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ode2sokka — Feeling of Falling

Published: 2009-08-28 02:40:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 4359; Favourites: 106; Downloads: 15
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Description "Why are you doing this, TenTen?" Neji whispered, holding her close. Didn't she see the danger she was putting them all in? Didn't she know what the elders would do to her when they found out?

Scaring Hinata and Hanabi silly with tales of girls who'd suffered in arranged marriages was one thing. Plotting to overthrow the clan elders and allow Hinata control of her own destiny was quite another.

"I know what I'm doing, Neji. I don't need you to protect me."

"They will KILL you, TenTen. And I can't...I can't...I can't let them do that. I won't."

This is set in a story I really really REALLY want to write. Someone tries to kill Hinata, so Hiashi decides she needs a twenty-four seven body guard. Who better than TenTen, right?

Not. After a period of adjustment, TenTen decides to help Hinata change her destiny, to fight for what she desires-- to prove to her father she can and should be clan head. And, of course, that means Lee and Neji have to go along for the ride.

Body guard outfit TenTen, ftw! And I think this is the best Neji I've ever done ever. I so win at this game.

Neji and TenTen (c) Kishimoto
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Comments: 23

swatrzwald [2012-07-06 12:38:43 +0000 UTC]

had a similer idea myself a while back, didn't go anywhere but would lov, love, love for sombody to do something like that so write that thing!

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Karuka-Ikashi [2009-09-04 03:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a fun idea! You should write it. For some reason, a deep friendship budding up between Tenten and Hinata really appeals to me too. The closest we get to female relationships in depth is Sakura and Ino, and that's mostly just a silly fight over a boy.

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ode2sokka In reply to Karuka-Ikashi [2009-09-08 15:06:19 +0000 UTC]

I really really *really* want to. I love Hinata and TenTen as friends and accomplices, and adding Neji and Lee to the mix is even better .

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Karuka-Ikashi In reply to ode2sokka [2009-09-09 18:16:29 +0000 UTC]

do it, do iiiiit~!

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Original-Blue [2009-08-30 05:31:42 +0000 UTC]

i will so write this story for you (with your permission) - your awesome artwork warrants it. pretty please?
-Blue

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ode2sokka In reply to Original-Blue [2009-08-31 12:17:35 +0000 UTC]

You're more than welcome to write your own version of it, if you would like to. Just send me a link .

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Original-Blue In reply to ode2sokka [2009-09-13 21:19:26 +0000 UTC]

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dieingcity [2009-08-28 15:56:10 +0000 UTC]

woot- thats an awesome idea clever very clever

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ode2sokka In reply to dieingcity [2009-08-28 16:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you .

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dieingcity In reply to ode2sokka [2009-08-28 16:35:35 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome

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fmorgana [2009-08-28 12:46:38 +0000 UTC]

wow, neat fanart, i really love the pose, the intensity and Tenten's outfit, it looks great! is that a hyuuga clan symbol on her back btw?

and i'm SO interested in the story, this sounds amazing, i really hope you'll write it! WRITE IT!

and i don't understand why i'm not watching you yet...i keep seeing and loving your art...but now i'll be watching

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ode2sokka In reply to fmorgana [2009-08-28 16:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it. Yes, that is the Hyuuga clan symbol ! I'm so glad someone got it without me saying so.

I want to write it, but "Jai Ho" needs my attention, first. Maybe once I get that all outlined, so I know I won't forget...

Yay, watching!

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fmorgana In reply to ode2sokka [2009-08-28 17:03:28 +0000 UTC]

well, i've always thought tenten would look really cool with a hyuuga symbol (because she belongs with neji )

yeah, soudns good, first you can finish your first fic but you can also start thinking and outlining the second one too

YAY!

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ode2sokka In reply to fmorgana [2009-08-30 00:28:00 +0000 UTC]

She totally belongs to Neji .

Yes. Outlines are good for Reggie.

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fmorgana In reply to ode2sokka [2009-08-30 09:54:25 +0000 UTC]

definitely, there are no other possibilities!

definitely good for writing fics i'm quite excited about the main idea now you know can't wait for it ^^

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mewmew223 [2009-08-28 03:50:46 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!!!! I LOV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Please MAKE THE WHOLE STORY!!!

IT WOULD BE AWSOME

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ode2sokka In reply to mewmew223 [2009-08-28 03:54:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that you like it.

I really want to. I just need *time*.

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mewmew223 In reply to ode2sokka [2009-08-28 04:16:02 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

OK

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innocent-rebel [2009-08-28 03:14:32 +0000 UTC]

*chants* Write it. Write it. Write it. Nice lil clip. Story sounds awesome and intense. The picture is great. Their whole pose, the colors, background and shadows really make it look like they are meeting in secret. Neji also has a great expression. Like a mix of desperation and concern. He wants to be with Tenten, but he's terrified to be at the same time. Tenten's outfit is great. You're very good at designing clothes. My only critque isn't so much of a critque as it is just a suggestion. Maybe next time, try adding some more shadows to Neji's hair. Just to give it more volume and depth. It looks great in the front, but it seems to get flatter as it goes back.

Anyways, great job!! I agree. I think this is your best Neji so far!

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-08-28 03:21:54 +0000 UTC]

I need more of me. One for each story so I can devote my complete attention to it.

Designing clothes was actually what I wanted to do when I was little, believe it or not .

I'll keep that in mind. It's hard to figure out how to shade his ponytail...thing . But I'll keep trying!

He is! I'm so proud of him for cooperating with me.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-08-30 00:24:34 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel! That's how I am a lot of times.

I believe it. You're really good at it and it shows that you really put thought into your designs instead of just letting them be hodgepodged together.

I totally understand. Shading hair is probably one of the hardest things for me to.

*gives Neji a cookie for cooperating*

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-08-30 00:32:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, and no matter how many times I cross my fingers in front of my face and yell "Kage Buunshin no Jutsu"...nothing happens T_T.

I'm so glad all that practice as a kid was good for something . Really, I am.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-08-30 00:51:06 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...try crossing your hands the other way! That might work!

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