but if this came off as such by accident, I apologize." is what I usually write (and at the end). I'm not sure why I changed it for this one, as the way I worded it above does seem like it would be rude by nature.

Two, I also said nevermind, which meant I was retracting my statement. I posted it anyway, because retracting ones statement on the internet doesn't have quite the same effect since no one see's the throught process ocurring, like in real life, where someone might say something, pause, and then take it back because they realized something as they were speaking. It was my intent to emulate such a thing as closely as possible in writing.

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Pokeeeveegirl In reply to launder [2012-12-27 06:10:08 +0000 UTC]

If you need to add "not trying to sound rude" because you think it might be mistaken as rude, then, yes, you're being rude. It's very simple.

You seriously went off on a rant over something like that? First off, one question; If you retracted your statement, what was the point of even commenting anyway seeing as how you were simply saying things you didn't mean? Doesn't make much sense...

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launder In reply to Pokeeeveegirl [2012-12-28 00:20:42 +0000 UTC]

First of all, I didn't rant. Trust me, you know when I rant (I'm not a nice ranter. I curse. A lot). I am exceedingly verbose on even the most simple of matters, though, so you may be confusing that with a rant.

Second, rarely are things so black and white. As I have stated, I have posted things before that were misinterpreted as rude, when, had they been asked in person, there would have been no question of my being not rude. It's much like sarcasm; no one can ever tell if someone is being sarcastic on the internet because sarcasm is expressed as much by body language and tone of voice as it is by the words that are used. Without those two, sarcasm is often taken as someone's actual opinion, and opinion taken as being sarcastic.

Again, I will admit that it's not quite the same, but it it is close; rudeness is often tone as much as it is the words that are said; without Naka being able to hear that I would have said what I did in an honest and earnest tone, it can be interpreted as rude, because writing comments is not the same as writing a book. I can't write a comment and then put "... He said earnestly, his voice filled with curiosity." It just doesn't work.

Next, as I previously stated, I posted the statement anyway because I was trying, in writing, to recreate the effect of someone verbally questioning something, and as they question it, they work through the logic of such a thing on their own without interference, and then retract the statement. I wanted that effect to be seen, so that, yes, I could basically fish for further info on the character and how Naka was working on the games.

Basically, if someone says the above, even if they are saying it to themselves, people around them still can hear them and see them going through the logic, can see them coming to understand without it having to be explained. On the internet, had I retracted it before I posted, it simply would not have been seen. By posting, I'm opening myself up to criticism from people (like yourself), and that's alright. If I don't post, my thoughts and opinions are never placed out there, but so is the info that people are coming to understand what Naka is doing.

If I didn't post, you may say "good," but if Naka didn't want comments, he would turn them off (can you do that on DeviantArt?) or post this stuff in a place where people can't comment.

Hell, he responded to me, and I explained the reason as to why I gave my original comment further; I have programmer friends who fell into the trap of designing the sequel before the first was complete, and never finished either because of it. I honestly want to play Naka's game; from what info he's given it sounds like it'll be a lot of fun, and so I don't want him to fall into the same trap.

One final thing. An example of possible (or, rather, most definite) misinterpretation; I found your first response to me to be unnecessarily aggressive, and your second to be threatening upon my initial reading. Not literally, as you said nothing threatening, but in my mind the stance a person would take as they said that is physically threatening. Did you intend that? I'm going to go out on a limb and assume not. For all I know, you could be writing this all with the same earnestness and honest confusion in your "voice" I had wrote mine. And then of course, I tried to approach the response from a different point of view, and my interpretation of your response grew and changed as well.

Sorry for any spelling/grammar errors. I'm typing this while trying to eat dinner.

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Pokeeeveegirl In reply to launder [2012-12-28 01:53:29 +0000 UTC]

TL;DR

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SilverStarlite [2012-12-26 02:59:24 +0000 UTC]

fancy sleeves on a normal coat maybe?

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TheHelldragon [2012-12-26 02:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Was it an open jacket? Maybe you could do a fancy pin-up kind of jacket, maybe something akin to what a solider would wear on a formal occasion.

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DaikiTheWolfTIC [2012-12-26 02:52:15 +0000 UTC]

maybe get rid of the coat, or add a vest

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DaikiTheWolfTIC [2012-12-26 02:28:36 +0000 UTC]

maybe get rid of the coat, or add a vest

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enixfire [2012-12-26 02:27:55 +0000 UTC]

hmm, I think maybe do some coat trimming and maybe some tattering? Maybe make her seem like a aristocrat in that time. You could maybe always try for a long skirt if you don't like the pants. Maybe placing around with the coats structure there's lots of shapes the coat could end in, it doesn't have to be a straight line.

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stupidbread [2012-12-26 02:22:49 +0000 UTC]

GOD you're good at drawing hands! And drawing in general, but GOD THOSE HANDS!

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