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omegasama — STEAMPUNK +Out Walking+

Published: 2009-12-02 06:13:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 2187; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 35
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Description William and Lucas out walking on a nice day.

Some fuck up with the perspective... but I am still learning.

Let me know if you can give me some tips.
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Comments: 16

Murklaw [2012-04-20 16:45:49 +0000 UTC]

Hi I really like this piece and I think the perspective is almost spot on in the background. The only thing that I think needs improving is the height of the two figures, which is maybe what is throwing the composition out a little. This might be helpful I think [link]

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omegasama In reply to Murklaw [2012-04-20 20:12:50 +0000 UTC]

You do realize that this image is like 4 years old, right?

I do appreciate critiques, I would just prefer if they were given with my current art.

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Murklaw In reply to omegasama [2012-04-20 21:10:57 +0000 UTC]

I am sorry, I only looked at the date once I had commented and didn't see the point in removing it. You have a nice gallery.

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Blakey-mads [2011-06-11 07:25:43 +0000 UTC]

I personally like the background, perspective fuck-up or not. And I also like the way you draw your characters - I can't even draw men properly without them look like women! You're an amazing illustrator.

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DoubleDead [2011-05-29 03:21:18 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Emaleya [2010-08-18 16:45:48 +0000 UTC]

I know this isn't helpful, but I kinda like the perspective fuck up, makes the scene look a little trippy/dream-like/ unreal which I think is kinda suitss steampunk

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SKOpseudonym [2010-04-02 07:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice. I like the composition.

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genghis-koo [2010-01-30 00:09:40 +0000 UTC]

I love this! Although there is a lot of detail, the black and white keeps it simple, with a lot of contrast. +fav!

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omegasama In reply to genghis-koo [2010-01-30 00:56:34 +0000 UTC]

^^ thanks.

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chaos-angel5 [2009-12-03 18:29:26 +0000 UTC]

very nice piece ^^ they look very relaxed.

some tips for the perspective, hmm, i think the road should be going inwards a little bit more in the back, and the guy whos more in the background should be higher up then the other since hes farther back.

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MerKatch [2009-12-02 06:44:38 +0000 UTC]

Smex <3

*kicks the stuffing out of Ultimatmus*

there we go <3
i always adore your black and white stuff~
i'm not sure if this will help, but the ground closest to the two men, maybe you could shade it a little, or make it look like they're farther up, the sidewalk does that perfectly, shadows maybe?

s'all from the amateur XP

awesome as always Nattykinz ^^

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omegasama In reply to MerKatch [2009-12-02 06:51:45 +0000 UTC]

*hugs* thanks a bunch Katchy dear ^^

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MerKatch In reply to omegasama [2009-12-02 06:53:48 +0000 UTC]

yayhugs ^.^ N/P at all~ <3

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omegasama In reply to MerKatch [2009-12-02 06:55:51 +0000 UTC]

X3 *hugs* Now I sleep!

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Ultimatmus [2009-12-02 06:13:55 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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omegasama In reply to Ultimatmus [2009-12-02 06:23:34 +0000 UTC]

fuck off.

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