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OMustDie — Envy 2

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Published: 2017-03-14 05:50:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 7569; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 37
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Description The young woman's let out an exasperated sigh and moved to the other end of the bus stop. Predictably, she produced her smart phone and began to adjust her hair, unaware of the show she is displaying to her fellow transit rider. Dolores' beady, bland eyes descended down to the young lady's exposed stomach, and felt that Fire rage with catastrophic intensity. On that flat midriff, a jewel adorned in the navel winked in the sunlight at the beldam. Memories of events that never happened flooded her mind. False memories of freely basking in sunsets, receiving love from the handsome boys, and of ultimate self-respect were only kindling for the envious rage that fills her now. Clenching her aging wrists, Dolores could only stare at that carelessly exposed, but exquisitely jeweled navel, lamenting what could be.
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Comments: 7

PlumeObscure [2020-02-01 22:03:28 +0000 UTC]

lol, the old woman's face made me laugh XD Such contempt.

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buttoneer [2017-03-21 20:57:27 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to swap seats with Dolores

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EmperorNortonII [2017-03-15 03:26:38 +0000 UTC]

I wonder where the story is going from here!

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OMustDie In reply to EmperorNortonII [2017-03-17 01:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately nowhere in this instance, but I'm happy that you wonder!

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timonandpumba In reply to OMustDie [2021-12-06 12:28:16 +0000 UTC]

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Karma-Beetle [2017-03-14 23:32:37 +0000 UTC]

Like the story so far!

One thing I might suggest though, maybe use an older looking lady?

Her skin looks pretty youthful

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OMustDie In reply to Karma-Beetle [2017-03-17 01:19:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you do! I agree about her skin. Will definitely fix that next time.

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