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poeknowsprose [2013-03-27 17:04:16 +0000 UTC]
Good piece. Interesting concept.
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Scr1b3 [2013-03-27 07:40:07 +0000 UTC]
Not intending to be a douchebag or anything, but this doesn't really resemble Romeo & Juliet. While an excellent peice, everyone seems to think of Romeo and Juliet as "The greatest starcrossed lovers of all time" I read the Shakespearean novel, and I cannot remember once within the story of him physically abusing and then leaving her...
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Oilux In reply to Scr1b3 [2013-04-03 06:26:01 +0000 UTC]
The way I interpret Romeo and Juliet is as a tragedy, because in the end 6 people die because of their so called love. Because in the end “never was a story of more woe than this of Juliet and her Romeo.” In more modern times, tragedy happens when there is abuse and death, such as in my poem.
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Scr1b3 In reply to Oilux [2013-04-03 23:10:29 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh, I see now! Thankyou for the insight!
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