Comments: 75
Luna-Phantom [2015-09-17 20:58:35 +0000 UTC]
I love how this is so deep and you can feel the emotion. Awesome
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Mordial33 [2012-11-19 20:17:56 +0000 UTC]
This is haunting and yet, so beautiful!
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LadyofGaerdon [2012-09-08 06:10:53 +0000 UTC]
This is so, so beautiful.
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ClamShellHeart [2012-02-02 21:29:09 +0000 UTC]
this is beautiful.
if i may offer any other opinion, it's this.
I've got an ice-heavy heart in me
And I am breathing winter,
Wondering if my tears would freeze
If they even fell at all.
the last line of this stanza is awkward to me. using the word 'even,' and then the words 'at all' seem redundant to me. i'm of the opinion that this would read smoother without losing any meaning if you got rid of one or the other.
but as i said, this is beautiful.
thank you for sharing.
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TheLastJinx [2012-01-30 20:03:15 +0000 UTC]
i really love the imagry in this. i love the part about fingers, because i feel that way too sometimes. i love the last line. thank you for this
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MikamiTeru37 [2012-01-07 21:48:53 +0000 UTC]
I'm speechless once again...please don't ever stop writing...
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TravellingSoldier [2011-12-11 20:23:47 +0000 UTC]
... I came across a Norse Goddess by the name of Ran - she's a storm goddess. This fits in perfectly with other energies I need to harness right now. Thank you!
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azandieh [2011-11-23 13:07:49 +0000 UTC]
you inspired me to take this photo, thank you
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insertAWESOMENESS [2011-11-23 07:14:24 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful, as always. Love the imagery, love the choice of words. :'D
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KaitForest [2011-11-12 00:58:29 +0000 UTC]
i'm singing it
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coolmark82 [2011-11-10 01:14:32 +0000 UTC]
It sounds like someone running in a field of freedom, liberating themselves of rules and bounds of the poetry I know. Applause comes from truth, which is much of what I will say about this poem. It is gold, and so is your creativity. Bravo.
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coolmark82 In reply to o-ohhai [2011-12-10 17:29:33 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome very much. Have you seen my gallery yet?
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o-ohhai In reply to coolmark82 [2011-12-10 17:34:08 +0000 UTC]
No, I haven't. But I'll definitely take a look!
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coolmark82 In reply to o-ohhai [2011-12-10 17:39:23 +0000 UTC]
It's a sad one..... read "Flight".
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shaa21 [2011-11-10 00:34:58 +0000 UTC]
love it i feel so free
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TheDibLuver [2011-11-09 23:40:53 +0000 UTC]
I really appreciate the informal dialogue of the person, a lot of poetry nowadays is done in a very distant third person. I feel a sort of attachment to the speaker and I want to hug them as as I feel the cold air wafting from them. Its a beautiful poem and your imagery is excellent. Thank you for sharing this with us, it's wonderful.
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allaboutme314 [2011-11-09 22:33:03 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful.
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RandomAki [2011-11-09 19:12:35 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, glad you're back (ish?).
Once again, I'm left wanting more and feeling like you've effectively said how I feel.
Ahh, and I have to agree the fourth stanza stands out a lot, in a good way--a really good way.
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manavortex [2011-11-09 17:20:56 +0000 UTC]
this is awesome, i sooo know how it feels. and i am alone and cold and my fire isn't with me.
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gorillAZY [2011-11-09 14:31:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm......left speechless. This is beautiful.
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paranku-mingyuan [2011-11-09 12:27:04 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god.
This is beautiful.
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