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omegasama — STEAMPUNK +Out Walking+
Published: 2009-12-02 06:13:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 2187; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 35
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William and Lucas out walking on a nice day.Some fuck up with the perspective... but I am still learning.
Let me know if you can give me some tips.
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Hi I really like this piece and I think the perspective is almost spot on in the background. The only thing that I think needs improving is the height of the two figures, which is maybe what is throwing the composition out a little. This might be helpful I think [link]
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You do realize that this image is like 4 years old, right?
I do appreciate critiques, I would just prefer if they were given with my current art.
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I am sorry, I only looked at the date once I had commented and didn't see the point in removing it. You have a nice gallery.
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I personally like the background, perspective fuck-up or not. And I also like the way you draw your characters - I can't even draw men properly without them look like women! You're an amazing illustrator.
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I know this isn't helpful, but I kinda like the perspective fuck up, makes the scene look a little trippy/dream-like/ unreal which I think is kinda suitss steampunk
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I love this! Although there is a lot of detail, the black and white keeps it simple, with a lot of contrast. +fav!
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very nice piece ^^ they look very relaxed.
some tips for the perspective, hmm, i think the road should be going inwards a little bit more in the back, and the guy whos more in the background should be higher up then the other since hes farther back.
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Smex <3
*kicks the stuffing out of Ultimatmus*
there we go <3
i always adore your black and white stuff~
i'm not sure if this will help, but the ground closest to the two men, maybe you could shade it a little, or make it look like they're farther up, the sidewalk does that perfectly, shadows maybe?
s'all from the amateur XP
awesome as always Nattykinz ^^
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*hugs* thanks a bunch Katchy dear ^^
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