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NorthWing [2012-08-15 17:50:45 +0000 UTC]
I see many different things you have improved in your art. The first thing I noticed was composition, placing the dragons closer to the moon really adds to the dramatic feeling. Your over all technique is better even if the styles in the two pictures are different, the painting-ish style in the older picture is kinda messy while this newer one has really higher level of focus. I say well done ^^
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Nalusa In reply to Schmengee [2012-08-15 15:20:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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grey56 [2012-08-09 00:41:37 +0000 UTC]
I do enjoy this - particularly how the light from the moon seems to pass through the skin of the dragon to the left. I would say that if they were given some more detail and subdued colors - it would make this very,very dramatic.
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Nalusa In reply to grey56 [2012-08-09 14:54:22 +0000 UTC]
Sorry about the brevity of my previous post, Burt. What coloration would you suggest? I'm a little nervous about the red, I feel if I make him less-saturated he'll turn out pink or doo-doo brown.
I'm thinking of taking the tan to more of a buckskin coloration, if I can manage it, and definitely adding some blood-vessels to the wings of both.
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grey56 In reply to Nalusa [2012-08-09 19:20:10 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh buck does sound like a good color ! Really though, the palette you're using is fine as it is. The subdued tones similar along the chromatic scale used in tandem to more detail (scales, undulation of the muscles in strained positions) would probably aid it a bit.
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Nalusa In reply to grey56 [2012-08-09 01:31:40 +0000 UTC]
I'll have to play with it some more, and tryout your suggestion.
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nelchee [2012-08-08 23:44:04 +0000 UTC]
I like the dynamic poses. Not sure about the transparent wings though. i mean sure they're your imagination, but I prefer a more realistic approach with somewhat translucent but not transparent membranes, that also show some veins and irregulatiries.
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Jay-Ruth [2012-08-08 19:12:39 +0000 UTC]
THATS AWESOME!
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Nalusa In reply to Jay-Ruth [2012-08-08 19:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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