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PaladinEclipse [2012-02-04 02:32:18 +0000 UTC]

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A very true and great poem indeed. I especially enjoyed how you did the coloring, very nice. I understand length isn't necessarily everything in a poem, but I (just a personal preference) would have looked forward to more reasons as to why we are all "beautiful", such as maybe the hurtful people engaging in a hurtful action that can be ignored. That, in turn, would maybe lead to more things to add to the list of "it isn't about what you...". e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Again, a very nice poem with a good flow as well as a touching message. I doubt that even one person that reads this can honestly say that they haven't been touched by this and/or experienced this great realization that you have put together in one twelve line poem. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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seahorses-fly-away [2013-02-18 11:01:15 +0000 UTC]

totally

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carpenocturne [2012-02-10 01:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Well...no. People like serial killers are most certainly not beautiful, but normal people, yes, they all are.

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PookScribe [2012-02-07 18:03:15 +0000 UTC]

This is a very pretty poem, and I love how you make such good use of colors (especially the rainbow "Beautiful" at the end).

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return666 [2012-02-05 01:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes I just say f--k them if they can't take a joke. And I don't mind and they don't matter.Hahaha

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MaladyOfReverie [2012-02-04 23:55:25 +0000 UTC]

I think you meant 'What matters', not 'What matter'

I love the poem though - both the words and the presentation!

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K-A-Varley [2012-02-04 15:54:14 +0000 UTC]

I love it

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takozilla [2012-02-04 12:20:28 +0000 UTC]

its awesome

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Spiritlights [2012-02-04 10:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Actually that isn't always true because sometimes the outer being reflects the inner being.

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Momochan287 [2012-02-04 06:38:25 +0000 UTC]

Very true and powerful words!

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kmbrother [2012-02-04 06:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow,so simple yet so powerful when you think about it.

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Yuriko-chan24 [2012-02-04 02:34:47 +0000 UTC]

it's really the words that matter ^^

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SimplyPrussiaous [2012-02-04 02:22:30 +0000 UTC]

It's not crappy. I like it, I think it's pretty. :3
Nice work.

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