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Published: 2009-12-12 04:16:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Part of the weirdness can be attributed that this is a photo, not a scan, and that it was taken on an uneven surface.....BUT!!Okay, this is a Super-Important drawing, as it will be a Christmas present for a Friend, and it has a very personal meaning to this Friend, who lost two people very dear to them.....so it has to be PERFECT!!!
So please, if you have time, critique or something..!
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it is very good alisa!!! but the guy on the left...his wing is down a little bit far...but other than that it is very goooood!!!! i see a lot of potential and it looks almost perfect..you know wht i mean by that...any way i am glad you are doing this for someone! i know for a fact that they WILL be happy and will keep it forever..so when they grow old they can always look back to this...o-yeaj on the left guy..what is the line between his nose and his hair!!! the critique thing isn't coming up clear....thank you for letting me critique and please keep drawing!!!
~carolyn <3
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Line between nose and hair...? Oh, the cheek-face line?? (on the right of the nose?) ....yeah, that should probably go away, since his body is a side-view, so his face should be, too. The poses are really messed up, but I feel weird asking people to pose for me ^^'
Anyways, thanks so much for the critique! I'll be sure to fix his wing (and face, grr!) =3
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srry ^^' i'm not really nice on some critiques!
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Hey, you're supposed to point out what's wrong with it! That's the point of a critique, -- so I can make it better =3
Thank youuuuu~ (again)
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Her name is Aleesha.
Thank you ^-^
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Okays. In return, will you pray for my friend Christina. She tried to o.d. in class last week and tried to burn herself with a lighter. She just really needs prayer and good friends right now and I'd appreciate your support.
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Yes, I will.
(during class? O.o)
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Yes, but it beith an online class, so it's just me, Lea, Greg, Christina, and Carissa. We are our teacher.
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