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Description It was midnight when he felt her slide back into bed beside him. He rolled over, slipping his arms around her waist and pulling her into him. "Welcome home."

"I should go shower," TenTen whispered to him.

She was hurt, he could tell by the way she held herself. She had problem gone to the hospital before coming to him. "It doesn't matter."

He was silent for a little while, recalling the events of the day. Of tearful light beige eyes and a soft voice asking the worst question in the world. "TenTen...Hibari couldn't remember what you looked like today. And Hachiko couldn't remember her song. Please, stay here..."

In my head, Neji gives up full time missions to be a teacher for Hyuuga children, and raise his girls, while TenTen keeps hers up full time. Until this time, which is heartbreaking and I might, maybe, do a Doujinshi for if you guys want to see.

Just...a doodle.

Neji and TenTen (c) Kishimoto
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Comments: 67

Bellette [2009-11-04 15:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Traditional matrimony, but in reverse. One in the house and the other in the street. Cute dear, as always ^^

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ode2sokka In reply to Bellette [2009-11-04 16:55:00 +0000 UTC]

I love it when roles switch. Makes thing interesting . Thank you.

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stay-by-me [2009-10-30 03:08:59 +0000 UTC]

i want more! youve got me totally enthraled!^^

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ode2sokka In reply to stay-by-me [2009-10-30 19:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow, really? I just might have to do it then .

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stay-by-me In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-30 22:41:49 +0000 UTC]

you should^^...Please!!!!!!!!!!

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smethy32 [2009-10-29 13:06:41 +0000 UTC]

oh nooooo, thats really sad! you should do some more!

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ode2sokka In reply to smethy32 [2009-10-29 14:17:47 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it .

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uchihas1010hyuuga [2009-10-29 10:41:59 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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ode2sokka In reply to uchihas1010hyuuga [2009-10-29 14:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad .

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jedimasterFeanorKun1 [2009-10-29 03:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Great tear-jerking description... Love the coloring and emotion

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ode2sokka In reply to jedimasterFeanorKun1 [2009-10-29 12:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .

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innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 01:21:45 +0000 UTC]

That's very sad that Tenten's not around as much as she wants to be. Especially because missions can take so long! And that's horrible about her kids not being able to remember those things. Great picture though. You can really see the desperation in Neji's body language and expression. Tenten's body language shows how sad she is, but also that she knows what she has to do.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 12:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes, she isn't pleased with it, but she knows that this is what she's trained her whole life to do. What would be the point of all that suffering before if she can't protect the ones she loves?

Even so...Poor Neji. I'm glad all of that was shown in the picture too.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 15:42:11 +0000 UTC]

Shinobi have to make sacrifices, even after they've acheived a high rank. Including time with family, friends, innocence and sometimes little parts of who they are. It's sad, but it also gives a great amount of depth.

Yep. You showed it all very well. ^^

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 15:54:20 +0000 UTC]

Maybe especially after. It is what makes them interesting, though, and I think at least part of why we love this manga .

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 16:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Agreed. Kishi does do a good job of showing changes in characters and sacrifices. I know some people don't like his ninja's because they're so different from the traditional kind, but I give him major props for creating this entire world!

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 16:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Traditional ninjas aren't generally nice people. These are more like TMNT type ninja. Or somewhere in between traditional and TMNT. Which I really like ^^.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 16:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Same here. ^_^ Have you ever read the book blue fingers? It's a great book and very historically accurate about ninjas. Apparently sometimes to keep their ranks full they would kidnap children and force them to become foot soldiers.

I wonder why there seems to be this amnesty between TMNT and Naruto people? Like if you like one, you don't like the other? Or at least that's what I've seen. I think they'd all get along really well actually.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 16:38:42 +0000 UTC]

o_o . Have not read it. Now really want to.

I don't know, they're they same kind of ninja. I think it would be cool! *still ships Human!Don/Sakura* .

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 16:41:54 +0000 UTC]

It's really really good! The author does an amazing job of blending historical fact with these characters and really shows the roots of ninjas.

I know! I think Raph woulda beat the crap outta Sasuke though. Or maybe that'd just make me happy. Leo and Sasuke could probably emo together for awhile until Leo got his head back on straight.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 16:44:23 +0000 UTC]

*adds it to list* They need a Netflix for books . Most people would say that's called the Library, but it's not as convenient and I always forget to bring them back .

Oh yeah. And possibly Naruto for being too much like Mikey. Mikey + Naruto + Kiba = BAD combination . I've always had Leo and Neji HATE each other, which is hilarious in my head. They're a bit...too much a like, in my book, to really get a long.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 16:53:35 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean. I have so many fines at the library it's crazy. But I love books so much!!! ^_^

That would be so awesome!!! LOL! Mikey and Kiba and Naruto...the world would never be the same again!! Neji vs Leo. Very funny. And they are a lot alike. Even their hobby is the same. Meditation. I think Tenten and Raph would get along pretty well because they both like sharp shiney things, and for some reason...I can see Lee and Casey just hitting it off right away! Meanwhile Splinter and Guy are just in the background with their heads in their hands and wishing they knew how to stop the ensuing chaos.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 17:15:33 +0000 UTC]

I don't think they'll let me back in the library .

Casey and Lee? That sounds like a baaaad combination. So bad. And, yes, Raph and TenTen would be BFFs. Quick tempered but really very sweet, lovers of sharp shiney things...

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 17:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Awww, how come?

I know! I can just see Casey dragging Lee with him on a vigilante mission and Lee being so upset at the injustice that they just both go headfirst into fights! lol. Tenten would teach Raph how to use scrolls to seal away multiple weapons and Raph could teach her how to use Sai.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 17:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Because I STILL have some of their books, and owe them an insane amount of money.

I love Casey to bits, but him and Lee fighting for justice would just be BAD.

Raph with multiple weapons would also be bad. TenTen would make Sai sexy...er.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 17:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhh, no worries. I have so many comics checked out from there... It's bad. I need to get them back. But I wanna finish them!!

I know! Funny! But bad. The purple dragons would wind up with the word Youth stamped on their forehead and Casey would teach Lee the art of weilding the baseball bat!

lol. Tenten making Sai sexier = Neji with a nosebleed. I think the funniest thing about them getting along is that Neji and Leo hate each other!

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 17:39:22 +0000 UTC]

....Now I'm imagining Hun with 'YOUTH' written on his head. Which amuses me sooooo much.

Part of the problem is that I could see Leo thinking TenTen was awesome. And Inner Neji is all "MINE!" and reacts badly to the competition .

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 17:43:44 +0000 UTC]

That is so funny! Hun would wake up with a brand new tattoo!! Go Lee! And you know...if you added Guy to the vigilante mix it would be ten times as bad and ten times as funny.

Neji does not like to share his Tenten. That's for sure. I can see Leo being impressed by her skill and asking to spar with her, which would prompt Neji's radar to go off and he'd be all: She's my sparring partner! And we're sparring right now. So she can't!

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 17:48:13 +0000 UTC]

*groan* Those three would take on waaaaay too much. It amuses me.

LOL! Yes, exactly. Neji strikes me as the kind of guy that would think so much of TenTen that he's convinced every guy in the world is after her. Which would include Leo. Which only makes me laugh harder, because TenTen would be totally oblivious to what the problem is.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 17:55:15 +0000 UTC]

In one night, New York's crime rate would plumit to hardly anything!

lol. Gotta wonder then if he's jealous of the time Raph and Tenten spend together and is inwardly freaking out and watching for signs that they like each other. Poor Neji. And poor Tenten. She just wants them to get along! For some reason I can see her borrowing Splinter's cane and cracking them both over the head and then locking them in a room until they could learn to get along!

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 17:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Only a few insanely crazy or brave souls. Both maybe?

Oh, I'm sure he would be! Paranoid child is...well, paranoid. Haha, taking a leaf out of Guy's book is always good Maybe ineffective, at this point, but worth a shot.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 18:02:47 +0000 UTC]

Both is where my money is. ^^

lol. Poor Neji. He doesn't have to worry!! Ineffective, but could wind up with hilarious results. Meanwhile Raph and her can swap embarrassing stories to hold over their leaders heads!

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 18:09:10 +0000 UTC]

I think Raph would get a kick out of Leo getting his butt handed to him by a girl with a cane, that much is certain . No, he doesn't have to worry, but he does, because he's so sure that sometime she will realize what kind of life she's resigning herself to and want out while she still can.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 18:13:40 +0000 UTC]

He would never let Leo live that one down! Ever.

And of course, Tenten doesn't care. She loves Neji and thinks that they can have a great life together if they both fight tooth and nail for it. Still, I can understand him being worried even if he doesn't have to be. For some reason...I kinda blame the elders for that. Just maybe stuff they told him if they found out he liked Tenten. Like saying that she would never want this kind of life and stuff.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 18:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Nope. And Mikey would be just as bad if he ever found out .

More than likely main house members and his own fears. You know...what ever happened to Neji's mom?

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 18:31:21 +0000 UTC]

He would!

You know...I don't know. I always thought she died...but what if she didn't die from something natural? What if she tried to escape with Neji as a baby before he could have the cursemark put on him and was killed?

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 18:37:43 +0000 UTC]

I figured she must have died, but I've never yet figured out how. I do so like that way.

Oh! Or we could pull and Avatar. Maybe she tried to kill Hiashi before he had a child to save Neji that fate, and then Hiashi had to kill her. Which could be what made Hizashi hate him SO badly, because there's no way they were always like that. Hm...that appeals to me.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 18:55:36 +0000 UTC]

OH! I could see her pulling an avatar. Though why would him having an heir change anything? Or would it change it because then Neji would be the heir technically and they couldn't put a mark on him? I think something besides just the mark definately made Hizashi hate his brother as much as he came to. I think as kids they would have been really close and I can see Hizashi being protective of his brother because he's been taught that's his job in life.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 18:58:35 +0000 UTC]

That's sort of what I decided. It's hard to get closer than Hizashi to Hiashi, isn't it? So, that would make him the technical heir, save him from the mark, and so on. But, she wasn't successful and died for it.

Yes, exactly! They're TWINS. My brother and sister are twins, and I think unless you're close to a pair you can't really comprehend how twins are. Even then, it's a totally different mind set. My twins, at least, and most I know don't like to use the word I, but prefer 'we', and they hate being alone because there's never a point in their life when they have been and...to HATE your own twin that bad it would have to be more drastic than a mark you got when you were three years old, I think.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 19:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Poor Neji. He lost his mom and Hizashi lost his wife. In a way, I'm glad she didn't succede because of Hinata and Hanabi but it's still sad she died.

That's really interesting and puts a whole new perspective on their relationship. I could see Hiashi maybe even protecting his brother at a younger age and holding his hand when the curse mark got put on him. Wonder if he had to put the curse mark on Hizashi himself...hmmm. I guess I've never understood that with this cursemark if it's just those who know the ninjitsu who can activate it, or only the one who put it on the person.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 19:06:40 +0000 UTC]

I like this way a lot, though. Neji would be too young to remember her, but still...

I think it's those that know it. But what it is I'm not sure. Looked like one hand seal, but it's got to be more complicated than that.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 19:08:07 +0000 UTC]

It's so sad. He lost his mommy which meant he was super close to his dad then lost him to.

I think it's the way he focuses the chakra when making the seal. Cause it didn't have effect at least I don't think, until he squinted his eyes.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 19:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Poor Neji was so alone in that big Hyuuga house, where everyone was either his enemy or unwilling to overstep their bounds. ....*hugs tiny Neji*

Makes sense. I wonder if they have to see them to be able to use it.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 19:19:25 +0000 UTC]

*hugs him as well* Randomly got picture in my head of a sad little Neji kinda sitting on a swing as a kid and Tenten coming by with Panda and giving him a hug because she says he needed it, then walking off*

Well...I don't know. Because if they die in battle then something in the cursemark is activated to erase the Byakugan...but maybe they have to see them for it to have an intense effect?

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 19:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaw. In our Modern AU, TenTen meets Neji at the hospital once, and *gives* him Panda because he need him more. Than insisted Guy get her a new one.

I thought it was two different things. Like, they can activate it whenever they want, but it just automatically does it in death.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 19:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww. That's so sweet!! I could see her doing it to. Of course she'd need a new Panda! Neji still probably has the original. hehe.

That makes sense.

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 19:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Yep. He took very good care of it. confused the heck out TenTen when she saw it.

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 19:33:34 +0000 UTC]

lol. Awwwwwww!! That's so sweet!! He's probably all shy like: I kept Panda...

Tenten:...But I have Panda. Oo;;;

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ode2sokka In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-10-29 19:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much. She picks up the bear, they point at each other and go "?!?! That was you?!?!"

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innocent-rebel In reply to ode2sokka [2009-10-29 19:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! LOL!!! That's so cute!!! I can see Tenten introducing her new Panda to the old Panda for some reason.

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