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Published: 2011-06-22 17:10:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1041; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Description I was in the middle of making a new vector piece , but since I liked the way the lips turned out, I decided to make something separate using just the lips.

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Pencil tool with tablet
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Comments: 14

ISolitude [2011-07-14 04:51:03 +0000 UTC]

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When I first saw this, I immediately thought it'd be a good poster. I'd be surprised if you told me you didn't have that in mind when you made it.

I like the word BESOS in the corner--I think that the image would have been all right without it, but it really adds the extra to make it look finished.

I like the colors, but I think that you should have limited yourself better. It'd certainly look better if the yellow was just limited to the background. You'll notice that when you look at the lettering, it doesn't look nearly as nice as the colors do in the lips--the pools of different colors are just too small. Limiting the colors all over would have lessened that effect.

If I had to pick, I'd say keep the yellow to the background only, and take the orange color out of the designs. I think that'd make it look just a little better.

Nice work! (:

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nikki-ns In reply to ISolitude [2011-07-14 10:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I appreciate the critique and the advice

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ISolitude In reply to nikki-ns [2011-07-14 10:58:39 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Keep making pretty, colorful things please!

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Miyazu [2011-07-14 05:44:39 +0000 UTC]

juicy colours

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nikki-ns In reply to Miyazu [2011-07-14 11:17:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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ghostpyjamas [2011-07-05 12:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Awesome colours, I would like to have that printed on my shirt

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nikki-ns In reply to ghostpyjamas [2011-07-05 12:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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mikamoo2u2 [2011-06-26 22:59:40 +0000 UTC]

so cool! that would be on awesome t-shirt

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nikki-ns In reply to mikamoo2u2 [2011-06-26 23:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I thought about submitting it to Threadless, but I probably won't.

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mikamoo2u2 In reply to nikki-ns [2011-06-26 23:05:11 +0000 UTC]

aww u should!

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nikki-ns In reply to mikamoo2u2 [2011-06-27 04:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Yea but the voters there are so harsh. I've seen really good designs receive low scores. I submitted it to Infectious though. Maybe someone would want it as a device wallpaper or skin. If it doesn't win, I'll probably see about Threadless or RedBubble.

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mikamoo2u2 In reply to nikki-ns [2011-06-28 23:10:54 +0000 UTC]

yeah u should! u never know what may happen

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Keokee [2011-06-24 16:40:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the pattern inside the lips and letters. It is very vibrant but cohesive at the same time! Awesome!

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nikki-ns In reply to Keokee [2011-06-24 16:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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