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nephrite-butterfly — OSI 2011 top 8 -Gender Bender-

Published: 2011-05-17 18:53:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 2462; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 53
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Description My sixth entry for for top 8 round

Well, more experiments with background

top 9 -Bathing Suit- -> [link]
top 10 -Redesign- -> [link]
top 15 -civilian- -> [link]
top 20 -henshin pose- -> [link]
Qualification entry -> [link]

(And as always sorry for my crappy english)

-info-
M!Vikuna version's name is Victor. Similar to Vikuna he has a calm personality and does not look like a Japanese person (the same F!Viku, Victor looks older than he is and much more taller then regular Japanese and has dark skin tone). Although Victor is a calm and patient person (his patience is enough of for a long time), but it is better not to exasperate him. Viku as a girl was irregularly strong, and Victor as a guy is much stronger. And if he become really mad he won't stop from using his strength. It's better not to enter into a fight with him.
In battle he (same as Viku) mostly relies on his super strength, weapon and extra senses, however can use similar magical attacks as Sailor Butterfly, but without declaiming its names.
About a costume - Viku as Sailor Butterfly has a regular senshi fuku, so I've decided to use something similar to Tuxedo Mask as well, but instead of tuxedo I've decide to use traditional business three-piece suit and dark-green sun glasses instead of mask.
His senshi name is "Mistery Elf"

-differences-
The main difference in personality is that while Viku being a girl with her irregular strength was always a bit shy and lonely, Victor as a boy didn't have this problem in such a radical way - instead he has some sort of Defender complex. This is manifested in excessive protection of his senshi girlfriend, Kitoko (aka F!Kitoku). Victor usually says: "Sorry sweetheart, but leave all youma and demons to me, please. I can't let even a little scratch appear on your beautiful cute face."

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a bit more additional info - there was "official" gender bender of these two, that I've drawn at summer 2010 -> [link] although Victor's costume design was a bit different. At this time I add more details and accessories and change colours a bit. Kitoko's senshi fuku and shoes changed a little two.
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Comments: 18

TuxedoMiniMask [2011-06-26 01:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Haha that is awesome!

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GentleOceanMichuru [2011-06-09 01:02:15 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Just lol.

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SilverPDragon [2011-06-05 18:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Kitoko is so adorable and Victor looks fantastic! A stylish guy like that protecting her, so cool. Great job as always~

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Paprika-Studios [2011-05-20 21:02:34 +0000 UTC]

The design is completely stunning and I adore the complimenting poses! I love how you decided to go for a business suit verses the traditional tuxedo - it definitely give the entry a lot of flare. The background is also completely goregous and somewhat reminds me of Shoujo Kakumei Utena.

Lovely work and good luck!!

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psychmeout [2011-05-19 18:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Firstly, this is hilarious, seeing F!Kitoku being a damsel.
Also, the poses are great. And the background is really cool.

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The-Night-Craft [2011-05-18 23:17:09 +0000 UTC]

I really love this. The background and poses. It's really fantasy like and in general just awesome. It reminds me of a something, Alice and Wonderlandish or just one of those magical animes. It's good.!

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SqueakyMcBeal [2011-05-18 18:55:18 +0000 UTC]

ooh It's very nice! Wonderful work on this.

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Blitzkriegoperative [2011-05-18 18:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Genderbent Viku is making me jealous.

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lady-narven [2011-05-18 14:43:22 +0000 UTC]

какой, однако, бисенен получился)))

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nephrite-butterfly In reply to lady-narven [2011-05-18 21:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Спасибо. ^^
На это и был расчёт, вот только у меня не всегда удаётся реализовавать. Если у меня анатомия страдает вцелом, то в отношении рисования лиц мужского пола это вообще страх и ужас...

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Shinwa-Tsuki [2011-05-18 00:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

» [he have calm personality] should be [he has a calm personality].
» [not so look like Japanese (same for Viku Victor is look older then he is...] would be better off as [does not look like a Japanese person (the same as F!Viku, Victor looks then he is...].
» [have dark skin colour] would be better off as [has dark skin tone].
» [Viktor is calm and patient person] should be [Viktor is a calm and patient person]
» [Viku (as a girl) was irregular strong and Viktor (as a guy) is much more stronger.] would be better off as [Viku (as a girl) was irregularly strong and Viktor (as a guy) is much more stronger.]

I'll point out others, later, computer's lagging.

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nephrite-butterfly In reply to Shinwa-Tsuki [2011-05-18 20:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Whoa... It's a lot of mistakes this time...
*sigh* Grammar...
> Yea,... stupid error with have/has everywhere... And articles always was my week point...
> Actually there's some difference, not clear [does not look]... It's difficult to explain... Anyway, I think I'll use your variant. Not sure about "person"...
> agreed
> article again...

Thank you for all remarks. I'll be waiting for the remaining ones.

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Shinwa-Tsuki In reply to nephrite-butterfly [2011-05-19 02:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... You're still learning English.

Grammar does seem to be your weak point.

» Seems so.
» Yeah, I can understand. You don't need the "person" in there - but it might help others understand that you're referring to the people of Japan, and neither the nation, nor the culture, not the language.
» That's good.
» Ah, I should mention that you should take out {delete} the "more" in [is much more stronger].

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andimccloud In reply to Shinwa-Tsuki [2011-05-18 18:51:18 +0000 UTC]

[Viku (as a girl) was irregular strong and Viktor (as a guy) is much more stronger.] would be better off as [Viku (as a girl) was irregularly strong and Viktor (as a guy) is much more stronger.]

Actually. The sentence would probably read more smoothly as follows:

[Viku as a girl was irregularly strong, and Viktor as a guy is much stronger.]

The "more" before the word "stronger" is out of place. ^_^

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nephrite-butterfly In reply to andimccloud [2011-05-18 20:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for remark.

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Shinwa-Tsuki In reply to andimccloud [2011-05-18 19:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yes that is correct, I was a bit tired.

[mostly rely on his super...] would be better off as [mostly relies on his super...]

As for this:
[The main difference in personality is that while Viku being a girl with her irregular strength was always a bit shy and lonely, Victor as a boy hadn't this problem is such radical way and instead he has some sort of Defender complex . This is manifested in excessive protection of his senshi girlfriend Kitoko (aka F!Kitoku). Victor usually says: "Sorry sweetheart, but left all yomas and demons to me, please. I cant let appear even a little scratch at your beautiful cute face."]
☼ It might be better off as:
The main difference in personality is that while Viku being a girl with her irregular strength was always a bit shy and lonely, Victor as a boy didn't this problem in such a radical way - instead he has some sort of Defender complex. This is manifested in excessive protection of his senshi girlfriend, Kitoko (aka F!Kitoku). Victor usually says: "Sorry sweetheart, but leave all youma and demons to me, please. I can't let even a little scratch appear on your beautiful cute face."

- In Japan, the plural of a word is either indicated by -tachi {usually for living creatures}, by implication, or by the sentence itself. Oh, the word youma is the correct romanization of 妖魔 which is read as ようま - the う indicates a long {Japanese} o-sound.

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nephrite-butterfly In reply to Shinwa-Tsuki [2011-05-18 20:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Umm... In this part "...as a boy didn't this problem in..." Where is the main verb here? Should it be "have" or another one?

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Shinwa-Tsuki In reply to nephrite-butterfly [2011-05-19 02:44:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

Ah, I must have missed that. The main verb is "have" and should be placed between "didn't" and "this".

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