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Okami-Rayne — This Burning Fall -BtB-

Published: 2010-08-10 16:40:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 2369; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description - Break To Breathe -



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~ Rayne

(NARUTO and its characters were created and are owned by Masashi Kishimoto. No copyright infringement intended.)
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Comments: 42

shikaintheshadows [2010-08-30 02:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Aww this is so sad, Neji's making a mistake if he thinks running away will solve anything.
Poor Shika, his neck looks so sore . Im actually dying to read the new chapter , i want to see what happens between them so bad.
Im so excited.

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NejisKitten123 In reply to shikaintheshadows [2011-09-10 01:30:31 +0000 UTC]

everyone is so excited.. but are YEW shika? ! I wuw ShikaNeji, not a perv v///v; But there's 2 or more Neji's here and I got scared... are yew shika ?

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Dionna1224 [2010-08-16 01:31:32 +0000 UTC]

OMG I nust got home an I see an update and a new pic......YESSSSSSSSSSSS ALREADY THIS WEEK IS STARTING OFF GREAT!!!

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Okami-Rayne In reply to Dionna1224 [2010-08-16 09:39:07 +0000 UTC]

LOL!!!

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Dionna1224 In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-17 05:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Dude that chapter was like... whoa!!!

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Okami-Rayne In reply to Dionna1224 [2010-08-17 07:00:05 +0000 UTC]

LOL!

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Dionna1224 In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-18 16:07:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you thank you thank you, I finally got the hang of the smileys

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Okami-Rayne In reply to Dionna1224 [2010-08-18 16:19:53 +0000 UTC]

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Dionna1224 In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-19 03:11:35 +0000 UTC]

^__^

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IntheWake [2010-08-14 23:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Also, I love this.

Neji's pained look really gets to me. I have so many thoughts surrounding this - but by the time I have the time to sit down and get them all out, the story will have come to its epic conclusion, I'm sure. lol

Isn't real life a bitch?

But amazing job on the artwork.

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Okami-Rayne In reply to IntheWake [2010-08-15 09:18:46 +0000 UTC]



Thank You, Luv!

LOL. Oh yes, real life is asking for a slap !

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IntheWake [2010-08-14 23:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Its been a while. School is a jerk.

But I finally caught up! So the last chapter was amazing - as always. Shikaku is brilliant. I wish I could experience the moment from his viewpoint, just to know what he saw in Neji. The moment between Neji and deer was haunting as well; one of my favorite non-skika/neji moments.

I also enjoyed the moment between Hiashi and Neji. Suppose he's not all that bad.. I'd still throw him off a cliff given the chance, though.

lol so how's the new chapter coming?

Not to keep you with my trivial curiosities, but after you finish BtB (and anything else relating to the story) do you plan to continue writing on fanfiction.net? More anime?

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Okami-Rayne In reply to IntheWake [2010-08-15 09:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Hi there, Luv!! Aww, sorry to hear about school.

Thanks for your lovely comment! LOL. Oh sure, Hiashi still ccould do with that little trip over the cliff

New chapter is up! I am down

In answer to your question. After BtB and any other fics relating to the story I'm not sure whether I'll write more on ff.net. Probably, but in small doses LOL. I have original works I need to focus on and get my butt moving on.

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IntheWake In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-15 15:06:28 +0000 UTC]

lol

Original works? While I'm sad to see you go, I'm ecstatic to hear that you're moving on to bigger and better things! I hope to see your books on my local bookshelves someday.

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Okami-Rayne In reply to IntheWake [2010-08-15 20:48:59 +0000 UTC]

That's right, Luv. I took a break from my original works to write BtB. AAWW Thank you for the encouragement, dear! I truly hope that dream will be a reality. Thanks for all the lovely support

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RiverAcantha [2010-08-11 16:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Omg how do you do it?! It's just so perfect! Every banner you make!

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Okami-Rayne In reply to RiverAcantha [2010-08-11 20:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank You, Poppet

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RiverAcantha In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-11 21:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Shucks, no problem

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Maya-Nara [2010-08-11 10:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Bruises

I'm scared...I don't like that quote much...

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Okami-Rayne In reply to Maya-Nara [2010-08-11 12:51:55 +0000 UTC]

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FreeHugsAndYaoi [2010-08-11 08:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful Simple but beautiful. I love the use of the playing piece near the top left. As usual, you continue to amaze^_^

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Okami-Rayne In reply to FreeHugsAndYaoi [2010-08-11 08:31:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank You, dear!!

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Hyouri-nyanko [2010-08-10 19:00:18 +0000 UTC]

Again, I absolutely love it!

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Okami-Rayne In reply to Hyouri-nyanko [2010-08-10 19:34:49 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!!

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Hyouri-nyanko In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-10 19:54:31 +0000 UTC]

MY PLEASURE!~

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PopularZelda [2010-08-10 18:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Sooo beautiful!!!! I luv your fic and worship your photoshop skills!

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Okami-Rayne In reply to PopularZelda [2010-08-10 18:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Bless! Thank You!

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PopularZelda In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-10 18:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Mo problem

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Chikyu-Kitsune [2010-08-10 18:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work!
This works so well with your fic and shows all the emotion so beautiful

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Okami-Rayne In reply to Chikyu-Kitsune [2010-08-10 18:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank You Kuroda, Luv

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brevityofwit [2010-08-10 17:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Have you been reading my mind? Seriously, part of this pic reminds me of an idea I had for a story a while ago.

You've kept this simple but it speaks volumes. Love the facial expressions!

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Okami-Rayne In reply to brevityofwit [2010-08-10 17:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Agent Brevity ! Aww arigatou, my Lovely.

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shinejshi [2010-08-10 17:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! yet the upper right has me worried! Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Okami-Rayne In reply to shinejshi [2010-08-10 17:36:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank You, sweetheart!

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OoNejioO [2010-08-10 17:29:44 +0000 UTC]

You just keep them coming today, hu?

I just so freaking excited about chapter 47 ^^

Do you ever have some free time? I don't know how you do this, but it's amazing

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Okami-Rayne In reply to OoNejioO [2010-08-10 17:34:03 +0000 UTC]

I was inspired! And I had some free time today between work that I dedicated to Paintshop! lol

Thanks, Luv!

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OoNejioO In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-10 17:56:08 +0000 UTC]

I still don't understand how you can do all this stuff in like a week and you work too ?!! God women, you are awesome

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Okami-Rayne In reply to OoNejioO [2010-08-10 18:08:45 +0000 UTC]

LOL me neither - it's why I have to manage my time so carefully. Uni taught me how to do that and what to give priority to.

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OoNejioO In reply to Okami-Rayne [2010-08-10 18:20:15 +0000 UTC]

LOL I'm really glad that BtB is part of that priority then

You know, I saw some pretty awesome Neji and Shikamaru cosplay this weekend, and I really blame you for all the mental image in my head I really don't believe that it's healthy

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Okami-Rayne In reply to OoNejioO [2010-08-10 18:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh it's all very healthy - good for the soul, honest

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FionaDied [2010-08-10 17:21:38 +0000 UTC]

*sob* Shikamaru's bruises. And the pained look on Neji's face! He looks like he's about to cry. (Which he eventually did) I LOVED ch 46, hun. Am really looking forward to 47.

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Okami-Rayne In reply to FionaDied [2010-08-10 17:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much Ciiah, sweetie!

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