Comments: 7
PlumeObscure [2020-02-01 22:03:28 +0000 UTC]
lol, the old woman's face made me laugh XD Such contempt.
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EmperorNortonII [2017-03-15 03:26:38 +0000 UTC]
I wonder where the story is going from here!
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OMustDie In reply to EmperorNortonII [2017-03-17 01:20:19 +0000 UTC]
Unfortunately nowhere in this instance, but I'm happy that you wonder!
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Karma-Beetle [2017-03-14 23:32:37 +0000 UTC]
Like the story so far!
One thing I might suggest though, maybe use an older looking lady?
Her skin looks pretty youthful
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OMustDie In reply to Karma-Beetle [2017-03-17 01:19:03 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you do! I agree about her skin. Will definitely fix that next time.
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