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Description From a Nanoha-Doujin (Mahou Shoujou Fatal Fate [link] )
Fate has a complex dream about her being a more traditional Magicalgirl
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neogoki In reply to ??? [2016-04-13 10:08:48 +0000 UTC]

because she is seeing herself act so over the top
not to forget the classic "Magical Girl"-tropes that she avoided in Canon

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whitebearboy In reply to neogoki [2016-04-13 15:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Got it. I've only watched a few episodes of Nanoha, which tropes did she avoid?

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neogoki In reply to whitebearboy [2016-04-14 05:12:59 +0000 UTC]

lack of tactics, she knows when to NOT attack
is not a dumb blonde
will have to check TVTropes for the rest

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whitebearboy In reply to neogoki [2016-04-14 12:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Got it.

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el-f1otakugamer [2013-08-13 00:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Yuuno: At least people doesn't cruelly kill you in every fanfiction and doesn't hates you for stupid reasons.

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neogoki In reply to el-f1otakugamer [2013-08-13 06:02:45 +0000 UTC]

I know a couple of Fanfics where Yuuno is greatly fleshed out, best example would be "Blood that flows" by nanya www.fanfiction.net/s/6550856/1…
yuuno is a main character here AND gets both Nanoha and Fate as girlfriends

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Lycodrake [2013-01-05 02:54:14 +0000 UTC]

Is there a slime monster involved? XD

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-05 09:39:27 +0000 UTC]

not yet, but that tree looked like it has tentacles

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-05 16:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Fate: Why is it always trees?
Precia: The dog's name was Fate.
Nanoha and Yuuno: ...*trying to not laugh in corner*...

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-05 16:52:13 +0000 UTC]

*Fate is suffering under the effects of her trauma-switch*

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-05 17:02:36 +0000 UTC]

Nanoha: There's Starlight Breaker for that!~

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-05 17:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Fate*still BSODing* "Yes... Thanks..."
Fate*Brain catches up with mouth* "WHAT? NANOHA WAI"
too late SLB incoming

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-05 20:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Exactly. XD

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-05 20:56:27 +0000 UTC]

and that's why you can never show a sad face in nanoha's presense

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-06 01:52:29 +0000 UTC]

She should have a sign for that.
Or the TSAB should hand out fliers. XD

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-06 09:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Hayate makes it a policy

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-06 15:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Is that an abuse of authority? XD

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-06 15:20:48 +0000 UTC]

to issue warnings against the White Devil? I would call it her duty

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-06 16:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Hm, sounds legit.

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-06 16:42:15 +0000 UTC]

it also keeps her section feared in all Mid-chilia

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-06 16:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol "Chilia". XD
But yeah. Makes you, or at least it does for me, wonder what the other TSAB Agents think of anyone related to her. Hmm...
Random TSAB Redshirt sees a group of WHITE DEVIL trainees: "...I'm going to go...that way now." *flees in mute terror*

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-06 16:51:52 +0000 UTC]

was a typo
if somebody is trained by Nanoha you will droll at the cuties or Run like Hell, maybe even both
given that the TSAB encourages marriage between it's employes and esspecially Mages, somebody might arrange a meeting between Section 6 agents and other rather powerful mages

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-07 00:59:12 +0000 UTC]

Would make a good sitcom: "I Married a Section Six Agent". XP

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-07 08:57:40 +0000 UTC]

ohohoho, the stars would be quickly scouted as Idols and Hayate would agree if she can design the outfit XD

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-07 13:36:09 +0000 UTC]

And then it really would be "lyrical". XD

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-07 13:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Lyrical, Magical Idol Nanoha
Singing Catgirl Fate
Flash-speed molester Hayate

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Lycodrake In reply to neogoki [2013-01-07 17:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Seems legit, yep.

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neogoki In reply to Lycodrake [2013-01-07 20:18:25 +0000 UTC]

would work for me XD

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BPHaru [2013-01-03 01:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Considering that 99% of Nanoha fanfiction tends to describe Fate's private life with Nanoha much times with a LOT of detail, Fate's reaction here should be expected xD
Also, we translated that manga a long time ago at nanofate.us, I almost forgot about it if it wasn't for your image.

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neogoki In reply to BPHaru [2013-01-03 08:38:26 +0000 UTC]

I love that Site.

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SilverScarCat [2013-01-02 19:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Need link.

Need link nao.

Pwetty pwease?

Don't make me use the Pwetty Beam on you.

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neogoki In reply to SilverScarCat [2013-01-02 19:01:40 +0000 UTC]

found the link:
[link]

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SilverScarCat In reply to neogoki [2013-01-02 21:30:59 +0000 UTC]

heh, cute, but not my cup of tea. (I'm more of a Fate/Signum shipper or Fate/Hayate, or Fate/Nanoha/Yuuno shipper)

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neogoki In reply to SilverScarCat [2013-01-03 08:43:15 +0000 UTC]

I personally like Signum/Nanoha and Signum/Shamal

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SilverScarCat In reply to neogoki [2013-01-03 15:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Heh...

I wish I had photoshop.

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neogoki In reply to SilverScarCat [2013-01-03 15:40:29 +0000 UTC]

what wrong with MS paint?

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SilverScarCat In reply to neogoki [2013-01-03 17:09:39 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't work as well for editing doujins.

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neogoki In reply to SilverScarCat [2013-01-03 17:38:24 +0000 UTC]

I see, what about Gimp? it's free and quite versatile (or so I hear)

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SilverScarCat In reply to neogoki [2013-01-03 17:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.. Never heard of it.

I got the scripts of 2 doujins that I can't do anything with.

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neogoki In reply to SilverScarCat [2013-01-03 18:07:55 +0000 UTC]

GNU Image Manipulation Program
[link]
been a few years since I tried it but it makes paint look cheap, still needs to be learnd first since it has many options

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SilverScarCat In reply to neogoki [2013-01-04 14:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... Not doing too well with editing the images to put words in. ;

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neogoki In reply to SilverScarCat [2013-01-04 14:57:58 +0000 UTC]

sry, didn't know that

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SilverScarCat In reply to neogoki [2013-01-04 16:18:20 +0000 UTC]

It's okay.

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ColinatorGX [2013-01-02 18:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, it IS her subconscious making up that story... 8D

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neogoki In reply to ColinatorGX [2013-01-02 18:30:31 +0000 UTC]

becoming a valiant Knight to the rescue of her white princess XD

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Andarion [2013-01-02 17:57:30 +0000 UTC]

You mean all that talk about Power of Love and being unable to fight to save your life? Yeah I can see the pain...

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neogoki In reply to Andarion [2013-01-02 18:11:16 +0000 UTC]

found the doujin; Mahou Shoujou Fatal Fate [link]
just take a look, it's not that classic

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Andarion In reply to neogoki [2013-01-02 18:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Hmm quite interesting... heh for a second I thought that the "Sensei" would be Nanoha. Made me want to hug Fate, she is such a cute girl... and Advisor Lindy is way too honest...

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neogoki In reply to Andarion [2013-01-02 18:33:07 +0000 UTC]

her words are a bit harsh. but Fate needs that push

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Andarion In reply to neogoki [2013-01-02 18:46:27 +0000 UTC]

To sweep Nanoha off her feet and show her some Magic!

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