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There is a sensual and soft feel to the lines in this piece, which vary easily between the precice but minimal indications of the lovely face to the more abstract indications of the hair, body, and background. The composition is well-balanced, the lines all sort of leading you to the focal point of the face.
There is only one thing I would change: The shading on the nearer breast. It needs to be more gradual, and there needs to be a distinction between form shadow (the part on the breast) and cast shadow (the part on the chest). As it is now, the stark contrast between light and shadow in that area draws attention away from the focal point.
But all in all a beautiful and very involving work of art. It really draws the viewer in!
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This picture doesn't need a critiuce, it's sentous, it's flowing, it's lovely. My only complait is that i can't buy a print of it, not hat i currently have any money, but if i could buy a print i would save up just to buy one.
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Lovely! Very simple and clean. All the curvyness adds to the curves of her body. And the face is very soft and sweet looking. I can't tell how you did it, so I can't tell you anything more than that. Is it a water color, ink, or digital image?
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It's been awhile since I've last critiqued anything. I don't think there is anything entirely wrong with the work itself. I do have to agree with the shading effect on the nearer breast. There's a quality about it that seems unnatural compared to the rest of the work. It looks pretty digital which is why it seems out of place. Now, if that same effect were duplicated throughout the entire piece, then everything would be tied in together. Other than that, I love the india ink technique that you used. The lines flow organically. Good job! I would personally give you 4 stars.
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D: This looks...so soft...and elegant...ahhh. Its beautiful
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Really cool. I like the movement and the contrast.
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wow it looks really well done O.O
she gives me the impression that she's both relaxed, and underwater
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Critique? Kinda hard.... since I see it perfect! It has a very dreamy, maybe even sensual feel to it. But for me only express calm. I love it!
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I'm going to "critique" here since it's been requested >_<;;
Her face looks like it's squished in one direction (away from the viewer) and I think if you're going to turn the picture upside down, her angle or pose or something needs to be a little more dynamic. Otherwise it just looks like a picture you happened to turn upside down.
That being said I think the soft-grey+white as opposed to say black+white was a very nice decision. Her hair and the backround also looks beautiful.
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Stunning. Reminds me of Naoko Takeushi's watercolours.
Very very beautiful.
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Nice pose. I like the contrasting colors and the soft edges. It reminds me of an ink painting.
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There's something about it... it's very etheral like... Almost a dream. In any matter, it's very nice 
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